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FOrbidden l D block l
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sun Apr 17, 2005 8:11 am


Express yourself, and help others that ask for help in expressing themselves as well
whee
PostPosted: Sun Apr 17, 2005 8:15 am


A suggestion from a fellow member:

Sephiroth Incarcina Night
i suggest kinda..maybe add another two lines to finish conveying the ain thought of the complete sadness of said poem..i guess in a way.. Let your Emotions Become One With The Poem

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FOrbidden l D block l
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sun Apr 17, 2005 8:20 am


And here is my own piece, it doesn't rhyme, but I don't feel it should have to

Tonight I am dreaming, dreaming of you and I
Wrapped tight in your warm embrace
Feeling gloriously safe, nothing can touch us here
Taking in oyur smell, falling deeper with you
Keep me here forever, please don't fly away
PostPosted: Sun Apr 17, 2005 10:05 am


RyokoSama
And here is my own piece, it doesn't rhyme, but I don't feel it should have to

Tonight I am dreaming, dreaming of you and I
Wrapped tight in your warm embrace
Feeling gloriously safe, nothing can touch us here
Taking in oyur smell, falling deeper with you
Keep me here forever, please don't fly away


the long a sound that follows it all the way through makes it seem to rhyme. your* and i like it *nods*

Jay0327
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FOrbidden l D block l
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sun Apr 17, 2005 5:42 pm


Thankies
whee
PostPosted: Sun Apr 17, 2005 7:22 pm


untitled for now

as the emptiness fills this space
sin stained tears roll down my face
my mind begins to whirl
as my heart continues it's downward swirl

i clench my teeth
as flames come from beneath
i try my best
to pass the test

i feel myself begin to fail
following the path to hell
its consumes me from the inside
oh how i need this pain to subside

i need you to show me your light
help me care to win this fight
without you i cant succeed
i'll just lie here and watch myself bleed

wheres your protection
your sweet perfection
when indeed
i surely need

your guiding light
to win my fight

Jay0327
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FOrbidden l D block l
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sun Apr 17, 2005 8:10 pm


if that was mine I'd call it mother

It's very good, I like it
PostPosted: Mon Apr 18, 2005 9:28 am


Count Jules
untitled for now

as the emptiness fills this space
sin stained tears roll down my face
my mind begins to whirl
as my heart continues it's downward swirl

i clench my teeth
as flames come from beneath
i try my best
to pass the test

i feel myself begin to fail
following the path to hell
its consumes me from the inside
oh how i need this pain to subside

i need you to show me your light
help me care to win this fight
without you i cant succeed
i'll just lie here and watch myself bleed

wheres your protection
your sweet perfection
when indeed
i surely need

your guiding light
to win my fight
I'd call it.. the need of a lover

Sephiroth Incarcina Night
Vice Captain


xPhantom Darkx

PostPosted: Mon Apr 18, 2005 7:19 pm


ok iv got a funny one, "work that body! work that body! dont ya go hurt no body!" blaugh
PostPosted: Mon Apr 18, 2005 7:24 pm


lets go get some cucumbers out of the friged,one or two me and you lets go eat them lets go eat them!

xPhantom Darkx


Jargoss
Crew
PostPosted: Mon Apr 18, 2005 8:08 pm


hey guys I'm trying to make a new sig could someone write a "short" poem to put on there?
PostPosted: Mon Apr 18, 2005 8:12 pm


I'm writing it off the top of my head:

Sullen in a darkened corner
The rain falls all around
A single item brings light to my eye
The black rose, my symbol and my . . . . <-- think of a suitible word and you got yourself a poem
whee
sweatdrop

FOrbidden l D block l
Vice Captain


Jargoss
Crew
PostPosted: Mon Apr 18, 2005 8:15 pm


RyokoSama
I'm writing it off the top of my head:

Sullen in a darkened corner
The rain falls all around
A single item brings light to my eye
The black rose, my symbol and my . . . . <-- think of a suitible word and you got yourself a poem
whee
sweatdrop
blight, right, fight, ... nvm I'm scrapping the thing great poem though
maybe we should have a contest to have an official guild poem?
PostPosted: Mon Apr 18, 2005 8:17 pm


Contest sounds uberty cooly

You really like that??
sweatdrop
I honestly just typed that, as it came
>.>;;;;;

FOrbidden l D block l
Vice Captain


Jargoss
Crew
PostPosted: Mon Apr 18, 2005 8:22 pm


RyokoSama
Contest sounds uberty cooly

You really like that??
sweatdrop
I honestly just typed that, as it came
>.>;;;;;

I have a tendency to like gut reaction stuff better than well thought over shtuff sweatdrop
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