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Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 9:34 am
This was my last fan fiction, taking place on Warped and other places, of course I made Ryan a key character.The murderer WAS going to be Brent, but Panic! just HAD to kick him out, didn't they?In the middle of my fan fic, so I took a week off causing people to wait, to think of a new twist.And thought of a new one.Well, enjoy.
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Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 9:35 am
This is going to be chapter 1 of Life On The Murder Scene.Hope you enjoy it. Note: Most chapters are going to be one point of view the whole thing.This chapter will switch from Rivers' to Pete's in the middle.Just so you know. wink
CHAPTER 1: The Murder
Rivers' POV
I walked down the dark street.The glimmer of tour buses reflecting off of my thick rimmed glasses.It was quiet.I began to compose a few songs in my head as I walked.Thinking of more demos I can make and post them up on my blog. "RIVERSSSS" I turned around to see a guy running toward me.About the same height as me.As soon as he reached me he looked up at me.Pushing up his glasses a bit. "Hi Mikey." "Ello Rivers.Mind if I walk with you?" "Well actually-" "Great, I'm bored out here to." I sighed and just continued walking. "Me and Frankie watched Weezer perform yesterday, you guys rocked." "Frankie?" "Oh, he's the guitarist in my band, My Chemical Romance." "Ok..." "You don't really hang out with other bands do you?" "Well, I hang out with you.And then there's Fall Out Boy and Ryan Ross from Panic! At The Disco.Thats about it though." About this time Mikey pulled out an iPod. "Got any Kiss?" Mikey laughed as I said this. "You serious?" I simply nodded.Mikey shook his head. Mikey slipped the device back into his jacket pocket.Thats when I noticed some commotion over near Fall Out Boy's tour bus as we passed it. "Stop."I whispered as we both walked quietly toward it. As soon as we crept nearer two shots were fired.I watched the victim slink down onto the ground.The shooter took on good look at me and ran. "Was that-" Mikey ran toward the victim. "Oh my god, get Pete." "But..." "JUST GET HIM!" It was too late.Pete had come running out of the bus.Along with the rest of his band.
Pete's POV
I ran out sleepily.The gun shots had woken me up. "Whats going on?"I asked.They wouldn't answer. "She has no pulse." I looked down at Mikey.He was holding a girl.Who was obviously not alive. I rubbed my eyes and took a step forward. "T-Terra?" Mikey looked up at me. "I'm sorry Pete..." I choked back tears and walked over to her. "Does anyone know CPR?" Everyone shook their heads. I watched as lights came on various tour buses around.And people crept toward us. "Terra, wake up.Wake up.Don't leave me now...don't leave me now." Mikey, Rivers, Joe, and Andy helped keep people away.Patrick helped me with Terra. "Who would do such a thing?" "I don't know Patrick..." I looked into the crowd of people.Even Dirty looked sad. "I'm calling the police!" I looked to my right to see Ryan.A cell phone in hand dialing the numbers 9-1-1 into his phone.William managed to get to where Ryan, Patrick, and I were. "Let me try CPR." Pete and Patrick moved aside and watched William's attempt at CPR.He failed sadly. "Pete, I think she's really gone." "She can't be.Not now." The crowd moved out of the way as the police started to pull in.Along with a coroner. "Why didn't you get ambulance?"I asked Ryan.Ryan stared down at me. "Cause you couldn't revive here." I sat and watched as they picked up Terra and put her onto a stretcher and pushed her into the back of a van-type-vehicle. An officer walked over to Mikey, William, Rivers, Ryan, and I. "I want you to come with us." "Who?" "All of you." Ryan looked confused.He chimed in. "What why?" "Ok, you five are suspects for the murder of Terra Wilson.Now come with us willingly.We don't want to pull out handcuffs, do we?" We all nodded and walked into the various police cars. All of our band members waved as we were driven away.
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Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 9:36 am
This is going to be all in Mikey's point of view.Enjoy.&3
CHAPTER 2
I sat in the dark room along with William, Ryan, and Rivers.Pete was currently inside, getting questioned about Terra's murder.He must be so depressed.From the stories I've heard about how they got together.Andy must be really sad too. The door had opened.Pete was greeted with the questions from everyone. He let out a deep sigh. "Let's just say...that was the scariest moment in my life." We backed away from Pete so that he could sit down. "Cuomo, Way.Come here." Rivers and I turned toward the guard that stood by the door.We waltzed into the white room.Lights everywhere.The door closed behind me as we walked down to the end of a table and sat down. A man stood in front of the table we were at pacing.Back and forth.Back and forth. "So, both of you tell me everything you did yesterday.Beginning to end.Rivers, you go first." I turned my chair toward Rivers.He looked scared shitless. "Umm...ok.I woke up.Read a book.I went out with my band, Weezer, and we walked around a bit.And then played a show for 30 minutes.And then left to our tour bus.And at about midnight I decided to take a walk.Mikey came over and decided on his own that I needed company..." He gave me a slight glare.I sank into my chair and continued to listen. "Then we heard some commotion near Fall Out Boy's bus and thats where we saw Terra get shot." The man walked over to Rivers. "How tall was the person who shot her?"Asked the man. "Not that tall." "Eyes?" "Didn't see them." I could tell that Rivers was lying.He did see who shot Terra...why wasn't he telling the man? The man was literally in Rivers' face with questions. "I see that you aren't very tall.Did you shoot Terra?" "NO!" "Come on!I know you did!" "I DIDN'T!" Rivers stood up.His hands behind his head.He started paced. "Just go.Both of you." I walked out behind Rivers.Catching one last glance at the man.He had a smile on his face. Taking one last step into the room. "Aw, little Weezer boy looks scared." I stood back.Watching Rivers turn to William.A glare in his eyes. "Excuse me?" "You heard me." "What the ******** is your problem?" "Your ******** you Rivers ******** you up your Weezin' a**." Rivers took a punch that hit William to the ground.Pete and Ryan began to pull back William and Rivers from going at eachother. "What's gotten into you, William?" "ME?!?Rivers was the one who's finger prints were all over the gun that shot Terra!" Everyone's eyes fell upon Rivers. No way.He couldn't of.
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Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 9:37 am
This is going to be in Rivers' view again.Hope you enjoy this chapter.&3
CHAPTER 3
"Rivers Cuomo, how does it feel to be the number one suspect of a murder?" I looked up at Pete who held a video camera in his hand. "Oh, shut up." Pete chuckled and placed the camera down as he sat down next to me. "Why are we leaving again?" "Cause there's better investigators in LA.And thats where we're all going to court." I looked at Pete who nodded dumbly. Mikey approached us gasping between gasps. "LOOK AT BOB AND FRANKIE!" I had gotten to know the other band members, so I now can have a conversation about our silly band members without asking who the person was. So we both glanced over at Bob and Frankie.Frankie was holding a broken camera, Bob was just yelling at Frankie.Frankie just stood there and took his lecture. "What happened?" "Well, Frankie went over to Bob with his camera.Bob doesn't like being in front of cameras...so he punched it out." Pete and I just started laughing.Mikey laughed too. Until the sound of the intercom came on,"Flight 136 is now boarding."
We sat on the plane.Pete to the right of me, by the window.And Mikey to the left of me, by the aisle.I precisely sat in the middle.My fellow band members way up near the front end of the plane.Everyone who is a suspect's band was coming along. Everyone got their peanuts and we took off.I glanced over at Pete, he had already fallen asleep.Mikey sat buckled.Even when the no-seatbelt sign was on. "I'm afraid of planes."He assured me.Somehow I found it amusing. In front of us were Gerard, Frankie, and Ray from My Chemical Romance.All three listening to iPods. "I have an idea..."I whispered to Mikey.He looked at me. "What?" I opened my packet of peanuts and let them scatter on the board in front of me. "Lets flick them." A smile came across Mikey's face as we started to flick them at his band members. "WHAT THE ******** IS YOUR PROBLEM?!?" Frankie screamed at us turning around. We snickered and sank low in our seats. The rest of the ride to LA was pretty boring.Until we got to our hotel.
"Hey, anyone wanna go to 7/11?" I sat in the lobby and looked up at Pete.I stood up and walked over to him. Pete looked around. "Guess its you and me." We walked out of the hotel and down a couple of blocks to a nearby 7/11. "I'll wait outside."I told Pete as he walked into the store. I stood there for a few moments.Suddenly hearing the faint sound of music. The sound of my song,'Only In Dreams' was coming from behind the store. I stuck my hands into my pockets and walked around the store to the back.Only to see two guys. One had long blonde hair and a beanie.He was tall and skinny. "This song is so gay, disney gay." I looked up at them. The other one had short brown hair and wore a backwards baseball cap.He was short and stout, he stood near a boombox. "Whoa, ********' Rivers Cuomo in the flesh." "H-Hi."I stuttered.For some reason they looked intimidating. "Oh, let me introduce myself.I'm Jay and right there is ********' Silent Bob." Silent Bob nodded as if he was saying,'Sup.' "So what are you doin' here Cuomo?" "A suspect for a murder.Long story...why are you hanging out at a 7/11?" "Cause there's nothing else to do.Well that and snoochi bootchies." He pulled out a Ziploc bag that held two joints in it. I shook my head, rejecting the weed. "RIVERSSS!" I heard my name being called.It was probably Pete. As soon as I turned around to leave, I heard a different voice. "Hey, wait up." I turned around to see Silent Bob talking to me.Holding a cigarette in hand. "If you really are charged for murder, and didn't do it.Then ******** find more evidence.Make them prove you innocent.Okay, man?" I nodded and ran to Pete. "Where the hell were you?" "Nooooootch!" Pete gave me a look like I was crazy.I simply smiled as we walked down back to the hotel. "Did you tell the officer the truth, you know when you were questioned?" I nodded. "Well, I didn't.The truth is that day me and Terra had a huge fight.She went to stay with Ryan that night.I didn't even get to say sorry..." Pete was choking back tears. I stopped walking. "Wait a second, she stayed with Ryan?" Pete nodded, soon he realized it. Oh s**t.
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Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 9:38 am
Pete's point of view this chapter.Enjoy.<3
CHAPTER 4
I sat on the couch of the hotel room.More scared than ever. What if Ryan killed Terra? I kept saying over and over in my head.Glancing over at Rivers.Who was hunched over a notepad.Writing. Figures. The song-writing junkie. "What'ya writing?" "Stuff." "A song?" "No." Rivers eyes never left the notepad.I got up from where I was sitting and attempted to see what he was writing. "PERSONAL SPACE, MAN." I stepped back from Rivers.He crawled further away on the bed.And continued to write. "Why can't you tell me?" "Cause." "Cause why?" "CAUSE I CAN'T!" I quivered my lower lip so that it turned into a pout.Rivers simply rolled his eyes.And once again, began to write. I just dove for the notebook without thinking twice. "ARE YOU ******** DRUNK?!?" "LET ME SEE WHAT YOU'RE WRITING!" We were basically wrestling for the notebook. "Umm.Hi?" I turned around only to see Mikey.Standing in the doorway. "Brokeback Mountain 2?"He said slyly.An evil smile on his face. Rivers cheeks were bright red.I snatched the notebook out of his hands. "We were wrestling.FOR THIS." I looked down at it.All it said was,"Find more evidence." repeatedly. Rivers snatched it from my hands back into his own. "Some advice I got the other day." "From who?"Mikey asked now sitting on the bed along with us. "This guy...what was his name...SILENT BOB." I looked at Rivers in disbelief. "Thats a movie character...like.From Clerks, Mallrats, Jay and Silent Bob Strike Back, etc." Rivers nodded."THATS WHY I SAID NOOOOTCH, DUMBASS." I couldn't help but laugh.Thats right, Rivers response to where he had been was 'Nooootch!'.All made sense now. "Rivers Cuomo ******** said 'NOOOOTCH'." We all burst into fits of laughter after my comment. "ANYWAYS, Silent Bob told me to find more evidence prove ourselves innocent.Cause we all didn't do it." We all nodded like a bunch of bobbleheads who had just been flicked. "One of us needs to confront Ryan about Terra staying over." I immediately raised my hand.I needed to know who killed the love of my life.I needed to know.
I stood outside Ryan's door.Afraid to knock.Finally, I built up the courage to. "Ryan?Its Pete." "Come on in, Petah." I walked in nervously.Ryan was sitting on the bed.With his acoustic guitar in hand.Strumming randomly.As soon as our eyes met he stopped and placed the guitar on the ground. "Something you wanna talk about?" "Umm.Yeah.Before Terra was you know...killed.She told me she was staying in your tour bus." "Really?The last time I saw her was the morning of the accident." "Why did you call it an accident?" "Cause it wasn't supposed to happen." I eyed Ryan suspiciously.He just gave me the same look. "Why, do you think I killed Terra?Why would I do that Pete?You tell me." Ryan's cold stare bore into my own eyes.Turning the anger back around. "Ryan.You must have a girlfriend or something.What if she was just snatched away from you.And you had a fight before.And you didn't even get to say sorry." I didn't notice the tears rolling down my face.Before I knew it.I was enrolled in one of Ryan's hugs. "It would seriosly suck, man." "Very sympathetic, Ryan." "No problem." We both chuckled and stopped hugging. "What's up with all the Brokeback antics today?" Ryan looked at me oddly. "Long story." "Oh, speaking of girlfriends.My girlfriend, Sarah, is coming tommorrow morning." "S-Sarah?McCarthy?" "Yeah.Why...you know her?" Oh, do I know her.
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Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 9:39 am
Yes, yes.Believe the hype.Ryan's girlfriend IS the Sarah from my previous fan fic.And this chapter is going to be ALL in her point of view.Yay.
CHAPTER 5
I stood in the airport terminal.Glancing from left to right, searching for Ryan.Suddenly, my vision was forced to be black by someone who had put their hands over my eyes. "Guess who?" "Ryan?" "Nope." "Then who-" The man spun me around before I could finish my last sentence.I found myself staring into the face of Peter Wentz.My second love.The one I spent drunk on New Years' with.The one who held me when I was down.The man I abandoned with just a goodbye.Pete... "Long time, eh?" "Yeah.Like..seven years." "So where'd you run off to?" "Places.None in general." I picked up my bags as we walked out of the airport. "I only brought carry-ons.So...yeah.Rental?" "Already got one." He smiled as he walked out to a shining blue porshe. "DAMNNN." "Nice, right?" "So what are we going to do now?" "Well, since its 9 PM.I'll take you back to your hotel so that you can chill with Ryan.And then, tommorrow we'll all catch up on our way to the funeral." I looked at Pete.Something seemed sad about him when he mentioned funeral.Pete continued on with his conversation with himself. "And then Ryan has you all of tommorrow.I'm gonna probably leave the funeral after I speak.It'll be too much." I nodded.I still couldn't believe that Terra was dead.My best friend in the world.Dead.I knew that Pete couldn't have done it.Never ever. There was an awkward silence the rest of the way to the hotel. I grabbed my bags and followed Pete to Ryan's room.I knocked continuously hearing nothing.A sigh escaped my lips. "I guess I'll stay with you and call Ryan every-so-often." Pete smiled and walked down the hall and entered his room. "I love being rich." I grinned at Pete and placed my bags over by the recliner chair.I felt his eyes on me as he stood at the other side of the room. "Checkin' me out?" "Heck yes, I am." I giggled as he walked toward me. "So how long have you and Ryan dated?" "Two years." "Really?Wow, thats before I signed them." "Yep." There was a pause. "Wanna have sex?" I stared at Pete.Did he just ask what I think he asked? "Umm, excuse me?" "You heard me." "Well, no." "Why not?" "Cause, I'm dating someone." "Oh, come on!I bet you've seen those pictures on the internet!You wanna see it in person!DON'T YOU?!?" "Are you drunk?" "If drinking Mikey's leftover coffee means drunk, then yes.I am." I couldn't help but chuckle at that.Pete tackled me onto the bed.Tickling me ferouciously. "STOP IT!IT TICKLES!" "MY POINT!" We rolled around on the bed.I kicked and screamed in laughter. After about ten minutes of tickling.He stopped.Our faces mili-centemeters apart.I found myself kissing Pete. Damn you Peter.
I lay in Pete's bed.Pete obviously taking a shower.Everything about the night before rushed back to me.I remembered how we only made out.Not anything else.Maybe thats what Pete wanted.Just to kiss and see if its right.It did feel right.But, I'm with Ryan.I can't do anything to hurt Ryan. "How do I look?" Pete asked as he walked out of the bathroom in a black suit.His eyes caked with eyeliner. "Hot."I found myself saying.His grin turned wider. "You're turn to get changed."He said as he grabbed his comb from the bathroom and sat down on the bed.I smiled at him before grabbing my dress and wandering into the deserted bathroom.
I stepped out of the black lemo.Only to be greeted with hugs and kisses of old friends and Terra's family members. "Terra would've loved to see you one last time." I found myself crying.Ryan stood behind me wiping my tears away. "Its going to be okay, Sarah." I nodded and held his hand. "SARAH!" I turned to see Joe.The happiest look on his face.I was shocked, but I knew I would have to face him somehow. "JOE!" I let go of Ryan's hand and jumped into Joe's arms. "Where did you go?Why did you leave?Why did you only leave me with a NOTE?!?" I bit my bottom lip and thought of an answer for all of the questions. "I went west.I left because everything there reminded me of baby Ellie.And the life I could've given her.And I loved you so much then.I couldn't just say goodbye.So I had to leave a note." "But, but.You went to see Pete!" "I loved you more.I couldn't stand saying goodbye to you.Pete was different.I could say goodbye to him.And I did." Joe nodded.I knew that he understood.I endorsed him into one of my hugs. "Good to see you again, Joe." "Good to see you too."
We all stood around Terra's casket.Pete standing in front of it.His hands in front of him.Ryan's arm around me.Cradling me sofly against his side as we listened to Pete's speech. "Terra was a photographer.She'd take pictures of anything.Trees, friends, the 'scene', even my p***s." The whole crowd seemed to laugh.Except for Terra's parents. "She was definitaley the nicest person on planet earth.Nicer than anyone.I'm lucky to have known her.I remember falling for her as she dated Andy.And how much I pursued her.And how I succeeded.Thank you Andy." Everyone took a glance at Andy.To find a tear coming down his cheek as he stood attentivley. "But, now.I don't know who would do such a thing.I-I...just don't know." He kneeled down and picked up a clump of dirt. "Terra never said goodbye.She would always say see you soon.Now its my turn to say it." He tossed the handful of dirt on the casket.I heard him whisper the words. "See you soon."As he walked off his hands stuck in his pockets. "He's gonna be ok, sweetie." "You sure?" "Yeah." I got my turn to walk over and throw dirt on the casket. "Rest in peace, Terra."Is all I said before I walked towards the lemo that was sent to pick up me and the rest of Panic!
I lay in Ryan's bed in the hotel room.My eye make-up smeared from crying. Ryan was on his cell phone.Talking while in the bathroom.The door for the bathroom wide open. I tried to listen.Only hearind Ryan talk. "What?!?....Why tonight?....But.....I understand....Ok, bye." He walked out.A look on his face.I couldn't analyze the feeling shown.Trying so hard to. "Something wrong, baby?" "Naw." He layed down next to me.Kissing me softly. "I love you." I smiled at him.Oh, how long I've waited for him to say that.I kissed him back.Telling him that I too, loved him. As we kissed he slowly positioned himself on top of me.Pressing something cold and hard against my chest. "What the?" He ignored my question and kept kissing me.I caught a glimpse of what he had pressed up against me, it was a gun.A cold silver revolver. As soon as he noticed that I saw it he covered my mouth. "Shut up." "What the hell are you doing?" It was all muffled from his hand.Which I attempted licking to get him to remove the hand.He didn't though. I felt a sharp pain going through me.I noticed that he had shot it.Fired the gun.Right through me. He climbed off of the bed.Shocked at his own doing.I lay there gasping for breath. Ryan walked back into the bathroom.I could tell he was crying.The front door flew open.I found Pete running over to me. "Oh my god, oh my god." I tried to say something.I couldn't say anything though. "Who?Just tell me who?" "Behind..." Pete glanced behind himself to find Ryan.Pointing a gun at him. "I'm so sorry." He fired the gun.The look on Pete's face as he lay there was sad.But happy. A confused feeling.I felt myself getting more and more tired. "Ryan..." He looked over at me. "I'm sorry, he's making me do all of this.But...I get jumpy.And...I don't know.I was supposed to shoot Pete.But I shot his girlfriend...and I don't know.Its him.Not me.He's making me do all this." I struggled to keep my eyes open.I stared at Ryan as if he was crazy. Who was he? I thought.I watched Ryan walk to the corner.Taking out a gun and pointing it at himself.One last tear dropped to the ground as he fired it one last time. My eyes closed.Staying shut for all eternity.
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Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 9:40 am
This is the LAST chapter.Short fan fic, right?Well, don't worry.I'll be starting my next STORY on Tuesday.Actually, I'm just gonna post the prologue.But stilll.Be happy and this chapter is gonna be awesome.Fun brainstorming it.Oh yeah, Mikey's point of view.And I don't like happy endings. >: )
LAST CHAPTER
"Who would you like to call to the stand?"The judge boomed to Pete's attorney.Pete sat his hands in his lap.He was sad, I could tell from his head kind of just hanging downward. "Michael Way."He said.I shuddered at the use of my full name and walked up to the stand.I bit my lip and glanced over at bandmates, and friends who sat scattered everywhere.Everyone was staring at me. "Where were you exactly the night Terra died?" "I was walking with Rivers.Just a midnight walk.Nothing special.We're not gay." Oh god, was I nervous.I was talking gibberish.Letting my words just roll off my tongue without me thinking twice. The attorney nodded and continued on with his questions. "Where did you find Terra?" "By Fall Out Boy's bus.Rivers saw who shot her.Didn't you Rivers?"I looked over at Rivers.He nodded quickly. "You may step off of the stand."The attorney said.I scurried off quicker than a cheetah after prey and sat down next to Rivers.Right behind poor Pete. "Anyone else you'd like to call to the stand?"The judge questioned again to the attorney."Yes, I'd like to call up Peter Wentz." A collective gasp happened in the courtroom.Pete looked up confused."Wh-What?"He questioned."Just go up there, its okay."The attorney assured him.Pete took one glance at us and walked up to the stand and sat down.He was pale.He looked even more nervous than we were. "How did you and Terra meet?" "We were next door neighbors..." "When exactly did you two start seeing eachother." Pete bit his lip and spilled out the story of them.How she had been engaged to Andy.And Pete seducing her a week before the wedding.As they experienced the ups and downs of a serious relationship.They were set to be together forever.And how they had gotten into a fight earlier the day that Terra was gunned down.The story even made the judge shed a tear or two.Pete found himself crying on the stand. "Court will have a ten minute recess as the jury decides."The judge said as Pete walked off of the stand.Wiping tears from his face.Rivers tugged on my sleeve and dragged me out of the courthouse. "I'm going to object."Rivers said quickly. "Whoa, what?" "If Pete's guilty.I'm going to object.I should have told them who killed Terra and Sarah when I was on the stand." "Wasn't it Ryan?" "Kinda.Ryan's not normal.I think he was brainwashed or something.I don't know if thats the way to put it, cause that sounds pretty lame.But there's something wrong with him." "Then who 'brainwashed' Ryan?" The name rolled off of his tongue as if he were speaking a secret.As it was in a whisper.I just stood there.Shocked, scared. "Don't tell anyone.And if he finds out, I'm dead." I nodded and looked at my watch. "Oh snap, its been ten minutes.Lets head back in there."And with that we both wandered back into the courtroom as the judge came back in."All rise."The balif said as we all stood there and then sat back down as the judge did. "Has the jury reached a verdict?" "Yes, we have your honor.We find the defendent guilty of all charges." Everyone's jaw dropped. No way, no ******** way.That did not just happen.That did NOT happen.And before I knew it Rivers had stood up and Pete was being put into handcuffs. "I...erm...object." "To what Mr.Cuomo?Court is already ajorned." "To Pete being guilty.I have more evidence that I should have told you.And who really killed Terra." I turned around to see the brainwasher hurrying out.As everyone was staring at Rivers. I glanced up at Rivers before making my way out of the court room.I followed him for awhile until he stopped and turned around. "Did he tell you?"The man said with a glare in his eyes as he walked closer. "Y-Yeah...."I did not just say that.But how could I lie to him?That would be the hardest thing in the whole world.It is the hardest. The man smiled at me.Something about it made me smile.Was...was he brainwashing me? "You're not gonna kill me are you?"I asked shakily. "Now, now.Why would I do that?" "Rivers said thats what you said on the phone..." "Well, I'm not going to kill you.Ryan might.If I tell him to." I bit my lip.This conversation was scary, and awkward.Talking with a murderer.Not a fun thing to do in your life, I don't suggest it. Rivers ran out.Cops behind him."There he is!"He pointed to the man in front of me as the police ran toward him.He just smiled and put me in a headlock.Pete being pulled out by guards still in handcuffs.The man held a knife up to my neck. "You don't think I'll do it, do you?"The man questioned the cops.My breathing became fast.If only I knew Tai-Kwon-Do... The knife made a small cut on my neck.I closed my eyes and bit my lip.If I were going to die.The cops had better get him.Fast, now. He let the knife slide deep into my throat.Causing me to cough as he dropped me.My hands flew up to my own throat. "YOU SON OF A b***h!"Pete screamed trying to run after the band member. The cops attempted to chase him but he was gone. Flashing me an evil smile as he got into a car with Ryan. And that was the last time we all saw Patrick Stump.
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Posted: Wed Jul 12, 2006 7:05 pm
eek That was the best thing I have ever read in my life.
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Posted: Fri Jul 14, 2006 1:07 pm
eek Patrick? PATRICK IS THE KILLER!? Ho my Gosh, never suspected that one... i mean it's patrick.
I <3ed it.
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Posted: Sun Jul 23, 2006 8:52 am
gonk PATRICK?! He was barely in the story. D: Awesome, though. I love the suspense. xD
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Posted: Sat Aug 12, 2006 9:38 am
I luv this fanfiction. Didn't you put it ib the other P!ATD guild?
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Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 5:04 pm
OMG i loved it, it was really good...didn't expect the ending
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Posted: Sat May 19, 2007 3:25 pm
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 2:37 pm
Amazing and you'd never have suspected Patrick!!! But I guess that made him the perfect killer...
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