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 Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 10:53 am
This is the song. I dont have a title but I am hoping the Soonee will help me with one. Also, I have the tune but I was too lazy to write the sheet music yet. Please tell me what you think of it!
For all these years
You've been so blind
You cant see past
Your own Desires
You walk away
From all thats good
You cant see the light...
For all this time I've been waiting for you
Your welcome home is like a dream come true
For me, and you.
Its life, Its truth.
What you dont know is that you
Have a
Home.
Some times I want
to just give up.
To drop right out
when I've had enough.
My lonliness is
choking me.
I'm slipping away
I'm afraid of dying
I've lost control
I'm falling from grace.
The teardrops stain my eyes.
But I refuse to cry.
For all this time I've been waiting for you
Your welcome home is like a dream come true
For me, and you.
Its life, Its truth.
What you dont know is that you
Have a
Home.
I wait for the day when
You come to see.
The last remnants of your family
And if were not that to you,
What are we...
(Piano Solo (Probably))
For all this time I've been waiting for you
Your welcome home is like a dream come true
Open your eyes and let the sun fill your soul.
What you never prized has now made you whole.
Whats hurt, is fixed.
Brand new, sweet bliss.
Glad that you found that you
Have a
Home.
For all those years
You were so blind
But now your here
And its alright.
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Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 5:12 pm
This is soo good!! I loves! heart You have to record it and send to us... xd
Are you a ranger?
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Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 5:30 pm
Extremely well written and appropriate.
-claps-
A beautiful song.
Well done.
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Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 8:07 pm
Chibibotan This is soo good!! I loves! heart You have to record it and send to us... xd Are you a ranger? yes I am a ranger. I was hoping maybe.............I could have someone with incredible music talent coughsooneecough to record it with me.
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Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 8:10 pm
Perrithia_Starr Chibibotan This is soo good!! I loves! heart You have to record it and send to us... xd Are you a ranger? yes I am a ranger. I was hoping maybe.............I could have someone with incredible music talent coughsooneecough to record it with me. Subtle proposal accepted. heart
I'm a not-so-active ranger, by the way. xD; I really need to activate myself more in the rangers forums ... I'm probably going to end up making another account on the rangers' forums, because there's a guy there who has found me somehow, and he stalks me at school. >>;
Anyway, Perrithia, sis, You already know my thoughts on your song. =D -squeals- It's so perfect!
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Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 9:03 pm
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Posted: Sat Jul 01, 2006 8:14 am
Actually last night, i was up until three in the morning trying to write the music for it and I only got through the first line of the first verse sweatdrop But I am going to have to work a lot harder if I am going to write up two copies of it. I think it might take me a while.... rofl
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Posted: Sat Jul 01, 2006 11:01 am
It would be nice to have that maybe like the guild's theme song.
-nodnods-
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Yukina_Raven Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Jul 01, 2006 12:51 pm
Aw, I love it! The lyrics are very pretty. Please, post the finished product! I'd love to hear it!
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Posted: Sat Jul 01, 2006 6:57 pm
Yukina_Raven Aw, I love it! The lyrics are very pretty. Please, post the finished product! I'd love to hear it! Same here! biggrin
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Posted: Sun Jul 02, 2006 9:47 am
R i z a It would be nice to have that maybe like the guild's theme song.
-nodnods- Wow. Omg. Really? I didnt expect for people to like it that much. its really that good???
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Posted: Sun Jul 02, 2006 11:16 am
Well the lyrics are, but let's hear it first. blaugh
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Yukina_Raven Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Jul 02, 2006 2:17 pm
Yesh the lyrics are good but put it to music first! 3nodding
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Posted: Sun Jul 02, 2006 4:28 pm
I havent really been at ease with the music lately and I can tell it is going to take a long time.
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Posted: Mon Jul 03, 2006 11:16 am
We can wait. I mean you're the first to come up with something like this! 3nodding
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