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The Sgt
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 9:19 pm


Nuclear



When people go to sleep
When the children get tucked
into their beds
something wakes them up

They look outside the window
A Nuclear missile goes over head
A blinding flash
Buildings desinegrate

Entire citys destroyed
By Nuclear explosives
Half the world is in control
Of Nuclear missiles

Brothers and sisters band together
Lets take them all down
Lets destroy all nuclear bombs
And Nuclear Missile makers

When you drop the bomb
You kill the god
Your child has born

When will you stop?
Stop killing us!
We don't want to die!!
Leave us alone!

We don't want to be desinegrated
By nuclear fusion
We want to live a peaceful life!!
And not have it interrupted
By war.


It's kinda a poem. I just didn't feel like making everything rhyme. So, I'm not classifying it as a Poem.
PostPosted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 10:20 pm


Dx no comments?

The Sgt
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 01, 2006 3:17 am


kewlio lol i love it hee hee hee i wrote one about nuclear too...but its more about destorying the world and we all go to mars sweatdrop hee hee
PostPosted: Sat Jul 01, 2006 5:38 pm


Nukular. =3

Um. I'm not really one to critique poetry, because I, myself, suck at it. I think it's nice, though. x3

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Demon-Kyle

PostPosted: Sat Jul 01, 2006 8:05 pm


Dude that kicks a**!
PostPosted: Wed Jul 05, 2006 6:45 pm


Not bad, really good. 3nodding It's right to the point, which is nice.

KirliaEmi


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PostPosted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 9:59 am


odd.
good job 3nodding
PostPosted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 4:46 am


cool! ur pretty good!! iam not the poetry type.. but i think it kicks a**! ^-^ mrgreen

Shaadiya


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PostPosted: Sat Jul 22, 2006 9:19 am


Gothic_Demon_Child
kewlio lol i love it hee hee hee i wrote one about nuclear too...but its more about destorying the world and we all go to mars sweatdrop hee hee


arent we a little destructive eek
PostPosted: Sat Oct 14, 2006 3:30 pm


No liky anti-war songs xp

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Demon-Kyle

PostPosted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 6:11 pm


Hey....
That guy has V also! crying
PostPosted: Thu Nov 30, 2006 7:19 pm


I thought it was pretty good.

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