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[nicole_isahottie13]

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A Perfect Night


The night is perfect,
standing under the moon and stars,
being embraced in your arms.
And as I put my lips to yours softly,
I think about how great this is,
how great you are.
I'm so lucky to be with you right now,
kissing under the stars.
I think about how much I love you,
knowing how much you love me too.
I'm wishing this night lasted forever,
because if it did I'd be happy,
because we're together.
I love you,
love your smile,
you touch,
the feel of your soft sexy lips as we kiss,
its bliss when im with you.
whether it be sitting around and talking,
deep in conversation.
or just being quiet,
admiring you,
and the way you make me feel.
and so I shall be sad when this night ends,
but i'll live another day,
just so this night can start all over again.