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blorkbarrowdeath

PostPosted: Sat Jul 08, 2006 1:19 am


((in advance, i speed type....so there may be misplaced letters and mispelled words))
A shrill wind ripped through the trees surrounding the acres and acres of forest and rolling hill that was The Mansion grounds. Cars of all makes and sizes were driving down the literl miles of driveway, pulling up to the ominis giant.
The mansion itself was a large forbidding strutcutre, consisting of three floors, and even a well stocked wine celler. Its many windows over looked the beautiful hills, and various gardens. the building itself was over 500 years old, and said to be haunted....

but that wasn't a bother...only little kids belive in storys about ghosts...right?

The cars -from which young men and woman were stepping out of now- were filled with the students of the Torigana School of Swordsmanship. The reason they were all going to the mansion -not only to celibrate another year of hard work-....but the main Dojo was being fixed up, painted, and then the mats were all being clean. And the Sensai -all though a very kind and happy man- wont hear of skipped work-days and time off.

Especcily not when one of the largest rooms in his house was outfitted with enough equipment to teach twice the amount of students he had!

Sensai Thor, a strong and quick witted man, was often scarey at sometimes, his dark eyes seeing more then they should, and an air was always about him, as if he was in deep thought.

He stood on the large marble stairs leading up to his house, leaning over the smooth stone railing, two sets of winding stairs leading up to him from both the left and right side.
"Afternoon, please, everyone up here." he shouted in his firm voice, scanning the cars of his students -both expert and fledgling- his fingers tapping out a beat
"We can begin right away....I hear a storm is coming..."



And this is where the twists and turns begin...please, Make your posts...
((after reading the next one))
PostPosted: Sat Jul 08, 2006 1:31 am


All PC's (player charecters) MUST PM their profile to me, and it will be posted here....no demon powers, no magic, and nothing but Humans...

do not spam post here...no RPing unless i am here to lead the story along....i dont need someone posting 8 times in a row, just to ruin my hard planned idea i was going to show =P

The Form must be filled out

Name:
Age:
Gender:
Apperence:
Personality:
History
NPCs....AKA me:

Name:Sensai Therrin Thor
Age: 46
Gender:Male
Apperence: Mr.Thor is a man of stone. He is well built, well toned muscles raceing across hos body. But he is not a Body builder type person, he is strong and quick, and proves it often enough when he gets a new head strong student. His hair is grey with black streaks, held back in a pony tail which stops mid-way between his shoulder blades. He often keeps a Jittie on his right side, a Katana on his left, and a wakazashi right under it. He enjoys wearing white clothes, such as his beloved uniform which he trains and teaches in. A thick black leather belt wraps around his stomech, and he wears a white glove on his right hand, covering an old scar.
Personality: Therrin doesnt budge when talked to with an attitude, and will often dish you "punishment" when talked to in a disrespectful way...But he respects everyone for their ideas, and a free speaking mind is rarely silenced in his presense, unless it is trully radical, or hurtful to him or others. he is kind, and when someone needs it, he will give them loving advice, in a soothing and peaceful tone. And when someone needs it, he will smack them on back of the head, telling them to grow up. In the end, he is one of the best Teachers of the Martil Art for miles.
History:He doesnt talk much about his past, often not answering questions when asked about it. He was once married, and even had a son....both very strong and determined...till they were both taken away from him, one by illness, and the other by a gruesome murder which almost had him put away for life....but there was no evidence of him commiting the crime.

Name:Ark
Age: 17
Gender:male
Apperence:He isnt well built, but he is quick. with a wiry body he often wears jeans that are baggy around the legs, and tight around the hips. He caries a gun with him at all times...an upgraded .44 colt, resembling more of an old western revolver then a colt. He keeps it tucked into his back pocket. His hair is a deep crimson, and his eyes are a shocking eletric blue
Personality:He is upbeat, and tends to enjoy a good fight. he is a trouble maker and gets into..well...trouble! he is very strict when it comes to his body, he takes good care of himself, eating healthy, and never doing anything -except fighting- that could harm it.
History: At a young age he saw his mother shot to death with the same gun he keeps with him. Sensai - all though not a fan of guns- understands what it is to love someone you love..and allows him to carry it with him. He looks up to Therrin Thor as a father figure...his own father a drunk

Name: Gin
Age: 12
Gender: Female
Apperence: small and cute, Gin is always happy and smiles with her violet eyes and long straight blonde hair. she wears a white dress with blue shorts underneath.
Personality: She has a very chipper personality and often hugs people and acts much younger then she is, and often, people think she is no older then 10
History: all though very positive, she understands the world is dangerous, and belives that by learning to fight, she can stop others from fighting.... She is very against seeing blood and violence, since she saw her friends get into fights all the time....she never liked it....


PCs:
Played by: Donatellothedog
Name: Jordan
Age: 15
Gender: male
Apperence: Skinny boy who lacks muscle strength. Has whiteish blonde hair and redish brown eyes. Stands about 5'6. Often wears layers because he gets cold easily. Clothes are normally light in color.
Personality: Lazy, doesn't like to do much of anything. Has strong fear of spiders and would be the one student who would madly dash out of a classroom if he saw one. Gets scared easily. Can be outgoing after you get to know him. Will seek revenge if you make him angry.
History: Lives with his step dad, doesn't have much of a 'bad' past or anything. Is known for high grades. Lives a normal life.
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Played by: Forest_imp45
Name: Mina Grey
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Apperence: She's kind of tall for a girl, about medium build. She has hair that falls to her elbows and has beed dyed a dark shade of turquoise. She wears a lot of green and black, but her faforite outfit to wear when practicing is loose loose black pants that tie at the ankles and a blue kimono-style top with black trim. she carries a katana across her back and generally wears her hair up in a bun so the opponent can't grab it in a match. She rarely ever wears shoes when she can help it, but when she does they're generally black boots that hit mid calf.
Personality: Genrerally nice and easygoing, she lets people decide where to go and just comes along for the ride. This however poses some problems because she has a tough time stading up for herself in social situations, however will take down people without a second thought in a match. She tends to want to keep her personal life separate from her fighting. She's smart but tends to let a lot of things effect her emotionally, and has a bit of growing up to do yet.
History: Raised by her grandparents in a rather small cultrual wasteland of a town, she struck out on her own to find excitement and interesting people at the age of 17. She's had a few experiences in her life, both good and bad, but is generally eager to find out what will happen in the future.
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Played by:HawkByrd
Name: Hawk
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Apperence: Muscled and well fit. He's around 5'9. Hawk has grey-ish blue hair from being dyed a couple times. His most astounding feature is his light white blue eyes. Likes to wear blue colors, or anything that will show off his fitness.
Personality: Often mean and a bully to everyone on the first go, likes to hang around those who are lesser than him to make himself feel good. Has a thing for wanting to protect people, and yet often hurts others in such attempts. Is a leader in most things, often gets in trouble. Hawk has a terrible temper, blows up at people easily if he is angered. Gets into fights often.
History: Lives with his dad in a large house with his many half brothers. Decided to get away from his dad for a bit and joined up in any school that would take him. Never knew his mother and doesn't remember anything about her.
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Played by: Camryn49
Name: Ayumi Todo

Age: 18

Gender: Female

Apperence: Meduim length, curly, flaming red hair. Tall and average body. Eyes that are bright orange and seem to jump out at you.

Personality: Quiet and observative. Talks only when spoken to. Has a military attitude. Stands up straight and adds to her height. Solem face and smiles only when amused by morbid jokes.

History: A juvenile delinquent, sent to a military camp after parents die in an assassination. After 7 years of military camp, Ayumi decided to give swordsmanship a try. After a year, it was time for a celebration.

blorkbarrowdeath


blorkbarrowdeath

PostPosted: Sat Jul 08, 2006 8:58 pm


Mr. Therrin Thor watched as his students mounted his mansions steps, a cold wind whipping past everyone and grabbing at clothes and hair. he ran his fingers in his hair and smiled "Welcome, students...Please, lets head inside." he moved over to the large ornate double oak doors, decorated with engravings of falcons taking flight. He turned the handles, and pushed the heavy doors open, a slightly resistant moan coming from them...

Warm light raced out to greet them as he lead everyone inside.
The main lobby of the Mansion was as amazeing and well lit as a luxory hotel. sparkling marble floors, with a small bubbling pool, roughly ten feet in diameter, the water clear and clean. exspensive leather chairs dotted the room, and two sets of double doors were in the lobby, one on the left, and the other on the right...

it all lead right up to a winding spiral stair case, which lead all the way up to the 3rd floor, and had a drop off point for the second floor....the site of the vaulted cieling was amazeing, resemlbing a gothic church.
he turned to his students "please, make your self at home here for a little bit while i make sure everything is in order" and with that, he walked off into the door on the left...
PostPosted: Sat Jul 08, 2006 9:35 pm


Hawk looked about the whole place in wide-eyed amazement. He had never in his life seen such riches like this. Actually, he'd never seen much in his life. His eyes stared at the stairs, moved down to the floor and up to the ceiling. This was truly heaven.

"Oh man..." He could barely even talk he was in so much wonderment. When he heard the teacher say to make himself at home a wide grin spread across his face. Home.

"What kind of mischievious things can I do here.." Hawk whispered to himself, being the first in the group to move out of a large circle. The top thing on his list was to look about, not really wander into rooms, but getting close enough to inspect everything.

You Will Rot

Shirtless Husband


Donatellothedog

PostPosted: Sun Jul 09, 2006 11:45 am


The wind caught Jordan and made him shiver, he pulled his arms in a tight fold as he looked around. The grandour of the whole place was very splendid and all...but...Jordan had a bad feeling about this. He always did.

The large falcons caught his attention, sure they looked nice and all...but...oh boy was he scared. They probably looked creepy at night.

The creeking door startled him to death, making him almost jump out of his shoes. Inside he shuffled in, staring at how large the place was. Oh...boy...the larger the place is the more spiders there are.

He sat his bag down on the floor for a bit, he wasn't much for heavy things. As the sensai left the room he got another chilling affect, he definitely did not like this place.
PostPosted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 4:14 pm


Ayumi Todo stood at the foot of the steps looking about her taking the whole scene in and sizing up her classmates. Slowing she began to climb her way up to the massive mansion.

She stayed silent and expressionless as she entered the first room. Some of the decour actually gave her a shiver, which surprised her.

"This could prove to be an interesting event...." she thought to herself as she leaned against a wall with her arms folded across her chest.

Ayumi usally wears milltary atire, but for the event, she was wearing a short flowy black skirt, black corset that had ribbon criss crossing in the front. Her shoes were her black, shiny army boots.

Camryn49
Vice Captain


forest_imp45
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 5:05 pm


Mina stepped in the door way and had to clamp her jaw shut to keep it from falling to the floor. This place was amazing. She put down her bag my the door and walked slowly over to the water. She sat down on the edge, the peticoats under her short green lolita style dress making a swooshy noise. She dipped a hand in the sparlking coolness and smiled. This was just the enterance, what wonderful things could be waiting for them upstairs? This was more luxurious than anything she'd ever seen. She looked around the room at the other students and wondered why some of them looked uncomfortable. Couln't they see how wonderful this place was? She wondered where their teacher went. Was he preparing another surprise for them?
PostPosted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 5:45 pm


the two side doors the sensai left through burst open, and his voice erupted from it, "its all ready...please everyone inside"... there was a little chuckle...and Ark and Gin began heading into the room there teacher had entered ((NPC students razz ))

It was a nice sized room...stone collums riseing up twenty feet into the air, the first 10 feet wrapped in a smooth, soft cushion...
this was obviously the training room. not just because of the mats on the floor, or the work out machines in the corners of the room....

but because of the rack after rack of variosu weapons...Iron rings...Naginatas...Knuckle dusters...Kendo Swords...body armor...all there hanging on the wall, none sheathed....


The sensai was standing near a long table, coverd in a fine white cloth. The table itself was litered with mountins of cake, bowls of juice, bottles of soda, and various other treats...even small sandwhichs, subs and hot-subs....
it all looked very good...
the sensai grinned and said "after we are all settled in...we can do some training...and then have a nice end of the year party..."
he clicked a button on a remote...and soft music began playing, traditionl geisha songs softly coming out of the speakers mounted into the wall

blorkbarrowdeath


You Will Rot

Shirtless Husband

PostPosted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 5:58 pm


Hawk stared at all of the weapons and the food. Very very heavenly for him. The thing is he wasn't really hungry and still had a mischievous plan going through his mind. what if all the other students could destract the Teach so he could...roam around a bit? smile
PostPosted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 6:17 pm


Jordan slowly entered the room and shivered again...the weapons that hung on the walls and were positioned carefully in the racks.

Dear Lord he was having a panic attack already.

Sharp weapons often made Jordan jittery, since he didn't have much strength and was afraid of hurting someone he didn't fight very often. Training, another word that made him gulp hard and look around at the students. What if he accidentally hurt one of them? Could he be outcasted?

Even worse...

What if he got hurt?

There was still some time to wait for that, as the sensai said they were going to settle in..yeah...bide some time before he was declared dead. He put his backpack back on and listened to the music. At least it seemed to calm his nerves a bit.

Donatellothedog


Camryn49
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 8:44 pm


Ayumi gazed around the room as she strode in. Upon seeing all the weapons she thought to herself of the things that she could do with them and was impressed with their quality and the amount of them.

She couldn't wait to see their teacher do what he did best with them. She herself wanted to try them out. Walking quickly past Jordan she found the food and plainly stood by it not trying any yet.
PostPosted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 9:02 pm


((I got permission to do this, so no freaking out all))
Hawk watched them all go into the room, he smiled, the Teacher wasn't looking at him. Adventerously he slinked up one of the marvelous staircases, looking about at the pictures and seeing that...as he went up...the darker it got.

"Wonder if he's hiding something..?"

Hawk smiled at this, creeping up until he got to the top, looking down at the hall full of rooms. The doors were shut.

"Which one to go in? Hmm..."

Hawk walked close to the left so he could examine the right side, he always went to the right on everything.

You Will Rot

Shirtless Husband


forest_imp45
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 9:09 pm


Mina got up off her pearch and grabbed her bag. As she followed the others into the room she held back another gasp of amazement. She stared at the beautiful wepons on the wall and felt her hands itch impateintly at the thought of trying them out. her gaze fell on the table full of mouth-watering food. She strode over to Ayumi and after hearing the sensei's words whispered, "Pitty we cant dig in now, it looks delicious." She looked around the room again and her eyes fell on the nervous Jordan. She cast Ayumi a concerned look and wondered if she should say anything to him.
PostPosted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 9:19 pm


sensai smiled and clapped his hands once "ok students..everyone over here" he walked over to a pillar and grabbed a bundle of white cloth...and from said white cloth..produced everyones Kendo training sword. The long sturdy polished wood, chipped slightly with use...each hand grip made for each student...
"everyone take your sticks...assume a standing position with feet next to eachother..spread them till they are right under your shoulders..bring your left foot back a bit -right foot if your lefty- and then at the same time...."
he stood with his back to you..holding his kendo sword...and with the lighting fast reflexes he was famouse for

"ONE...TWO...THREE" he swung the sword once, hard and fast, keeping steady as he brought the sword back up infront of him...and repeated the count once more

"got that? your all ready? good....one.......two....THREE!"




the hall was dimmly lit, many of the oaken doors locked -probably not in use-.... the third floor looked like it wasnt used often and it made kind of like a strange, blocky "n" shape, running back to the front of the house fora view of the gardens....

a strange soft white light, was coming out from under a door....strange....wasnt the sensai downstairs?

blorkbarrowdeath


Donatellothedog

PostPosted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 9:28 pm


Jordan held onto his stick and looked around at everyone...they were mostly right handed, so he went the opposite since he was left. He didn't try very hard due to the fact that he couldn't stop looking around at the dangerous weapons hanging on the walls. Oh god...they looked so dangerous.

He stiffened and looked around a bit...was someone staring at him? He tried to ignore it and looked in front of him, a long web hung down and a spider dangled at the end working its legs in a crawling fashion

"DEAR LORD! KILL IT!" Jordan screamed, slamming into another student in pure fear.
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