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LusterVasyenka

PostPosted: Wed Jul 12, 2006 9:33 pm


Saeldur


Name: Saeldur Tanor
Gender: Male
Race: Mortal
Story Title:------


Saeldur Tanor is the heir to a large private corporation -- he is attractive, single, and wealthy. He is also a control-freak, dips in the occult, and an autosadist. He ranks as one of the tallest characters in the story. Even though he is tall, and thin as some might have expected, Saeldur can best be described as a human lamp pole in appearance. Lanky with seemingly little to no muscle he is probably physically the weakest. Blue eyes that border on the edge of a deep purple stare out from beneath long blonde bangs, his hair being golden in color and barely reaching his shoulders in length. Due to his physical condition, the young man sometimes slouches, and he has a slender wooden cane with him at all times.


Since he is quite wealthy and has an image to obtain for 'his company,' he wears suits and has more than a few long coats among his wide collection of garments. He wears layers of clothes, no skin showing besides perhaps his hands and from the neck up. Colors of blue and even lilac purple seem to be his favorites, though almost everything he wears is subtly accented with black or some other dark color, even though he wears things of the 'lighter' color spectrum.


It was stated before that he has a few darker personality attributes... in truth the list goes on and on. Seven older sisters are the main cause of this (for the most part at least.) Over the years they have used everything under the moon in an attempt to ruin their brother's chances at being the heir to the company following the death of their father. Thus, the poor fellow seems to have developed a fear and general dislike of women in general, a tainted interest in autosadism, a less than healthy physical relationship with one or more of his sisters, and has enough black mail hanging over his head that he has given up carrying. Saeldur always has a smile on his face, and an easy laugh in check for when things get rough... he also has a rather short attention span and tends to ignore people when he grows bored.
PostPosted: Sun Jul 16, 2006 6:14 pm


"Human lamp pole." lol

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 16, 2006 6:40 pm


The only thing that bugs me is his name. It took me a few seconds of twisting my mouth around to pronounce it. xd

And the fact that his full name is Saeldur Tanor makes me want to squish the names together and pronounce it Saeldur-Tanure.
PostPosted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 9:57 pm


Alrighty then. You know, I like. I like a lot.

The name is... okay. But rhyming? I wouldn't.

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