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PostPosted: Fri Jul 14, 2006 7:26 pm


~Prologe~

He reached out raising his mightly staff. "Rise!" At once, demons of all sorts rose from the dephs of hell. The hooded creature rested the staff at his side using it as a cane in a way. An evil smile went accross his face. If it was the time to act, it would be now. Nothing would stand in his way.... Nothing.......

~*End of Prologe*~
PostPosted: Fri Jul 14, 2006 7:37 pm


~Chapter One.~
~Halloween~

"Done" She finished putting the last bit of make-up on her face. She had dressed as a cat this year. A black one to be exact. Stick on whiskers, a long tail, cat ears, her hair covering her natural born human ears, and a black outfit that hugged her every curve. She faked a purr smiling at her reflection in the mirror. "Puuuurfect!" She flipped her short hair once fixing it in place. She went downstairs.
"Mom! I'm leaving!" She gave her mom a hug on this Halloween night. Her mom just smiled saying, "Have a good time and be back by midnight, Tin-Tin!"
She just nodded grabbing a black purse that would match her outfit and throwing on a black leather jacket. "Okay" With that she headed out the door.

(Please note that the chapter will be put in peice by peice. They're too long to be put in all into one post.)

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Milina_Heart2

PostPosted: Sat Jul 15, 2006 9:35 am


It was a dark night. The moon full and children trick-or-treating this way and that. Tin-Tin hadn't done that type of thing in two years. For some reason she missed it dearly.
The 15 year old didn't have to walk very long before arriving at her destination. A house near central park. Lights flashing this way and that and scenary outside the house that would scare even her. She approached the door gingerley and knocked twice.
Almost instantly a figure dressed as the grim reaper opened the door. The mask was tinted red to be distinguished as dry blood and it wore a long black robe. Covering the hands where black gloves as mad scientists would wear. A creepy sight really. The sythe in one hand the figure gestured her to come inside. It was so lifelike...
At first she was a bit freaked out but then, as the skeleton moved to the side, a glimps of tennis shoes appeared under the robe. She could do nothing but laugh placing her black eye mask over her face......
The figure smiled underneath the mask. "Welcome to the Mascurade" It said being quite convincing.....
Loud music filled her ears completely as she walked in. She looked around. A red light filled the room and candels where the only light. People she may have known but couldn't reconize where dancing in the middle of the room.
A giveaway though, a shark tooth necklace revealed the identity of one of the people. It had been the new kid at her school. She didn't quite catch his name though. There was something about him that just creeped her out. He had an eye mask that was similar to her's. It was black and covered the upper face. Similar to Robin's (From Batman) I suppose. There was just a cut for the eyes. Her's was like that but slimmer to identify she was as cunning that night as a cat. He was dressed as a warlock that night. She could tell by the staff he carried. The marking on it concluded her hypothesies.
PostPosted: Sun Jul 16, 2006 9:33 am


She wanted to approach him but that would ruin the fun. She didn't know him that well anyway.
She was startled when something brushed her shoulder. She turned quickley the hairs on the back of her neck standing. An smooth voice and soft eyes started back at her. "Boo!" It shouted.
Tin-Tin knew who it was almost immediatley. "Milina!"
Milina was taller then Tin-Tin and was dressed as a dog. She's fairly slim and had long blond hair which goes well with her light complection. "How's my Wiccan?" She asked smoothly.
Yes, Tin-Tin was a Wiccan. Its secrets had been passed through her family geneneration by generation. Her mother's side really. "Puuurfect" She smiled complementing her own constume.

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Milina_Heart2

PostPosted: Sun Jul 16, 2006 5:38 pm


"I see you worked hard on your costume!" Milina smiled admiring her costume... "Almost didn't reconize you"
"Well of course! What gave it away?"
Milina looked as if she was crazy. "I know you inside out! Besides, you love black cats!" She smiled looking at the fake whiskers.
PostPosted: Fri Aug 04, 2006 9:30 am


The boy with a shark tooth was staring at the two. Tin-Tin stretched her neck over just a bit smiling at Milina. "Well looks like we have a bit of company."
"Hey." His voice was deep and hypnotising. His long staff was held close to him and he smiled to the two of them. "'Name's Nicco."
Tin-Tin looked to Milina and noticed she was blushing. "Pleasure, I'm sure..." She wasn't fooled by the 'nice guy' look he was giving the two. Something about him bugged her.
Milina was almost red by now. "Your new right?" She asked with a smile. "We can show you around if you'd like."
Tin-Tin hit Milina in the stomach lightly giving her a 'we can?' type of look.
"That would be wonderful!" He said with a smile sounding a bit corny. He was trying to be nice but it wasn't exactly helping his outlook on Tin-Tin.

H u g D r u g
Crew


H u g D r u g
Crew

PostPosted: Sun Sep 03, 2006 8:10 pm


Tin-tin sighed looking at Milina. "Fine..... " She rolled her eyes not really feeling like doing anything..... It was Halloween, she wanted to have fun. Her eyes wandered looking for something to do. She ran to a bowl of candy corn.
Milina was left alone with the one called 'Nicco'. She looked down, moving her left foot around. "Soooo....." She held back her deep blush. She smiled though tring to keep conversation. "Don't worry about her.." She said refering to Tin-Tin. "It takes her quite a while to warm up to new people..."
He nodded. "Its okay. I'm sure we'll be okay eventually...." He sighed, knowing she had some sort of issue with him, though they just met.
Milina once again attempted conversation. "So, where are you originally from?"
He made a small frown but it quickly changed back to his happy outlook. "Uhhh, California.." He said a bit hesitently. "But I move from place to place, pretty often in fact. My dad gets transfered most "
She nodded. Oh my Lord he's hot! She couldn't stop thinking that. She tracked and nodded as he spoke, attempting to keep her mind on what he was saying. It wasn't working though.... She kept thinking about how cute he really was. She made a smile. "That's cool..."
PostPosted: Mon Sep 11, 2006 4:53 pm


"I'm from..... here..." Milina said admittantly.
Tin-Tin came back with four bags of candy corn. She gave one to Nicco and Milina, then kept the other two for herself. If she loved anything, it would HAVE to be candy corn.
"Thanks." Both Milina and Nicco said together.
"Thanks a lot" Nicco repeated, trying to act friendly....
Tin-Tin refused to even looked at him, she kept her eyes sqare on Milina. She smiled though and brushed back her hair. Her mask was beginning to loosen lightly, but she ignored it...

H u g D r u g
Crew

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