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Prince Copper X
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Posted: Sun Jul 16, 2006 2:59 am

This is just one of many peoms I written and my shortest one. My other ones are very long. Which you will see very soon.

Is Heaven Real or Fantasy?

Is Heaven just another word for hope for the old and weak?
Is just word make us believe that we are here for a reason
Is our life a trail to pass to get to Heaven?

Is Heaven a Fantasy? Is it real?
What is Heaven? Does it exist?
If does exist, how come we have suffer before we get there?

Leave our love ones behind in the Darkness of the world
Or change the world before you die so they have light
What will my loves ones do when I leave them?

Will they be sad, happy, angry or become stronger
Is it fantasy? Will I see it?
It seems so far away like forever

I still working on being a full adult
Will I get that far?
Will I give up before I get there?

So many questions but no ones knows
That for fact that Heaven is real or Fantasy?
That is the question

Posted: Sun Jul 16, 2006 4:26 am

The Danger Of Darkness

I will not be overcome by Darkness
My fate does not lead me to Darkness
My anger witch I cannot control

Will bring me ruin
I have a lot be reasonable for
The whole weight of the world is on my back

Within every choice I make
Affect the people around me
Within every step I take

To reach my goal,
It is tougher and tougher every step
Nothing will stand in my way if my goal

I must overcome the Darkness
Inside me before it effects others around me
Darkness, anger, revenge and suffering

It will solve nothing but only pain,
Darkness is a dangerous thing to come across
Everyone has darkness inside everyone

Nevertheless, can they control their Darkness
It is too powerful to overcome them to control
Will they overcome the Darkness

On the other hand, will the Darkness overcome them
Can they control it
I have found my Darkness it is scary,

Sometimes I can’t control it
Will I learn to control it correctly
Or let it take over my mind and actions

Will be too late to control it
I must overcome my Darkness
Before it brings my ruin

Prince Copper X
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Enniel

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Posted: Tue Jul 18, 2006 12:06 pm

i like it! im not poetic, so i cant give you some elaborate critique but it has a good idea behind it

Posted: Tue Jul 18, 2006 6:59 pm

Eh, not bad.

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Merle Corey

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Posted: Wed Jul 19, 2006 11:31 pm

With edge like razor sharp,
It goes from person to person.
Held by many in a sheath fit for kings,
and others in a duel of wits.
Something that can pierce the heart oh so easier than the blade.
Love, the man killer.

I wrote that at school one day a long time ago for my girlfriend.