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Harra_Wizen
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 16, 2006 4:31 pm


This is a free verse poem, dedicated to my passed on friend, Oncahnno.

I’ll never forget you,
You know that, right?
You never really were gone to me,
I only said that you were away, and would return, someday…

I never really said goodbye, that day.
I never really let go of you.
I never really accepted the fact that you were gone for good.
To me, it was all a dream…

A dream, it never happened,
We would still fight in the morning,
Dance in the afternoon,
And sing into the night…

But then, I saw you weren’t there,
And I had no choice but to accept,
That you were really gone,
There was no going back…

And no place to go back to,
No place to run and hide from the world,
My little corner, my little light,
Gone for good…

So now, I must leave where you once dwelled,
Your memory is too strong here,
I wish I didn’t have to,
But I must…

May you never forget me,
I never, ever forgot you,
Wherever you are, look to me,
And know I did right, for you, my dearest friend.
PostPosted: Wed Jul 19, 2006 2:43 pm


That was deep and I really like that one as well as "Beware of what you Write." It very much reminds me of a situation that happened in my family. I think I liked it, because I can relate to it.

Kala-El


Harra_Wizen
Captain

PostPosted: Wed Jul 19, 2006 8:06 pm


Ah, thank you greatly! ^_^
PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 9:05 am


Wow, that was really good, i like it! I admire free-verse writers. I've tried but i can't write!

starshine_cayalyn


Harra_Wizen
Captain

PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 5:46 pm


Will you stop saying that? You can so! Heh... I just wrote a story, pretty much, I can't really do freeverse either... I am a terrible freeverse, unless I try to write a story, in poem form!
PostPosted: Mon Sep 25, 2006 12:29 pm


I don't think i can! No, i will not stop saying that, never!

starshine_cayalyn


Harra_Wizen
Captain

PostPosted: Mon Sep 25, 2006 1:50 pm


I read your Weeping Willow poem, besides, self hatrid is my job, not yours, mine!
PostPosted: Mon Sep 25, 2006 2:03 pm


Yeah right! It's my job during the day(sleep all night!)

starshine_cayalyn


Harra_Wizen
Captain

PostPosted: Mon Sep 25, 2006 2:07 pm


Too bad, I have the older mind, and therefore, I have Squatters Rights to that job, besides, I am Captain of the Guild, and so my word is Law!
PostPosted: Mon Sep 25, 2006 2:10 pm


How would you know if you have the older mind?

starshine_cayalyn


Harra_Wizen
Captain

PostPosted: Fri Sep 29, 2006 1:51 pm


Because I don't think your mind is older than 313 years of age!
PostPosted: Fri Sep 29, 2006 4:10 pm


Mine is 314 years!! mrgreen

starshine_cayalyn


Harra_Wizen
Captain

PostPosted: Fri Sep 29, 2006 9:35 pm


Shut up, I know you are lying there, besides, my body would have been the same age, but I was halfway killed and halfway reincarnated at age 300, and since it was all half, my body started all over, and my mind stayed as it was before...
PostPosted: Sat Sep 30, 2006 8:48 am


I totally missed that! sweatdrop Anyway, I won't be on here today, I'm going to my little cousin's 3rd birthday!

starshine_cayalyn


Harra_Wizen
Captain

PostPosted: Fri Oct 06, 2006 7:38 pm


That's fine...
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