Well, I can give you the link, as well as the poem. As much as I love to get reviews in person, if you have the time, I'd love to get a review from you on ff.net for this piece as well, or just on fanfiction.net. Well, here it is. ^^
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A figure hiding, garbed in black,
Waning far from path or track,
An icy glare that begs to leave,
Laced with anger, forced to grieve.
A soul that's veiled by silent frost,
One born to fight, whose cause is lost.
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Looking into cold glass eyes,
Seeing through all your lies,
Curious what stands behind?
Your masks I always seem to find.
I'm curious, the scars you hold,
When will truth begin to unfold?
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Others never look, nor find,
The wounds that lay so far behind,
Sometimes you slip, a scar is seen--
But still I watch, away, unseen,
I know they're deep, they hurt you so,
Those scars you hold-let no one know.
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Sometimes I wish you'd talk to me,
Let me help, allow me to see.
Yet... still I know my wants won't be,
You'll never share your silent plea.
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Forever lost, always alone,
No time for friends, no place for home.
You'll move on, leave life here,
For no one knows who you truly are,
A lonely figure, jaded and scarred.
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Sooo... whadda'ya think? Here's the link for it on ff.net.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2720786/1/
(Please review there. sad Pwease? I only have 4 reviews.)
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A figure hiding, garbed in black,
Waning far from path or track,
An icy glare that begs to leave,
Laced with anger, forced to grieve.
A soul that's veiled by silent frost,
One born to fight, whose cause is lost.
-
Looking into cold glass eyes,
Seeing through all your lies,
Curious what stands behind?
Your masks I always seem to find.
I'm curious, the scars you hold,
When will truth begin to unfold?
-
Others never look, nor find,
The wounds that lay so far behind,
Sometimes you slip, a scar is seen--
But still I watch, away, unseen,
I know they're deep, they hurt you so,
Those scars you hold-let no one know.
-
Sometimes I wish you'd talk to me,
Let me help, allow me to see.
Yet... still I know my wants won't be,
You'll never share your silent plea.
-
Forever lost, always alone,
No time for friends, no place for home.
You'll move on, leave life here,
For no one knows who you truly are,
A lonely figure, jaded and scarred.
---
Sooo... whadda'ya think? Here's the link for it on ff.net.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2720786/1/
(Please review there. sad Pwease? I only have 4 reviews.)
