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PostPosted: Tue Jul 25, 2006 10:19 pm


Alrighty, here's the first chapter of my old YouxSasuke fan fic.
That's right! You get paired up with non other than Konoha's Ice Prince himself! XD
it's a really old fan fic. Tell me if you want the other chapters. ;P


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The thought of going back made you sick. No one liked you, or acknowledged you the way you should've been treated. His words echoed in your skull, thrashing at your heart like a wrecking ball to an old building.

I'll kill you, before someone else does. Run away, I'm giving you a chance. Something you don't deserve. You don't deserve nothing, scum.

Scum. You've been told that all your life. You didn't do anything bad, though. All your life was spent serving others, and attempting to make them happy. But it was wasted. Tossed aside like yesterdays paper.

You ran away from him. Your breaths heaving in your chest, sending raspy breaths out of your mouth. Running, never stopping until you made it somewhere. You hoped to never see that man again.

You stopped when colorful buildings entered your vision like a rainbow of colors. Your hair was disheveled and stuck to your face. You brushed it away, uncertain of what people may think.

You entered the village square and fast-walked to the Hokage. He was the only one who could sort you out. Maybe assembling the ANBU to find and kill the man. But it was unlikely. The man was so strong. People gave you questioning looks as you paced by them. you tried to smile like nothing was wrong with tears suddenly formed at the rims of your eyes.

You wouldn't cry. Not now. Not now of all times. Surrounded by people. They'll know something is wrong.

You shook off the tears and entered the Hokages building.

"I need to speak with someone," you yelled into the hallways, "someone tried to kill me. I 'm from another village."

It was true, you were from another village. But you belonged to no other village in the least. You had no Ninja training, but you had uncertain powers, and you were amazingly fast. Quickly stroking your bangs out of your face, you were welcomed by the Hokage in a few minutes time.

In the room, there was four other people with him. They all went silent, as you walked in the room and sat in a wooden chair. It was uncomfortable and it made you shift slightly a few times before making yourself sit still.

You glanced at the people to the left of you.
There was a tall man with a mask over his face and grey hair lofted to the side of his head. There was also a pink-haired kunoichi with sparking green eyes, a tanned boy with yellow hair and a dazzling foxy smile. He had what seemed like whiskers embedded on his face which made him look even more like a fox. Lastly, there was a dark-haired boy with plummeting black eyes. They were, okay, unbelievable to say the least. But forcing yourself not to look at him any longer, you turned your glance at the hokage who was explaining that sending the ANBU was useless if they didn't know what village you were from.

Exasperated, you explained that you couldn't explain that you didn't know what village you were from because you never got to go outside. You were a slave and that evil man killed everyone in the [last name] clan!

From the corner of your eye, you saw the Dark-haired boy glance at you with his onyx eyes. Taking note of this you quickly brushed the feelings in your cheeks and forced your eyes at the Hokage.

He told you he was dreadfully sorry, but seeing as you posses powers, you are successfully a part of Team 7. Which was this team, no doubt.

Feeling tired, you took the key from the old man. 'A key to your new apartment' as he said. You were glad at having a space for yourself and when you arrived you had found food already stocked in the pantrys, and clothes!
Wow, they knew what kind of clothes you like? Okay, a little creepy, but you decided to worry later. For now, you needed to rest. Although..You weren't wearing acceptionally nice clothes at the moment.. They were kind of old and grey, from work at the unknown village. You didn't realize until now that you were kind of embarressed to be seen, even in the apartment like this.

Fiddling in your bedroom for a pair of silky pajamas, you stripped off your now-known-as peasent-clothing clothing and threw them in the trash. Then proceeded to get dressed.

Out in the living room, you flipped on the tube and watched some lame show about the chirps of Konohas wild birds, or some s**t.
Watching lazily your hair draped in front of your eyes, and you drifted off to sleep.

Your dreams sent you thrashing about the small loveseat.
About him..
Why him.. ?
What did you do to deserve this?
Nothing..
Nothing at all..


"I DID NOTHING!" You screamed as your eyes suddenly flashed open. "Nothing.."

You wept.

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Okay, here's chapter 2. ^__^;
Remember, it's old, and I'm too lazy to beta it right now. >o<;
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You had woken up at 5:30am. Normally, you'd wake up earlier to do work. Today, you got to sleep in! So, hopping out of bed with much enthusiasum, you marched towards your dresser to check out your clothes.

Finally, you picked on a chinese top with no sleeves and black capris that went only just past your knees. Settling on those you headed to your bathroom to wash up. In your drawers, you found ninja bandages and tied some around the top of your right arm, and on your opposite ankle.

You looked at your reflection in the mirror. Today, you would be a ninja. The new you, fighting on a team. Fighting, to kill the man that tormented your past. You were [age], about the same age as Team 7, you supposed. You really hoped that they would get used to you. Mentally readying yourself not to do anything stupid as you thought you would, you were just about to head out the door when you saw something flash out of the corner of your eye on the kitchen table.

That's right! You get a Ninja Headband!
Fleeing to the bathroom mirror again, you decided after much thought to rest it on your forehead. Brushing your hair back and settling it behind your bangs, you thought 'Now or never', and sighed. No one ever said life was easy..It's a matter of how you play the game! Winning is only when you're happy with what you got!

Prepping yourself while you put on your Navy Nin-sandels. You headed out the door with an apple in your mouth.

No time for breakfast!

Wait, not the door! Nins don't use the door! So returning to your apartment, you went to the balcony and hopped on the roof.

You slipped.

Your apple fell out of your mouth and rolled down the shingles of the roof.

Aw, crap!

Momentarily losing your sanity, you just rolled down the roof screaming for dear life.

Nins aren't supposed to be afraid!

Grasping for the drain-pipe at the end of your embaressing tribulation, your legs dangled off the side of the roof and yelled for help.

"Ummm, can someone please help me?!" You tried to yell out at the corner of your shoulder down below.

"Are you the girl who's on Team 7?" Said another voice.

"Ahh, er, where are you..?" You managed to grunt out.

"Right here." Said a voice in your ear. "Here, hold on."

Looking up, you saw the foxy grin and dazzling blue-cornflower eyes concentrating on your arm as he pulled you up.

He smiled again as he stabled your uneasiness.

"Umm...Hehe..heh...thanks.." You mangaged to say. How stupid! This guy was on your team! You made a fool of yourself!
You smiled back.

"Here, you don't know how to use your Chakra that well, grab hold of my arm. We'll ask Kakashi-sensei to go through a Chakra exercise for you."

You smiled uneasy, and grabbed his arm. Before knowing what he was going to do. He bolted off at amazing speed, you caught your breath in your throat. Your hair was flying behind you and you squinted your eyes while zooming atop the colored roofs of Konoha.

Your new home.
A permanent home.
At last..


Still grasping his arm, you found yourself laughing.
For what?
You didn't understand.
This was so scary! But exhilerating at the same time..
You haven't laughed since you don't know when. Everything in the other village was so serious and...dead.. But this place, wow. It was so happy and free.

I'm free.


He slowed down a fair amount and landed on a bridge.
The boy grinned like a fox again and you thanked him.

"Kakashi-Sensei," he said, "you're here early!" Amusement seeped into his cerulean eyes.

"Yes, Naruto, I couldn't wait to introduce our newest member of out Team!" He said through his mask. He was smiling, at least..You thought so...

Everyone stared at you next when he said this.

Say something..
What?
Anything..!

"Err, my name is [firstname] [lastname]." You squeeked out.

The blonde boy put out his hand and you took it in a shake.

"I'm Naruto Uzumaki!" He said over enthusiastically. "I'm going to become the next Hokage!"

"Err, nice to meet you!" You managed sweetly. "Also, thanks for bringing me over here, I nearly died!" You flung out your arms and hit the pink-headed girl in the nose.

So much for not acting stupid..

"Omg, I'm so, so, so, sorry!" You drabbled with your eyes glistening in shock.

"Ah, no, it's okay..really.." She said holding her hands to her nose.

"Are-are you okay, err--"

"Sakura Haruno," she said nasally holding her nose.

"Alright, well, nice to meet you, and I'm really really sorry!" You said.

You turned to find the dark-haired boy smirking at what he just saw. you didn't know whether it was because you made a fool of yourself, or he enjoyed seeing someone hurt Sakura. Whatever it was, he still didn't introduce himself, so you asked him.

"And..you are?"

He looked like as if he didn't answer, but he flashed his dark eyes towards you. You thought your heart stopped beating. You managed to get a hold of yourself before you look like Sakura oozing herself towards him all the time.

"Sasuke Uchiha." He simply said.

Nodding and smiling, you said hi and turned around towards Kakashi-sensei. You guessed he supposed he didn't need introducing, or he just simply forgot. But either way, he decided to do some Chakra training today anyways. He said to you afterwards that he was going to get the team together for some sparring to see what powers you had. You gulped and nodded.

After chakra training, you were thoroughly tired. you were satisfied though! It turned out you had a big amount of chakra! It was sorta wierd though.. Naruto looked at you in amazment, Sakura went red and Sasuke just stared as he usually does. You had blushed when you saw this, but what! Don't all nins have lots of Chakra when they need it?

Obviously you were missing something, but you shrugged it off, and was skipping towards Kakashi-sensei.

"Alright," he said lazily, "we're going to spar. This time, though, you can use your chakra to do your hand signals at inanimate objects." He stressed the work inanimate. It must have been since you were here, for Naruto pumped his fist in the air. You guessed they didn't do this often.

"Alright, you, [name], you go with Sakura. Naruto, you're with Sasuke." Kakashi-sensei said.

Sakura glared at me. For what reason I don't know? But I noticed she kept glancing at Sasuke in hopes for him to, what, notice her or something? Apparently, since there was another girl on the team, Naruto said earlier to you, she feels intimidated.
What! You weren't going to act on Sasuke! Pfft! Err..maybe...NO! You weren't! He was on your team, idiot!

Taking a fighting stance, you pulled out a kunai from your hip pocket. Sakura did the same. You waited for her to start running towards you. She did, and your mind clicked into fighting mode.

You made amazing speed, dashing this way, dis-arming Sakura the next, kicking her in the air, throwing shriukins the next.

"Y-your eyes!.." She blurted, grasping the ground.

My eyes?.. What about them...?

Everyone had been watching our fight...Of course, you just realized it. Umm, stupid? I think so!

"What..?" You said.

Naruto walked up to you with Sasuke not far behind. He grabbed your chin without your permission and tilted your head. Eeerrrr..?

"Naruto!" You screamed, "what are you doing?!"

"Sakura-chan is right! Look at her eyes!" He said.

"What about my eyes!" You blurted.

Your eyes had turned black and was surrounded by yellow, like an eclipse. How could they change color without you noticing?! Arrrgh!

"Let go of my face, Naruto!"

"Er, oops. Sorry.." He said and his hand went from your face to the back of his head.

"Thank-you..Now, what about my eyes?!"

"You..you.."Sakura said.

You were getting angry, fast. If someone didn't explain it right..!
Huh?

"Your eyes are from the Hidden Eclipse clan. You possess the power to take energy from the sun, or moon, and use it to destroy your enemys. In your case, it was Sakura, which explains why she's so scared." It was Sasuke.

"B-but, my clan is dead! I was taken from them when I was little! Er, how do I..umm. turn my eyes.. Haha, no, I didn't mean it that way.. er, put my eyes back to normal?" You blurted out.

Kakashi sensei finally spoke.

"You'll know how. It's in your blood."

Ehhh!?

"Er, okay.. "

You focused your chakra on your eyes, and felt a tingling sensation in your face. Closing your eyes, and opening them again, you noticed that things were much brighter, it was sort've like the black shielded your eyes.. or something, because the black film was gone..!

"Cool!"

"Practice is over today." Kakashi said, opening his orange book.

Sakura had gotten up already, and stabled herself. The boys were walking ahead, you didn't care what speed you were walking. You took it easy from now on..you're free, afterall! You smiled, and felt a tap on your shoulder.

You turned your head and found Sakura seething.

"You embarrassed me in front of Sasuke-kun! She spat.

What?

You replied cooly, "it's not as if I meant to."

"Don't do anything foolish, [name]! I can beat you if I wanted to!"

Still replying cooly, you said, "I was about to beat you and I didn't even know what the hell I was doing."

You heard a 'hummph' and saw the pink haired kunoichi run ahead and clung herself to Sasuke who shook her off his arm.

You laughed at his expression, and turned towards your apartment.

You're gonna like it here...!

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 25, 2006 10:21 pm


RESERVED.

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O P E R A T O R
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Tue Jul 25, 2006 10:22 pm


RESERVED.
PostPosted: Tue Jul 25, 2006 10:32 pm


Yaaay! Post the rest! Hehe. ^_^;;

We didn't get to see Sasuke very much yet... crying I like it so far, though it is a little confusing with all of the "you" stuff. I'm not used to reading stuff like that lol. ^_^;;

Guakamori


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PostPosted: Wed Jul 26, 2006 6:32 am


Wow... This is an odd fic. Then again, it's because I can't really visualize him with me... I'm much too... bleh. And stuff. xDD
PostPosted: Wed Jul 26, 2006 10:42 am


Demon_child203
Wow... This is an odd fic. Then again, it's because I can't really visualize him with me... I'm much too... bleh. And stuff. xDD


But you get special powers.. ^_~

O P E R A T O R
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 26, 2006 3:30 pm


O P E R A T O R
Demon_child203
Wow... This is an odd fic. Then again, it's because I can't really visualize him with me... I'm much too... bleh. And stuff. xDD


But you get special powers.. ^_~

Wow... in that chapter, Sasuke seemed more like Kakashi. Or maybe that was just my mind desperately trying to be more Kakashi-fangirl-ish. xD
PostPosted: Thu Jul 27, 2006 1:23 pm


Demon_child203
O P E R A T O R
Demon_child203
Wow... This is an odd fic. Then again, it's because I can't really visualize him with me... I'm much too... bleh. And stuff. xDD


But you get special powers.. ^_~

Wow... in that chapter, Sasuke seemed more like Kakashi. Or maybe that was just my mind desperately trying to be more Kakashi-fangirl-ish. xD

-snort-
I wrote this like a year ago. xd
And if I remember correctly, around a year and a half ago, I only started watching Naruto. So I really didn't know who they were. XDDDD

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 28, 2006 10:43 am


O P E R A T O R
Demon_child203
O P E R A T O R
Demon_child203
Wow... This is an odd fic. Then again, it's because I can't really visualize him with me... I'm much too... bleh. And stuff. xDD


But you get special powers.. ^_~

Wow... in that chapter, Sasuke seemed more like Kakashi. Or maybe that was just my mind desperately trying to be more Kakashi-fangirl-ish. xD

-snort-
I wrote this like a year ago. xd
And if I remember correctly, around a year and a half ago, I only started watching Naruto. So I really didn't know who they were. XDDDD

Ah. That makes more sense. 3nodding
PostPosted: Fri Jul 28, 2006 11:04 am


Demon_child203
O P E R A T O R
Demon_child203
O P E R A T O R
Demon_child203
Wow... This is an odd fic. Then again, it's because I can't really visualize him with me... I'm much too... bleh. And stuff. xDD


But you get special powers.. ^_~

Wow... in that chapter, Sasuke seemed more like Kakashi. Or maybe that was just my mind desperately trying to be more Kakashi-fangirl-ish. xD

-snort-
I wrote this like a year ago. xd
And if I remember correctly, around a year and a half ago, I only started watching Naruto. So I really didn't know who they were. XDDDD

Ah. That makes more sense. 3nodding

3nodding xd heart

O P E R A T O R
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 03, 2006 12:26 pm


O P E R A T O R
Demon_child203
O P E R A T O R
Demon_child203
O P E R A T O R
Demon_child203
Wow... This is an odd fic. Then again, it's because I can't really visualize him with me... I'm much too... bleh. And stuff. xDD


But you get special powers.. ^_~

Wow... in that chapter, Sasuke seemed more like Kakashi. Or maybe that was just my mind desperately trying to be more Kakashi-fangirl-ish. xD

-snort-
I wrote this like a year ago. xd
And if I remember correctly, around a year and a half ago, I only started watching Naruto. So I really didn't know who they were. XDDDD

Ah. That makes more sense. 3nodding

3nodding xd heart

Is that code for "OMG!! Sasuke's in a dress???" If so, where might I see that miracle. xDDDD
PostPosted: Thu Aug 03, 2006 9:24 pm


xDD
YES, YES IT WAS!
Sasuke: -blushes and fiddles with the rim of the dress-

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 06, 2006 9:15 pm


O P E R A T O R
xDD
YES, YES IT WAS!
Sasuke: -blushes and fiddles with the rim of the dress-

*stalks the dress-clad Sasuke* x333 *drool*
PostPosted: Wed Aug 09, 2006 11:54 am


Demon_child203
O P E R A T O R
xDD
YES, YES IT WAS!
Sasuke: -blushes and fiddles with the rim of the dress-

*stalks the dress-clad Sasuke* x333 *drool*

x3!
Sasuke: Nooo! -runs away, and dress flys up- gonk
Brenna and Demon: surprised heart -takes pictures-
Naruto in bushes: heart eek -has kage bunshins change into Sasuke in a dress and serve him-

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 11, 2006 3:18 pm


O P E R A T O R
Demon_child203
O P E R A T O R
xDD
YES, YES IT WAS!
Sasuke: -blushes and fiddles with the rim of the dress-

*stalks the dress-clad Sasuke* x333 *drool*

x3!
Sasuke: Nooo! -runs away, and dress flys up- gonk
Brenna and Demon: surprised heart -takes pictures-
Naruto in bushes: heart eek -has kage bunshins change into Sasuke in a dress and serve him-

*drools*
Kakashi: My! This is new. ... Iruka, why don't you wear more dresses?
Iruka: o_o; Obvious reasons.
Kakashi: B-but...
Iruka: -_-; No.
Kakashi: gonk
Gai: gonk is unyouthful!
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