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 Posted: Tue May 03, 2005 1:22 pm
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Posted: Tue May 03, 2005 1:29 pm
Aww, that is sweet. It is simple and nice. No typos or mistakes, thou I didn't see much rhyming, but that may be ur style. I like it.
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Posted: Wed May 04, 2005 12:07 pm
I'm not much of a rhymer.. because I always used the same words over and over again from poem to poem.. i dont like it. Free form lets me get out what i want to say the way i want to say it..
thanks for the compliment though! biggrin
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Posted: Sat May 28, 2005 9:16 am
That was so sweet! I really liked it! You could feel the sadness and joy of the main character and it read well! I can't wait to read more of your poems!
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Posted: Tue May 31, 2005 2:24 pm
I like it. It's sad and happy at the same time. The ending was amazing. It made me get tingles down my back, when it tied back to the title and the beginning so perfectly. I really liked it.
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