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Posted: Mon Sep 20, 2004 9:58 am
this was for history, we were doing the war ...
The End is Inevitable, The time is just to be decided
The mud swallows them, The people you’ve fought side by side with in this God forsaken place. Your friends. Your allies. You watch them die around you, Inside it destroys you but masculinity is pride. Your hard exterior. Mud, lice, gas, mould, rats, bodies, The reek of the trench, The stench of decay, The smell of war. A foul smell, a foul taste, a foul sound and a foul sight in every aspect. A shot goes off, Another body falls. Your body. An empty shell hits the floor and your lifeless body comes crashing down on top of it with a thud. Death. In one shot. Fear not, Death is not the end, merely the beginning of something better. A spring time of happiness. Replacing lakes of mud and blood with rivers of pristine waters, Stumps of dead trees with beautiful towering oaks And disease ridden rats with new born lambs. The end was inevitable. The time was just decided.
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Posted: Mon Sep 20, 2004 1:33 pm
Wow, that's really awesome. I like the way you broke it up. Ur pretty awesome!
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Posted: Mon Sep 20, 2004 8:20 pm
so true....so true..... Very good job. I like the use of broken patterns. Nice imagery too eek
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Posted: Tue Sep 21, 2004 8:14 am
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