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PostPosted: Mon Aug 07, 2006 1:20 pm


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Hello and welcome to my story. This story has been well-liked on my FictionPress page and has already won me one writing contest here on Gaia, with at least one more placing coming judging by the reaction of the contest holder. So I figured posting here would be a good way to get some more comments.

First off, since this is the first post, I'll give a little bit of info about myself. My name is Sarah, and despite my avatar, I am a girl. I am fifteen and have never had a boyfriend, which explains the awkward parts in this story.

Desperately Wanting is the story of two prophecies who are destined to be together, but before you stop reading due to the cliche, this one is sort of different. The prophecy is like its own character within the story, and it torments both the main characters in some amusing ways.

The story is inspired by the song "Desperately Wanting" by Better Than Ezra.


"I remember running through the wet grass
And falling a step behind
Both of us never tiring
Desperately wanting"


If you'd like to hear the song, PM me and I'll send you my E-mail so I can e-mail it to you.

Please, read on and post your thoughts. I'm always up for constructive criticism, but try not to be too harsh; I don't have very much confidence in my ability to write, although other people think differently.

Also, since I am desperate for reveiws on my FictionPress page, if you'd like to review there, I'll link you to this story and you can review.

I will post two chapters every three days. So be on the lookout. Also, while I type in size 10 font normally, the chapters and any posts made relating to the story will be in the default font so they're easier to read. Because I'm nice like that.

And, if you do art and read this and like it, or just need something to draw, would you consider drawing the two characters in it? Couple or single, it doesn't matter. Their bios and other information are located here.

This story is rated PG-13.
PostPosted: Mon Aug 07, 2006 1:21 pm



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PostPosted: Mon Aug 07, 2006 1:22 pm


Chapter One:
Twice


Damn, she could sure get herself into trouble. Not only was she being stupid by walking alone in that part of town, but she was also doing it at night. I was sort of surprised she wasn’t blonde, as human culture seems to find blondes incredibly dim-witted people with no sense of what’s sane or of what’s going on around them.

So as I followed her inconspicuously down the street, muttering quietly to myself about her stupidity, I counted all of the alleyways in which danger could be lurking. In which someone could be waiting to pull her in and rape her, claiming her first-born child as theirs for the side of darkness. In which someone could be waiting to kill her so neither side could have the child.

I had no idea of where she was going. The streets in that part of town were so similar to a labyrinth that I wouldn’t be able to tell my way back to my apartment. She was headed in the general direction of downtown, to the nightlife bars and clubs that remained open for all hours. She was twenty-three, just out of college, and destined to have my child. Literally. I didn’t like the fate, especially since my destined was stupid enough to go walking alone in the worst part of town and she had no idea of who I was. Hell, she didn’t even know I was following her. And I liked it that way. Wait until she needs to know before I reveal myself to her.

In the midst of my silent fuming, I heard her scream, jolting my mind back to the deserted street from which she had just disappeared. I bolted from my car and ran across the street to where she had been taken, yelling, “Miranda!” in hopes of getting a response from her so I knew which alley she was in. There was another scream, but not as a response to my question. I headed toward the alley from which it had come.

She was kicking and screaming for all she was worth (which was quite a lot in prophetic terms). But the man on top of her wouldn’t budge as he proceeded in ripping her clothes off.

I ran into the alley and pulled him off of her, pulling a knife from my side and holding it to his neck. “You leave you her alone,” I growled. Then I shoved him out of the alley and he ran. Which I hadn’t expected him to do the first time I pushed him out.

Turning back to Miranda, I pulled my jacket off and handed it to her. She took it and wrapped it around herself, sobbing.

“Are you all right?” I asked, kneeling in front of her. I hoped the prophecy didn’t choose that time to act up, and luckily, it didn’t.

She nodded, pulling my jacket even tighter around herself. Sniffling, she wiped her eyes. “T-Thank you,” she stuttered.

Well, I couldn’t have her getting raped, now could I? “You’re welcome,” I replied quietly. “Do you want me to drive you home?”

She looked up at me, her eyes untrusting. But in a few moments, they changed and she nodded. Damn prophecy. It made both of us do things we normally wouldn’t do. Like she normally wouldn’t accept a car ride home from some guy who just saved her from being raped. And I normally wouldn’t move halfway across the country so I could live in the same city as her. But the prophecy is relentless sometimes.

After she gave me directions telling me where her house was, I found myself parked in front of it. It wasn’t much of a house. Just a town house she shared with a college buddy. She opened the door and ran to the front door, saying nothing and taking my coat with her.


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That Friday, no more than three days later, she decided to take a walk downtown again. Different streets, this time, but the same neighborhood, nonetheless. Again, I was following her with my car, headlights off, barely moving. And again, she screams as she is pushed into an alleyway.

I was almost too late that time. The rapist was just about ready to do the deed with her. But again, I came to Miranda’s rescue and pulled him off of her by knifepoint. It wasn’t the same man as the other night’s had been, but I knew he was sent by the same organization. They would keep sending men out until one of them managed to get Miranda pregnant.

The new rapist didn’t run like the last one had. I almost had to stab him to make him go away. But he swore he’d be back to finish the deed. As long as he wasn’t castrated by his superior for not finishing it the first time.

Miranda looked at me again with more bitterness in her eyes. In the dim light from the streetlights, she looked beautiful. Her wavy brown hair was ruffled from the rapist’s assault, her eyes were furious and scared. Her breathing was fast from the attack.

“What are you doing? Following me?” But her words were poison. And she was once again pulling my jacket tighter around her body. How nice that she would continue wearing it after she stole it.

“Aren’t you glad I am?” I shot back. “Come on, let me give you a ride.”

“I don’t think so,” she spat. “You could be just like them.”

“If I’ve been following you, don’t you think I would’ve done it already?” Even though we’re destined to make a child together. “Come on.”

She seemed to believe my answer, but it could’ve just been the prophecy again. She took the hand I offered her and I pulled her to her feet and led her to my car.

I wasn’t taking her home this time. Not to her home, at least. She didn’t even notice until I pulled up in front of the building. Then her anger broke loose.
PostPosted: Mon Aug 07, 2006 1:23 pm


Chapter Two:
On Your Mark

“This isn’t my house,” she said. Her voice was still calm-ish. Only a slight bit confused.

“I know,” I said, pulling my key from the ignition. “It’s mine.”

“What?” she exclaimed. “Take me home!”

“I can’t do that.” I couldn’t. She was only going to get into more trouble if I let her run loose around the city. “You’re staying with me for tonight.”

“You’re going to rape me, too?” She unbuckled and reached for the door handle, but I hit the door-lock button, keeping her inside. Finding her own door-lock button, she pushed it, unlocking the doors. From there, we went into a door locking battle for a few seconds until she turned to me. “Let me out!”

“Where are you going to go?” I asked her. “You’re half naked and on the wrong side of town. Are you going to walk home like that?”

“Shut up,” she said, folding her arms across her chest.

“And if you are choosing to walk home, I’d like my jacket back.” It was too cold to be running around without it.

Miranda stared out the window with enough intensity to break it.

I sighed. “I’m not going to rape you,” I informed her. Not unless this damn prophecy takes over my mind. “If you really want to know what’s going on, I’ll tell you in the morning. Right now, I’m too tired to even think about raping you, so can you make up your mind before I fall asleep?”

“For one night,” she said bluntly. Then she got out of the car and slammed the door closed behind her.

Inside my apartment, I got her an un-torn shirt and gave her a blanket to sleep on the couch with. Then I locked myself in my room, hoping not to have to see her until morning.


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The next morning, she banged on the door at seven until I woke up. It was barely light out when I opened my eyes, but I didn’t dare keep her waiting. No, the prophecy wouldn’t let me. So I dragged myself out of bed and dressed, all the while half-listening to her shouts and fists beating on the door.

When I opened the door, she nearly punched me in the face, but I caught her fist and said, “You wake me at this ghastly hour, you can let me get something to eat.” She just stared at me for a few seconds, but pulled her fist from my hand and let me go into the tiny kitchen to get breakfast.

When I had situated myself on the sofa with a bowl of cereal, I said, “What do you want to know?” I could’ve just told her everything. Get it over with without hearing her poison-filled voice anymore. But I was feeling lazy and decided I’d only tell what she wanted to know. No more. No less.

“Who are you?” First question. Too hard. Too early.

I swallowed a bite of Frosted Flakes. “My name is Fletcher Bolin.” And you and I are destined to have a child together. No. Too creepy. And you and I need to sleep together. No. Too…blunt. And you and I—.

“Hello?” Miranda’s voice drew me from my thoughts, and I mentally hit myself. I didn’t need to tell her that. Now at that moment, at least. She could wait. “Fletcher? What kind of name is that?”

“What kind of name is Miranda?”

“How do you know my name?” She narrowed her eyes at me in such a way that I felt like cowering.

Chewing slowly, I considered my words. “Yes,” I said. “I have been following you.”

She opened her mouth to speak, but I cut her off.

“I have been following you for years. Ever since I was able to locate you in this country.” I shifted uncomfortable on the sofa as she continued staring at me. It was more a glare, actually. “I have no idea how to say this to you, so I’ll just be blunt. Your first-born child is destined to either save or destroy the largest kingdom in Kyoonyt, therefore killing or saving about a hundred-thousand people and destroying or saving nearly half of Kyoonyt—but which one he does will be determined by which side (good or evil) gets to you first and impregnates you.” The words were out all in a rush, and I wasn’t even sure if they had come out right.

“What?” Miranda exclaimed. She gave a nervous laugh. “You’ve got to be kidding me.”

I shook my head, staring into the bowl in my hands.

“I didn’t even understand half of that,” she went on, her voice high-pitched with anger and confusion. “How do I fit into this? And what does my first-born child have to do with anything?” At that point, I was glad she was from Kyoonyt. It saved me a lot of explaining.

“I told you,” I said, not looking up. “Your first-born child will either save or destroy Kyoonyt, depending on which side gets you pregnant first.”

“So you are going to rape me?” She backed away.

“Yes, Miranda, with a spoon in one hand.” I stood and took the empty bowl into the kitchen. Then I went into the bathroom to wash my face and take a leak, hoping Miranda wouldn’t follow me in.

When I went back into the living room and sat on the sofa, she was pacing back and forth talking to herself, one hand on her forehead and the other on her waist. I rested the bottoms of my feet on the edge of the coffee table before continuing.

“There is one person to whom you are supposed to have the child. One you were destined to be with from the day you were born. He will be attracted to you and you to him, due to the prophecy on you both.” I wondered absently if she knew I was speaking in the third person about myself. “And eventually, the two of you will make a child.”

“Oh, boy.” Miranda looked as if she were going to faint as she sunk into one of the chairs facing the sofa. “But that means…I’m a prophecy?” The last three words were spoken slowly, as if she was trying to make herself believe them.

“Kyoonyt is depending on both of you,” I finished. “All three of you, if you count the child.”

“But I’m not even marked,” she said, her hand still on her forehead, rubbing the bridge of her nose as if she had a headache.

“It’s probably beneath your hair,” I told her. My mark look like a rather large, symmetrical tattoo on my lower back. Which was a nice way to keep its true purpose hidden. Unless one knew the right history and the prophecy that bound Miranda and I together. That was something that had never happened to me before, and I hoped it never would.

She felt the back of her head, then stood up again and resumed pacing. “Do you know who he is? The other half of the prophecy?”

If I told her, she would freak out. And she would probably run out of the apartment without listening to anything I had to say. So I replied, “No. But I’ve been searching for a while. I’m getting close.”

“Wow. And you’re sure it’s me?”

If my libido is correct. “Come here.” I stood and walked around her when she approached.

“What are you doing?” she asked uneasily as I lifted her hair.

“Looking for your mark.” That came out wrong. “Checking to see if it’s you, since this is the first time I’ve met you.”

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 10, 2006 10:06 am


Chapter Three:
Safe Ignorance


I searched her scalp for the black mark, trying not to let my fingers trail for too long in one place. The damn prophecy liked to act up at the worst times. I wondered if and when her half of the prophecy would begin acting up. And if she would realize it was me.

If she did realize it was me, I had no doubt that both of us would want to sleep together right where we stood. But even though we were destined to, I wasn’t going to risk getting her pregnant unless she loved me and I loved her. If the prophecy was going to be relentlessly throwing us at each other, it was the least I could do.

“There it is,” I said when I found it.

“So it’s true.” She turned and fell back onto the sofa. “And that’s why I was almost raped twice?”

I nodded. “If you don’t mind, I would prefer it if you stayed here until I find the other prophecy. Then he can protect you.”

“I want to go home,” she whined. “Won’t I be safe there?”

Sighing, I sat down next to her. “It’s either you’re alive and have the child, or you’re dead and the kingdom goes anyway. You won’t be found as easily here as you would in your own home.”

She closed her eyes and leaned her head back, revealing a thin neck I would have loved to kiss at that moment. I averted my eyes, staring at one of the hanging plants in front of one of the windows. So what if I was a guy? I could still have hanging plants in my apartment if I wanted.

“How long do you think I’d have to stay here?” she asked, the disdain in her voice not penetrating deep enough to hurt me. I was still trying to control myself.

Swallowing hard, I replied, “I’m close to finding him, like I said. But I’m not sure exactly how long more I’ll need.” Just until you love me, I’m sure. But who knows how long that’s going to take?

“Can I go back and get some of my stuff?”

“Of course,” I said. “You’re not going to be wearing my clothes until this is over.”

She looked as if she wanted to hit me. “Look, Fletcher. I don’t want to be here. But if it’s my life, then I guess I have no choice. I just want this to be over.”

“So do I.”

“Then can we just leave each other alone?”

“As long as you aren’t banging on my door at seven every morning.”

She glared at me, but grinned slightly. “Fine. You need to get more food. And you need to make room for all my stuff.”

“You’re not bringing your whole house over here. I only have so much space. And a lot of it is filled with my stuff.”

“Where will I sleep?”

Good question. “I’ll set the guestroom for you.” So the prophecy was the reason I was paying an extra hundred dollars a month for a guestroom. “There should be enough closet space for your things.” And the reason I had taken the two dressers after my mother passed. s**t.

“When are we going to go?” Miranda asked.

“Do you want to shower?” I banged my head on the back of the couch. I could just see all the euphemisms in the coming weeks.

She was looking at me with an odd expression on her face. “Sure,” she replied, confusion in her voice.

Eyes closed, I pointed behind us and said, “Second door on the right. Right after the kitchen.”

When she had left, I opened my eyes and watched the sliver of light from the bathroom disappear as she closed the door. The next few weeks were going to be Hell. What had I gotten myself into?

As soon as I heard the water turn on, I wished I were deaf. I locked myself in my room again, throwing myself onto the bed and clutching a pillow to my chest. Something to do to keep my mind off images of a wet, naked Miranda that seemed adamant on overcoming my mind.

Fifteen minutes later, the water shut off and I breathed a sigh of relief. But she knocked on my door and asked for a fresh shirt, and my heart began pounding again. After I managed to get my bearings and hand her another shirt through the crack in the door, I climbed into the shower myself.

After I was dressed, we headed for Miranda’s house.
PostPosted: Thu Aug 10, 2006 10:12 am


Chapter Four:
Peanut Butter


When we arrived, Miranda immediately wanted to call her roommate, who was working at the time. Then she turned to me and asked what she was going to do about her own job. I told her it would be taken care of, as I was still milking an inheritance from my parents. And once her employer heard that she was a prophecy and that her life was in danger, she would be hired back on if she got fired.

Inside, I followed her around with a suitcase she’d practically thrown at me, watching with dread as she piled clothing and makeup into it. Living with a woman was something new to me, unfortunately. Especially one who seemed as high-maintenance as Miranda.

She had to be one of the most high-maintenance people alive, if not the most. I mean, I was supposed to keep her alive. Literally. While trying to resist the urge to jump on top of her due to a forceful urge, no less. What could be worse than that? I can’t say I’ve ever heard of a guy in that type of situation before.

I told her to leave a note for her roommate, telling her only that she was a prophecy and that she was safe.

“What’s your phone number?” she asked.

“Why?” I had a bag in each hand, each filled with clothing. Luckily, she wasn’t one of those girls with a ton of shoes, too. That would have been awful.

“So she can call me.”

“We’re trying to stay hidden, Miranda,” I pointed out. “Why the hell would we leave my phone number?”

“Can I tell her to call my cell?”

“If you must.” I sighed as she wrote the note. She taped it to the refrigerator, then we left.


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Back at my apartment, she unpacked her clothing into the dressers while I made the bed. She hadn’t spoken since we’d left her house, so the silence was starting to get to me. But I was beginning to fear what would come out of my mouth, so I remained silent as well.

“This is nice furniture for someone like you to have,” she commented as she trailed her fingers along the edge of the cherry dresser she was currently stuffing.

“Someone like me?” I echoed, wondering what she meant.

“Yeah. It’s nice. Almost an antique.” Her fingers made streaks in the dust on top of the dresser.

“They were my mother’s,” I told her, finishing the bed. I turned and sat on it. “Just because I live here doesn’t mean I don’t have nice stuff. The reason I can mostly live without working? I was left a fairly large inheritance after my parents passed.”

She turned to look at me questioningly, but the expression changed as soon as she saw me sitting there. I could’ve sworn it was the same expression I wore when the prophecy acted up. It scared her, what she was feeling. Just like it sometimes scared me. And the fact that I was sitting on the bed probably didn’t help her any.

I stood and left, hoping I wouldn’t begin to feel the same way. Just what I needed: Both of us getting to the point with the prophecy where we couldn’t control ourselves so early in the process of my wooing her. It’d be like building a house before the tree was cut down: A lot of confusion and kicking oneself for stupidity afterward.

“What happens if I can’t control it?” Miranda asked as she walked into the kitchen. By that time, it was lunchtime, so I was making myself a peanut-butter sandwich while I waited for her to finish overrunning my guestroom.

“If you can’t control it?” I echoed before licking the spoon I was using in the peanut butter. I knew she was talking about the lust from the prophecy, but not exactly what she meant.

“Yeah.” She leaned back on the counter as I turned around. “What if…” She let her words trail off, shrugging. “You know…”

“Ah,” I said, understanding. “What if you have sex with me instead of the other half of the prophecy?” Then we wouldn’t have a problem.

She nodded uneasily.

“If you can’t control it, I will try my best to keep you away from me.” I took a bite of my sandwich. “This prophecy is too important for us to be reckless, so you need to try your best to control it, as well.”

Nodding, she turned and opened the refrigerator behind her. “There is nothing edible in here.” Yeah. Sure. Change the topic from your desire, even though it is possibly the most important thing in your life right now.

As I passed her, I put the jar of peanut butter next to her on the counter. I could live on peanut butter. She could live with it for a few weeks.

“I’m allergic to peanuts,” she called to me as I took my sandwich to the sofa.

“No, you’re not,” I called back. “You were eating them perfectly fine at the humans’ Independence Day celebration.” Burn.

“You followed me there?” Miranda came into the living room empty-handed.

“I follow you everywhere.”

She began pacing back and forth in front of me as I watched, trying to unstuck my tongue from the roof of my mouth. “You don’t have a TV,” she stated.

“I know,” I managed through the peanut-y goodness.

“But what do you do all day?” she asked.

“Do you really want to know?” I questioned sarcastically.

The windows seemed to fascinate her. The view from the fifth-story apartment was nice; you could see the whole city from the window.

“I do something called reading,” I went on when she didn’t reply. “And, of course, I follow you everywhere. But since you’re here, I am left short of my favorite pastime.”

Taking a seat in a chair, she watched as I finished my sandwich. Eventually, when she got hungry enough, she would eat the peanut butter. Until then, she could suffer.

“Can we go to the supermarket?” she asked. “Please? I don’t want to eat peanut butter until I get out of here.”

“Fine,” I said. I needed an excuse to go grocery shopping.

In an instant, Miranda was ready to go.

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