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Lady Phantom Angel

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 9:08 pm


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Few words about this story. The time period mostly take place between Maternal Instinct and Doctors Disorders. Even if we didn’t write the emblem.((most people think of it there anyway.)). But you’ll really have to not think about the movies or the episodes after DD. So again thank you for reading im worried on what everyone might think so please review. ^^ and its not finished yet but please bear with me and ill try hard keep updateing any here we go.


Chapter 1. Discipline.

Dateline: Amity Park, Illinois Casper High School. 1:45 PM.

Danny Fenton was watching the clock. “ Come on, Come on” he grumbled.
“Just fifteen minutes left and Spring Break would be official.” He looked around
at all the other students. Most of them where either like him watching the clock, or getting an early start on the homework assigned for over the break.

“This time.” he thought “ No one is going to stop me from getting some serious ghost training done.” Reflecting back on what happened last month with his mother and his archenemy Vlad Plasmius. At the moment Danny would have loved to have talked strategies with Tucker and Sam but sadly his six period Math class was the only one that all three of them where not in.

“Could this day go any slower?” He grumbled. Not realizing he had said that aloud Danny’s teacher Miss Galley interrupted his thoughts.

“ Well Danny if you feel that this day is moving on soooo slowly why not come to the board and show us how to do this Algebra problem?”

“Uh…….” Great. >_< he thought I had to open my big mouth.

Dash Baxter who was sitting three seats away laughed. “Woah look out everyone Fentdingo’s talking to himself. Watch out!” That comment got most of the class laughing. (( High School can be so cruel.))

“ THAT’S ENOUGH BAXTER.“ It’s time to grow up!” Miss Galley yelled so the whole class could hear.

That was Miss Galley for you she wouldn’t tolerate any form of
class disruptions, and if you did she put you on the spot. Unlike most teachers she also didn‘t care what your status in school was. “BAXTER BUCKETS NOW!!!”

“Man that‘s just lame.” Dash complained as walked over to the back of the room.

There he picked up the two 3 gallon buckets of water ((one for each hand)) that Miss Galley kept and walked out in the hallway. She made it that, if anyone caused problems they had to stand out in the hallway with the buckets of water for 15 to 20 minutes.
(( It’s painful trust me. After 5 minutes your hands get sore and your not allowed to put them down at all.)) “That’s how they do it in Japan and I say it’s a fine way to show
discipline.” Was her answer to that.

“ Well Fenton are you coming up here or not?” Miss Galley asked turning her attention back to Danny.

“0_0* Oh yeah! Right! Coming.” Man I am so glad I never really get on her bad side.
He thought as he made his way up front.

“OK Danny! I‘ll read you the problem and you write it out and solve.”

“Yes ma‘am.” Danny picked up the chalk waiting for her to give the problem.

She began to say “X times Y over…….” Then her voice just stopped.

“ Times what Miss Galley?” Danny turned to look at her and then…….. “Gasp”. Her head was down in her book and she looked like she was reading it, but she was frozen
in place.

“What the?” Danny frantically looked at the rest of the class. They too seemed to have suffered the same fate, frozen in their places.

“What the heck is going on?……”


Roll Theme Song.

He's a phantom
Danny Phantom, (echo) Danny Phantom, Phantom
Yo Danny Fenton, he was just 14,
When his parents built a very strange machine,
It was designed to view a world unseen
He's gonna catch em all 'cuz he's Danny Phantom

When it didn't quite work his folks they just quit,
But then Danny took a look inside of it,
There was a great big flash everything just changed,
His molecules got all rearranged

Phantom, Phantom

When he first woke up he realized,
He had snowy white hair and glowy green eyes,
He could walk through walls, disappear, and fly,
He was much more unique than the other guy
And it was then that he knew what he had to do,
He had to stop all the ghosts that were comin' through

He's here to fight for me and you

He's gonna catch 'em all 'cuz he's Danny Phantom,
Gonna catch 'em all 'cuz he's Danny Phantom,
Gonna catch 'em all 'cuz he's (whisper) Danny Phantom
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Chapter 2 coming soon, Thank you Rev for the great Tite card.
PostPosted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 9:13 pm


Chapter 2. Encounter

Casper High School. 1:55 PM.

“DANNY PHANTOM?” a loud masculine voice boomed from the walls.

The sudden sound of someone calling him by his other identity made Danny jump. “Ahhh…..” His ghost sense soon kicked in. The familiar sensation of the chills washed over him and not to soon after the blue mist escaped from his mouth. “So it is a ghost.” He thought.

Not waiting for another reply from the mystery ghost. Danny shouted his battle cry. “I’m Going Ghost” and jumped up into the air to transform.

Two brilliant blue rings of light surrounded Danny. As the rings moved past him, reveling that Danny’s once sky blue eyes had changed to glowing ectoblastic green, and his once raven black hair had now become snowy white. Instead of his normal red & white tee shirt and blue jeans, he was now wearing a black and white hazmat suit. ((Minus the helmet and goggles of course.)) Danny Fenton had now become Danny Phantom the half human/half ghost eighth world wonder. (( Sorry. * I had Kimberly Locke’s 8th World Wonder song stuck in my head when I wrote that line.))

“All right! Who are you and what the heck did you do to these people?” Danny yelled to the open air. His voice now sounded a bit like an echo. He strained all of his senses to find where his enemy may attack.

“ Heh! I herd you where pretty bold, but I would have to say a bit reckless……. You need not worry Ghost Boy. I’m not here for a fight.” Said the mystery ghost as he finely phased into the room from the back wall.

He was a very humanoid looking for a ghost. His hair was just past his shoulders and had a faint light green tint to it. The armor he wore was kind of like what a martial artist would wear in brown and beige colors. He also had a black bandana on his head, but what you mostly saw “was his eyes.” They glowed an eerie yellow. Unlike most of the ghosts Danny encountered most have red or green eyes. “Who was this guy?”

“Then what do you want?” Danny demanded. He wasn’t too thrilled with that last comment. What did he know? They never met before.

“ My name is Jerome Tempest and I don’t have a lot of time for chit chat. I am here because I need your help Danny Phantom. Whether or not you will help me is up to you.”

“ And what if I refuse?” Danny questioned.

“ Don’t say yes or no yet. There is more I need to tell you about, but not here. My power is growning very thin and I wont be able to keep these humans frozen for long.
Meet me in your parent’s lab at 4:00 PM. That should give you enough time to talk to your human friends about this.” Jerome explained.

“ How the heck do you know so much about me?” Danny was getting pretty irritated at this ghost. He wasn’t making any sense and he seemed to know everything about him.
“ I want answers.”

“ I can’t give them to you now. Just be at the lab.” Jerome shot back. “Oh! You better get back to where you were standing before I froze time. Or else everybody will see Inviso Bill hovering before them and your teacher will wonder where Danny Fenton is. You have about 10 seconds.” With that he was gone.

“Gerrrrrruh.” Danny grunted. He quickly jumped back to his place by the chalk board and detransformed. He had just a couple of seconds to spare before he herd Miss Galley’s voice again finishing the problem.

“= 27 and if Y= 3 then Slove for X.” Miss. Galley looked up from her book. She could see Danny was looking over at the back of the room with this angry look on his face.
“ Danny? What are you looking…….”

Before she could finish her question. “ BRING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”
It was the bell, School had just ended.

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 9:14 pm


Chapter 3. Thoughts

Casper High School. 2:00 PM.

“ What? Class is over, already?!” Miss Galley exclaimed. “Okay students make sure you get your homework done and don’t wait till the last minute! Have a good vacation.”

Danny walked back to his desk for his book bag. “ What could that ghost possibly want my help with?” He thought. “He could stop time for Pete’s sake! What could I do to help him?”

As Danny gathered his things up he heard his teacher chewing Dash’s head off about
respecting others.“ I mean it Mr. Baxter! If you do or say one more thing out of line to any of the students in this class, I will have you suspended from school.”

“ What?? Nooooooooo!!!!! Then I won’t be able to play on any of the sports teams,” Dash whined.

“ Well then you had better shape up or ship out, Mr. Baxter.” Miss Galley said flatly.

“Yes ma’am.” Was the last thing Danny heard from Dash as he headed out the door. He had more important things to do then listen in on Dash getting the third
degree. Even if it was fun to watch.

********

Casper High Court Yard. 2:10 P.M.

Tucker Foley and Samantha Manson usually met up with Danny out in the school’s court yard. Funny thing was, Danny was normally the first one there.

“I’m telling you Sam donuts are the way to go. Everyone loves donuts.” Tucker was saying.

“Riiiiight…….. Everyone is going to buy donuts from you. The one who made Foley by Tucker Foley not to mention the former owner of Flour Power Day Care and BooYaa Ghost Tours. Need I go on?” Sam smirked as she looked at her friend.

“Alright so my last ideas didn’t work out to my advantage, but with my Mom’s secret donut recipe I’m sure this will be a hit. All I need is your and..."

"You need Sam’s and Who’s help?” A familiar voice echoed out of nowhere.

“Ahhhhhhhh!” Sam and Tucker both jumped and fell backwards. As Danny appeared in front of them.
“Don’t do that!” Both of them yelled in unison.

“Do what?" Danny questioned, looking innocently at his friends. " I figured you two would be used to this by now.” He said as a grin appeared on his face. He soon stopped when he saw the angry glares on his friends faces.

“Ok, enough about that. Guys we have a major problem. Let's start for my house and I'll tell you on the way."

*********

Outside Fenton Works. 2:30 P.M.

When Danny finished talking, Sam and Tucker stared at him in amazement.

Tucker was the first one to speak. "You mean he actually stopped time?! I didn't notice
a thing!"

"Well, duh!" Sam exclaimed impatiently, "I think that's the point!"

"The question now," Danny muttered, "is what do we do about it? He's supposed to meet us in the lab at 4:00 and I don't even know what he wants!"

"And what are we gonna do about your parents?" Tucker added thoughtfully. "If they walked into the lab we could have trouble."

"We could tell them we heard there was ghost activity on the outskirts of town," Sam suggested immediately. "Its worked before."

"No," Danny replied, "It won't work anymore. My parents just finished the Fenton Radar which detects paranormal activity anywhere in the city."

"So what do we do?" Tucker whined.

"I don't know." Was Danny's dejected response.
PostPosted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 9:18 pm


Chapter 4. Meeting

Inside Fenton Works 2:35 PM

Jasmine Fenton had just stopped at home to pick up her notes for the speech she was supposed to give at her Psych Club Meeting.

“ Yes! I found my SHC notes!” (( Author’s note: SHC= Stress, Health, and Coping)) Jazz turned to pick up her car keys when the sound of her brother’s voice drifted through an open window. “….meeting us in the lab at 4:00 and I don’t even know what he wants!”

Jazz froze, listening intently to the rest of the conversation. “ Who’s meeting them in the lab?”

She listened thoughtfully to Sam and Tucker’s suggestions on how to get her parent’s out of the house.

“ No, they can’t make that excuse, but I can.” Turning, she raced down to the lab.

“ Mom! Dad! I Just got a call that there’s a ghost at my Psych Club meeting!” She hesitated a split second before adding “ And I’m sure everyone would love to hear you lecture on about ghosts!

“WHAT!” Jack Fenton exclaimed, then by dropping the tool he was using “Quick, Maddie, to the Fenton Family Ghost Assault Vehicle!”

As her parent’s vanished up the stairs behind her she growled under her breath, “ You SO! Owe me for this Danny.”

Outside Fenton Works 2:45 PM

Danny was just about to reach for the door knob when the door flew open, knocking him backwards. He narrowly avoided a collision with the wall by going intangible, grateful that his parents were too preoccupied to notice. “What in the world?!”

Jazz appeared in the open doorway, purse and keys in hand. “They think there’s a ghost at my Psych club meeting,” She said in a resigned tone. “ We’ll be gone for awhile.”

With that Jazz got into her car and followed the Ghost Assault Vehicle down the road.
The three friends exchanged looks, amazed by their good fortune.

“Well that takes care of one of our dilemmas.” Sam replied.

**********

Fenton’s Laboratory 3:55 P.M.

“I Don’t know , Danny, I Don’t think you should trust this guy.”

Danny glanced over at Sam, indecision written all over his face. Before he resumed his pacing Tucker pointed out.

“Dude , you’re wearing a hole in the floor, calm down. Think about it, if this ghost had wanted to harm you he could have shown the whole class you’re Inviso Bill.”

“ I suppose…..” Danny trailed off into an uncomfortable silence, then gasped as a blue mist rose from his mouth.

“Good, you’re here and I see you brought your human friends.” Tempest emerged through the swirling green light of the Fenton Portal, a smug smile on his face.

“ We’re not sidekicks you know!” Tucker and Sam argued in unison, matching glares fixed on Jerome’s smug face.

“ Oh of course you’re not.” Jerome shot back.

“Okay!” Danny shouted in frustration, flinging his arms out to the sides, hoping to stop the impending argument. “ What was it you wanted?”

“Straight to the point eh, Ghost boy?” Jerome pulled a small cube from his pocket and tossed it towards the trio. “ This is the point.”

Tucker caught the object and stared at it in disbelieve. “ A Rubix cube?! Is this some kind of a joke?”

“ No! It’s no joke. You see as you can already tell I am a ghost that can control time at most points. However! I am almost completely powerless because this blasted human stole my Time Spear the source of my power.”

“ So that’s why your asking Danny for help because…? Sam was about to finish but Jerome cut her off.

“ Because He’s a Halfa. Half Human Half Ghost. You may be the only one who can help me.” He eyed Danny wondering what he would say about all this.

Danny on the other hand was taking this all in. He from experience knew that yes not all ghost were evil. So maybe this Tempest guy was telling the truth and if it’s a human causing the problem maybe it would be better for Danny Phantom and Fenton to handle it.

“ Ok So you want me to get the Time Spear back for you?” Danny asked.

“ Yes. That Cube is the last of my power it will take you three to the proper time to where the Spear is located.” Jerome explained.

“ But it’s Just a Rubix Cube?!” exclaimed Tucker.” How is this supposed to let us travel through time?”
“ And why can’t you use it?” Danny added. Looking over at Tucker who twisted the top of the cube to illustrate his point and then the three friends promptly disappeared.

“Actually, I couldn’t solve it.” Jerome said to the empty room before her vanished back into the Fenton Portal.


Chapter 5 coming Soon.

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