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Tak-Jak

PostPosted: Wed Aug 09, 2006 4:11 pm


From a project.. 100 themes.
This is #8 but a personal favorite.


--Stolen Innocence--

It all happened so fast.
(The wall, the screaming, the men.)

Then time slowed down;
every second was dripping molasses.

We became insects in a spiders’ web:
caught, but still breathing.

Lily and I locked eyes.
(And never looked away.)

And as his thrusting became more painful,
I heard Lily sing

“You are my sunshine, my only sunshine
... please don’t take my sunshine away."


Hope you Enjoy.
sweatdrop

heart ~Remy
PostPosted: Sun Aug 13, 2006 4:17 pm


This made me picture 9/11.

Queeny
Captain


Tak-Jak

PostPosted: Sun Aug 13, 2006 5:51 pm


Not the intention.
But still a good thought.

Thanks for reading.

heart ~Remy
PostPosted: Fri Dec 15, 2006 11:25 am


Queeny
This made me picture 9/11.


Me too at first.

The last stanza chilled me. Great effect.
I believe the theme is lust, correct?

"We became insects in a spiders' web:
caught, but still breathing."


I assume this is about how society trapped them into lust, but they still lived.

Lily sings such a song, because maybe she hopes this love will never leave due to the lust she grants.

Wirekittin the nefarious

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