Alrighty! I think that mpst people here know how to rp decently, but I figured I ought to make this thread as a reminder. Here we go!
These are suggestions and such to improve your roleplaying "skills"
First No one liners, they become annoying, and if used too often it makes people think you lack any sort of literary skill.
Second Try to make your posts as clear as possible. For example:
i walk through the store i find some books and walk to the clerk hello i would like to buy these okay here is the price okay here is the money for the price i take my books and leave the store
Now you can understand what their saying, but it wasn't any fun to read, and made only enough sence so you could get the basics. A better way of saying this would be...
I walk through a bookstore. I hand them to the clerk.
"Hello, I would like to buy these."
"Okay., heres the price."
"Ok heres the money."
"Thank you, heres your books and change."
"Thank you"
I carry my books out of the store.
Still could be snazzyer, but it works.
Third Person Is a definate better way to portray what you want to get across, for example:
Del walked into the bookstore, the soft airconditioning hit her face and made her sigh with relif. She picked up a few books and wne to the clerk to pay for them.
"together they cost $20.54" Del winced at the cost and yanked her wallet from her jeans and payed.
"Thanks, have a nice day.."
"Yeah you too." Del called back, smiling as she walked back out into the sweltering heat.
See? Snazzy ^^. Anyhow, thats basicly all you need to worry about, if you want to add extra detail then feel free to do so, it is your choice after all.
