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Posted: Sat Aug 12, 2006 7:05 am
Sitting in the bathtub. Fully clothed, no water. I was drawing something with a #2 pencil. I was my friend's birthday. I couldn't remember who's, but it was one of them. The bathtub I was sitting in was in the middle of a hall. I knew it was a friend's house, but I hadn't ever seen it before. I was thinking about Arsenium, my favorite singer. He has such a beautiful voice. I was thinking about what it would be like to meet him. I was also extremely hungry. There was a little boy downstairs at the party. He was watching TV. He had a few present boxes next to him. It was christmas downstairs, but summer upstairs. I opened one of the boxes as quietly as I could. It was a chocolate bar. I couldn't resist. I was so hungary and it was just sitting there on the floor. It was almost screaming for me to open it and consume its chocolaty goodness. I took three bites. What a three bites it was. The smooth chocolate mealted in my mouth and gentaly slid down my throat. I tried to cover the wrapper back up and put it back into the box. Useless. You could see the bitemarks, the crumpled tin foil, the broken wrapper--everything! I ran back to the bathtub and started drawing again. I was ignoring the fact that I had just, in fact, taken candy from a baby. I was so miserable. Just then, he appered! I couldn't believe it! There he was! Standing right in front of me as if we had known each other forever! I couldn't believe it! Was it real? Had my wishes come true? He came over to me. He gently touched my lips with his soft, warm hand. It was like heaven. I was staring at him innocently. He slowly eased forward. As his lips touched mine, my heart felt as if it had learched right out of my chest and done a little jig on the floor. He backed away. "I love you so much." I said to him. "I love you, too." He recited, passionatly. Just then, The little kid showed up at the end of the hall. He looked mad. He started walking downstairs. "I will be right back, don't go anywhere." I told Arsenium. I raced down the hallway and grabed the kid's shoulder gently. "I had a bit of your chocolate bar and I didn't ask your permission first. I'm sorry." I said to him. A smile ran across his face and he walked back downstairs. Many things happened after that, but I didn't pay any attention to them because I was still dancing on the though of my very first kiss....and from Arsenium! It was a dream come true. I woke up. As i was lying in my bed, I was trying to get back to sleep so I might have the same dream.
Edit: I remember a little more. After Arsenium left, one of my friends was there. He was in a towel, which was awkward. He was fatter than he was at school. He threw a blue radio out the window and watched it fall. He was also laughing.
DISCLAIMER: It was just a dream. I put no thought into this as a story.
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Posted: Sat Aug 12, 2006 11:49 am
This was...Odd. I really don't know what to say about it. sweatdrop
You had a few grammar and spelling errors, and the centered font is a little hard to read and understand, because the paragraphs are weird.
If there's more, I'll keep reading, because it may be interesting.
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Posted: Sat Aug 12, 2006 2:01 pm
Sorry, I had just woken up and I wanted to get it down before I forgot it. You know how dreams are.
Edit: I made the font a little bigger and fixed quite a few errors. I don't think I've ever seen so many typos. O____o Sorry.
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