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Posted: Tue May 10, 2005 7:06 pm
You may think you are alone, but I'm always around. Tears are my contacting sound. You hear them once or twice a day thats me. I want your attention I want you to listen, to know. The voices you hear when you think you've gone insane are my twisted hands toying with your brain. You may tell your self I'm not real you may think a thousand lies. Just know I'm only visable through your eyes.
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Posted: Sat May 14, 2005 2:14 pm
I love it. It's so beautiful...especially "you may think a thousand lies." For some reason that part really sticks out to me.
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Posted: Mon May 16, 2005 7:21 am
nicole_dulany I love it. It's so beautiful...especially "you may think a thousand lies." For some reason that part really sticks out to me. Thank you.
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Posted: Tue May 17, 2005 10:49 pm
that is something. good job biggrin
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The Bookwyrm Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed May 18, 2005 12:21 pm
Ooo Very nice. I realy enjoyed the part about tears being the call for this particular entity. It's a very easy piece to relate to.
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Posted: Wed May 18, 2005 4:18 pm
Fantastic! I love the flow, and it's so original. Great Job!
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Posted: Thu May 19, 2005 7:03 pm
wow. wonderful!!! like it!!! hate you for taking ideas that i might have come up with... (joking) biggrin
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