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ezekiel_vamp

PostPosted: Tue May 10, 2005 7:06 pm


You may think you are alone, but I'm always around.
Tears are my contacting sound. You hear them once or twice a day
thats me. I want your attention I want you to listen, to know.
The voices you hear when you think you've gone insane are my twisted
hands toying with your brain. You may tell your self I'm not real you
may think a thousand lies. Just know I'm only visable through your eyes.
PostPosted: Sat May 14, 2005 2:14 pm


I love it. It's so beautiful...especially "you may think a thousand lies." For some reason that part really sticks out to me.

nicole_dulany


ezekiel_vamp

PostPosted: Mon May 16, 2005 7:21 am


nicole_dulany
I love it. It's so beautiful...especially "you may think a thousand lies." For some reason that part really sticks out to me.


Thank you.
PostPosted: Tue May 17, 2005 10:49 pm


that is something. good job biggrin

skyheaven


The Bookwyrm
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PostPosted: Wed May 18, 2005 12:21 pm


Ooo Very nice. I realy enjoyed the part about tears being the call for this particular entity. It's a very easy piece to relate to.
PostPosted: Wed May 18, 2005 4:18 pm


Fantastic! I love the flow, and it's so original. Great Job!

Darksky333


moonlight_anowis

PostPosted: Thu May 19, 2005 7:03 pm


wow. wonderful!!! like it!!! hate you for taking ideas that i might have come up with... (joking) biggrin
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Work written between 2003 - 2006

 
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