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GOOD?!?!?!?
  good? that is the best dang poem EVER!!!!
  Nice job
  you may want to fix it a bit
  not really...no
  that sux
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[~.Miss.Jax.~]

PostPosted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 1:13 pm


I've decided to call this one words. It's a simple title...so yeah. I'm pretty proud of how it turned out considering I was slightly bored and that was the reason I wrote it. But I like it for the most part. Tell me what you think!



There is no proper way
For it was never taught in class.
How are we to think and write
About our tragic pasts?

How are we to ramble on
‘Bout pirates, land, and ships?
And how are we to create a thought
‘Bout two lovers touching lips?

How can we create the things
That royalty might tell?
And how are we to write
‘Bout the magic wishing well?

Why are we expected to
Tell ‘bout a teen’s mistake?
And how should we go on to write
If love is real or fake?

Should we ever attempt the feat
That writing makes us face,
Whether we must talk about
The earth or outer space,

Or how two people fall in love
And forever keep their vows,
Or about those who follow dreams
When before, did not know how.

We should ponder what we write
And keep the plot and story true,
But however you decide to think…
Well, that is up to you.

So write with heart and soul
And put emotions on the page
Whether they are joyful
Or cause ferocity and rage.

What you lay upon that page
Is the thing that your mind knew!
So write whatever you decide to write,
Is completely up to you.
PostPosted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 1:04 pm


eek Oh my words! Yet again, your poems are amazing! eek

Harra_Wizen
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[~.Miss.Jax.~]

PostPosted: Sat Sep 16, 2006 7:34 am


you write just as well...I can't take too much credit
PostPosted: Sat Sep 16, 2006 7:35 am


okay, I do love comments and feedback...so...PLEEZ LEAVE COMENTS ANd FEEDBACK!!!

[~.Miss.Jax.~]

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