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Kala-El

PostPosted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 6:16 pm


I know everyone has a deep page like this, here's mine.
I didn't sleep well last night, don't know why.
It just realized... my grandfather's gone... it's been a year, it's not fair.
Why do things happen they way they do?

In my mind he's still here, don't know why.
But why isn't he? It's not fair.
Why do things work out the way they do?

I'm about to cry, don't know why.
What is wrong? It's not fair.
Why do things happen the way they do?

Where is he now? Everywhere... don't know why.
Where was God then? Not here... it's not fair.
Why do things work out the way they do?

... I wonder why

Why do things happen the way they do?

Why do things work out how they do?

... I wonder why

I wondered why, but now I know that thats how things are. Nothing can change that, so:

Why try...?
Why wish...?
Why cry...?
Why want...?
Why lie...?
Why hate...?
Why die...?
Why care...?
I'll always be there.


To understand, you must feel pain. To be stronger, you must feel pain. To love, you must feel pain.





I suck at poetry, it's not one of those rhyming ones. All of the other poems in this guild are much better But I don't care. Deal wit it!
PostPosted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 1:18 pm


eek Oh my words, that is not only an amazing poem, but that could be a fantastic song as well!

Harra_Wizen
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Kala-El

PostPosted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 6:20 pm


Thank you! I wasn't sure that it was all that great, but you made me feel better. ^.^
PostPosted: Wed Aug 23, 2006 2:22 pm


Yes, normally, most people would think it would sound better as a song (I think that as well) but it is a very nice poem, I am used o reading rhymes, so a little bit of Free Verse is fun for me!

Harra_Wizen
Captain


[~.Miss.Jax.~]

PostPosted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 7:17 pm


I can't write free verse...it sounds retarded when I do...but you seem to have a knack for it!!!
PostPosted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 4:17 pm


[~.Miss.Jax.~]
I can't write free verse...it sounds retarded when I do...but you seem to have a knack for it!!!


Same here, really... my free verse could just be a story, and sound a whole lot better!

Harra_Wizen
Captain


Kala-El

PostPosted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 6:28 pm


*Squee* Thanks guys. That makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. lol. J/K. Usually, I don't write free verse, cuz I like things that rhyme, but I'm not all that great at rhyming, so I just do free verse, even though I'm not a real fan of it. wink
PostPosted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 7:02 pm


It really flows. And, as harra said, it sound great as a song! I re-read it just to sing it in my head ^.^

I can't rhyme either, so don't feel bad.

Sanguarian Penguin
Crew


starshine_cayalyn

PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 9:09 am


That was incredible! That is the best one i have read so far, in my opinion anyway! You should write some more, i would love to read them! biggrin
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