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 Posted: Fri Sep 24, 2004 2:58 pm
Hey, this is a page from the sample I am submitting to Slave Labor Please give me your honest opinion. 
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Posted: Fri Sep 24, 2004 6:31 pm
I'd format the text a little better so it doesn't feel so shoved into the word bubbles... and maybe make "Hehe. I like talking to myself." a little bit smaller, to make it seem more like she's commenting on herself. I don't really get the plaid/brick tones, they boggle my eyes... unless you're going for textures or some sort of stylistic thing I'd keep it to just solid tones, but that's up to you. 3nodding
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Posted: Fri Sep 24, 2004 8:03 pm
SLAVE LABOR GRAPHICS?! gonk Ahhhh, you're like living the life I want O.o Anyway, I kinda agree with the tone-thing. It's kinda neat, but maybe a bit over-done. ....I like talking to myself too ^_^
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Posted: Sun Sep 26, 2004 10:48 am
I like it, just I agree with the two others. Some blocked shading might help. Either way I give you all the best luck!
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Posted: Tue Sep 28, 2004 1:44 am
Yeah I think her comment could be smaller,
uh, so what should I soften the tones cuz the solid ones bore me...
as for SLG, I haven't like, talk to them yet or anything, I just preparing things for them. I just hope they like it.
So um, doyou guys like my art and stuff?
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Posted: Tue Sep 28, 2004 3:04 pm
See, the only bad thing about the tone is that you use in the hair /and/ on her cape, pick one, maybe re-do her hair to make it more hair-like or something.. Personally it doesn't seem realistic to me but then again she got wings on her head so... but yeah. ^_^ I like it, also the "Hehe I like talking to myself." Should be smaller like Tigrin said.
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Posted: Tue Sep 28, 2004 9:15 pm
Well I could soften the tones I suppose, and yeah I could make her comment smaller, but I like the ones I used and I need it on her hair and her cape... because I tone dark colors...you know....
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Posted: Wed Sep 29, 2004 8:59 am
oh man, I wanna make a comic for slave labor graphics! I always have these ideas and never make the comic... because i'm laaaaaaaaaaazy woohoo!
but anyway, the text is a little hard to read, so maybe you should think about that.
Best of luck to youuuuuuuuuuuuuu!
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Posted: Wed Sep 29, 2004 11:30 am
Kimi the Great oh man, I wanna make a comic for slave labor graphics! I always have these ideas and never make the comic... because i'm laaaaaaaaaaazy woohoo! but anyway, the text is a little hard to read, so maybe you should think about that. Best of luck to youuuuuuuuuuuuuu! the text isonly hard to read because I had to scale it downto host the image online, the real one is bigger, and easy to read.
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Posted: Wed Sep 29, 2004 6:55 pm
I wish there were tone-y stuff in open canvas sad Heh, I draw comics sometimes...this one was just practicy-fun that's not very detailed, and that I'm not submitting anywhere other than elfwood o.O And my characters are strange of course.. 
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Posted: Thu Sep 30, 2004 11:11 am
I kinda like the visuals in it.
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Posted: Thu Sep 30, 2004 1:06 pm
Oh there's some little sketchies and another page from my project if you go on my banny and download the Nexus Preview. It's free, you just have to put in your email adress and type in a password and that's it. Although if you have a slow computer it may take a little while.
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Posted: Thu Oct 07, 2004 3:55 pm
HapyCow I wish there were tone-y stuff in open canvas sad Heh, I draw comics sometimes...this one was just practicy-fun that's not very detailed, and that I'm not submitting anywhere other than elfwood o.O And my characters are strange of course..
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Posted: Thu Oct 07, 2004 6:59 pm
HapyCow I wish there were tone-y stuff in open canvas sad Heh, I draw comics sometimes...this one was just practicy-fun that's not very detailed, and that I'm not submitting anywhere other than elfwood o.O And my characters are strange of course.. Lol. I likes it! His t-shirt and making fun of the 'ganster' talk is funny too. *over dramatically dies*
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Posted: Sat Oct 09, 2004 12:52 pm
HapyCow I wish there were tone-y stuff in open canvas sad Heh, I draw comics sometimes...this one was just practicy-fun that's not very detailed, and that I'm not submitting anywhere other than elfwood o.O And my characters are strange of course.. that was entertaining XD
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