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Drakal

PostPosted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 12:29 pm


i am going to post some of my work and i want to be judged. do not hold back on your comments.
PostPosted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 12:39 pm


Forgotten By: Robby


Time stops for no one
Not even me
So why is it that you cannot see
That I...

(chorus) Have been forgotten
Left Behind
Time stops for no one
Im losing my mind

Dont fix me
If i am not broken
Come back for me
'Cause I...

Have been forgotten
Left Behind
Time stops for no one
And im losing my mind

Please stop and come back
Im crying in fear
Dont leave me, I'll die
YOU'VE FORGOTTEN ME HERE!!!!!!!

Time stops for no one
But it did for me
Time goes on for others
But it's forgotten about me

Drakal


Tak-Jak

PostPosted: Thu Aug 24, 2006 12:19 pm


Listening to music and reading this
It seemed to go rhythmically in time
which was awesome.

This is really good.
But if you find this place a little dead..
come join this guild

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but if you want to join
make sure you follow the captains orders
when filling out the request form

Or ya wont get accepted.

Thanks for the great read!
heart -Remy
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Work written between 2003 - 2006

 
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