I wrote this song in the last couple days, but I would like ya'll to know, I sent this song into TobyMac to get his opinion on it (as well as a rant about his music and a Church revival) and I can't wait for his reply... Opinions, please! Be really hard, cause I'm going crazy and I need comments to wrap my mind around!
(No title. Maybe ya'll could think about one for me?)

I knew every day is withered to your words
That you cry when no one looks
And the words off your lips drop to the floor
But you can't let go yet, there still life in these hands
You've got the miles, now race to what's in store now
(You hear the words now)
Can you hear your heart? Someones knocking at the door

[Watch, as they pull you down
They will pull you down the way you aren't now
Lighten up, and you'll be too heavey to lift up
Cause you'll be where the end isn't that far
And the space between is filled up
Where love isn't so far fetched
And your spirits always chilled out & filled up]

You'll always be so close to him and me
Even where we're not hangin' around
When your spirits are rock bottem
And you're feeling hot, a huricane in the sana
But I'm just an arms reach away
My arm, his hand
Reach and you wall
Let go and don't pick up and you're gonna

Chorus

The thunder wont scare me away
The storm wont blow us away
The scars on my arms wont burn me away
And here we'll stand, for lovers and ye of little faith

I knoew every day is withered to your words
And you cry for the people and those who never look
The words off your lips drop to the floor
But you hold life in your hands, you're not alone anymore
You've answered, you've opened up the door
You've the miles, now run for what's in store now
They can hear their hearts, their feet hit the floor now

Chorus