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Tiny_Kitsune
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 4:34 am


I got this poem in a chaim mail when I was 14, and It's just beautiful and it's an importand subject. So this poem is one that brings tears to me when I read it and the message in it is so important.


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I went to a party, mom, I remembered what you said.
You told me not to drink, mom, so I drank soda instead.
I really felt proud inside, mom, The way you said I would.
I didn't drink & drive, mom, Even though the others said I should.
I know I did the right thing, mom, I know you are always right.
Now the party is finally ending, mom, as everyone is driving out of sight.
As i got into my car, mom, I knew I'd get home in one piece.
Because of the way you raised me, mom, so responsible and sweet.

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I started to drive away, mom, but as I pulled out into the road,
The other car didn't see me, mom, and hit me like a load.
As I lay there on the pavement, mom, I hear the policeman say,
"The other guy is drunk", mom, and now I'm the one who will pay.
I'm lying here dying, mom... I wish you'd get here soon.
How could this happen to me, mom? My life just burst like a balloon.
There is blood all around me, mom, and most of it is mine.
I hear the medic say, mom, I'll die in a short time.

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I just wanted to tell you, mom, I swear I didn't drink.
It was the others, mom, the others didn't think.
He was probably at the same party as I, The only difference is,
he drank and I will die.

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Why do people drink, mom? It can ruin your whole life.
I'm feeling sharp pains now, pains just like a knife.
The guy who hit me is walking, mom, and I don't think it's fair.
I'm lying here dying, mom, and all he can do is stare.

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Tell my brother not to cry, mom, tell daddy to be brave.
And when I go to heaven, mom, put "Daddy's girl" on my grave.
Someone should have told him, mom, not to drink and drive.
If only they had told him, mom, I would still be alive.

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My breath is getting shorter, mom, I'm becoming very scared.
Please don't cry for me, mom.
When I needed you, you where always there.
I have one last question, mom, before I say good bye.
I didn't drink and drive, so why am I the one to die?

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I'm not against drinking alcohol, I'm 23 and go to partys where I drink alcohol.
But to drink and drive is horrible and I feel this poem shows that in the cruelest of ways.
PostPosted: Fri Sep 01, 2006 8:47 am


All of what you said is true! I'm still under-aged but I don't think I'll ever drink AND drive. I don't even know if I'm planning to learn how to drive, after my older sister first tried making the car run - she almost gave me a heart attack! crying

But anyways....reminder to everyone: NEVER drink and drive! You might just unintentionally take away someone else's life as the drunk driver in the poem did 3nodding

himawari_chan


TheForeverLazyOne

PostPosted: Sun Sep 03, 2006 4:05 pm


i got the same chain mail...its a really sad poem...i read anouther one like it, i cant remember what it was called but both of them are tear jerkers!
NEVER DRINK AND DRIVE!!!
-kk-
PostPosted: Sun Sep 10, 2006 9:21 am


What a beautiful poem cry It's so sad crying

Somei Yoshino


Tiny_Kitsune
Captain

PostPosted: Fri Sep 29, 2006 10:52 am


Yeah I swear it brings tears to me but it's so well written.
The first time I read it all those years ago I couldn't finish it I cried so much.
But I think its really worth reading, it gives you something to think about..
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 02, 2006 12:36 pm


*wipes tear away*

I've seen that before one of the veiw poems that made me cry, I found a 9/11 poem I will post it's worth ready it.

Sekushii Kunoichi


empress dee

Skilled Guildswoman

PostPosted: Tue Oct 24, 2006 8:06 am


Drinking booze is poison. No matter how much. Why do you think they put on housecleaning potion labels..."Do not drink this...contains Alchohol and Hydrogen Piroxide."

You would not drink household cleaners, so why drink Alchohol, its the same thing?

In medicines, yes they put booze in it, but only so little that it will do no one no harm. And the doctors always say careful when operating heavy machinery...it includes cars...while on this medication. The reason? Becuase you will die if you do due to the alcohol. Having booze is like taking a medication overdose!

So if you WANNA DIE, then drink, and YAHOO to drinking.

If you WANNA LIVE then do not drink. It is that simple.
PostPosted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 9:58 am


Read my signature, then you will know what I think about people who drink booze.

By the way, I did feel bad for the girl that died in the poem.

william-tyler

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