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 Posted: Sat May 21, 2005 8:40 pm
If you look into my eyes
All you'll see is pain
If you try to find the hapiness
your efforts will be in vain
Many people have tried
and all of them have failed..
Still to this day
it is to no avail
a single shred of joy
In these lonely eyes of mine
Even if I try to hide it
Somehow they always show...
and make the truth about me known
Sure I may look happy
But that's only a disguise
that distracts people from these pain-filled eyes of mine...
Even if I'm not truly happy
Truth be told, I'm better that way
Yet always because of my eyes
the true horrors of my heart are shown
People often worry but I tell them I'm ok
Don't worry about me though... The pain will all be gone someday...
A poem by: RedRoseOfBlood
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Posted: Mon May 23, 2005 7:41 pm
Not to depressing. good rythem though. I like it in a werid kind of way.
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Posted: Tue May 24, 2005 1:01 am
A nice poem, not depressing but sad, but because of the last line there seems to be hope that it's not too sad. Nice! 3nodding
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Posted: Tue May 24, 2005 4:37 pm
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