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RedDwarffer
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 08, 2006 8:29 pm


Logical Thought



If I fight you and I win,
does that make me strong?
If I cry and run away,
does that make me weak?
If I scream your name and hit you,
does that make me mad?
If I finish the test first,
does that make me smart?
What tells you your power?
What gives you your strangth?
Do actions tell you feelins?
Do words let them out?
What do thoughts make out?
What makes you choose a choice?

If you asked me this how would I answer?
If I told you I did not know,
whould that be the truth?
Do I know it?
Have I known it all along?
If so if I think I know and I tell
will it form another question?
Where do questions start and end?
If your first question was given a false answer,
are all the answers to follow wrong?

Can you stop the questions that you think?
If you keep the question as a thought
will there be an answer?
Will you ever know?

So I guess there is a question,
a question I did think,
that brought these questions to my thoughs.
When am I aloud to die?
That there is the question brought to me.
That is the question that made me think these;
How will this death come to be?
When will it take place?
Who will it affect?
What factor depends on which?
Where does it all start?
Those are the questions that brought this poem to be...

Inless it has not to do with the questions,
but has to do with the surrounding events.
For would I have thought the questions that created this,
if I didnt want to die?
Would I want to die if I existed some where else, or maybe as something else???
What would it be like to not exist?
Did you exist be for you birth onto earth?
If not then I guess nothing would mater if you where not to exist...
So these questions would not mater..
Yet if you where to exist before your existence then would it be good to know the answers to these questions?
How do you determine the question?
Is there more then one answer?

Maybe theres a way out of death,
Yet still withought living life?
Or can you end this life and start a new life therefor escaping death?
Inless that is death,
to end one life and start a new?
Or maybe death is not the next life or a state of you existing.
Maybe death is just a word to discribe the end of the beginning and the beginning of the next area of existance...



and the questions could go on.. but I shall end it here.. for you will find questions of your own now, to follow what you believe of these...
feel free to post what you believe and/or questions you formed of your own...
PostPosted: Fri Sep 08, 2006 8:42 pm


The only question I have is the question I always have.

It never changes, and I doubt it ever will.

The only question I have to offer is....

why?

TanyaDawn


YoukoPeam
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Fri Sep 08, 2006 9:08 pm


Life contains but two tragedies. One is not to get your heart's desire; the other is to get it. -socrates




-----Very good tiffie-----
PostPosted: Sat Sep 09, 2006 12:13 am


TanyaDawn
The only question I have is the question I always have.

It never changes, and I doubt it ever will.

The only question I have to offer is....

why?
do you mean Why wont it change? Or do you mean you only ever ask why?

RedDwarffer
Vice Captain


RedDwarffer
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sat Sep 09, 2006 12:21 am


YoukoPeam
Life contains but two tragedies. One is not to get your heart's desire; the other is to get it. -socrates




-----Very good tiffie-----
but
what are the hearts desires?
Is it what you want?such as love, family, succese...?
so really it dosnt say there are two tragedies it say that the tragedies fall under the catagory of your heart...
your heart can desire anything...
so it says anything is a tragedie..
So if your heart desires happyness.. and you get it... then that is a tragedie? to be happy could be a tragedie? does that mean that if you are sad you should stay that way? or should you try and be happy even if its just going to end the same...?If they end the same and you have to pick what whould you chose? would you chose the easyone? the one you want???
but let just go to the fact that it says everything good be tragidie? so she you just quit now? Maybe you can just not desire anything.. can you do that? can you controlle what your heart seems to deside itself?
PostPosted: Sat Sep 09, 2006 11:18 am


COF-sexy beasts
TanyaDawn
The only question I have is the question I always have.

It never changes, and I doubt it ever will.

The only question I have to offer is....

why?
do you mean Why wont it change? Or do you mean you only ever ask why?


Both.

The only question is why.

TanyaDawn


RedDwarffer
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sun Sep 10, 2006 12:17 am


TanyaDawn
COF-sexy beasts
TanyaDawn
The only question I have is the question I always have.

It never changes, and I doubt it ever will.

The only question I have to offer is....

why?
do you mean Why wont it change? Or do you mean you only ever ask why?


Both.

The only question is why.
well then to find an answer to the fist you would have to ask more questions and those questions could not all be why for you need to know 1.are you keep things the same because you wont give them a chance? or maybe you gave thus things many chance and they have never changed... if that then maybe you should ask when its okay to give up? or when do you give up on hopes of change? but then maybe you would lose all hope? whould you? should you?
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