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Reply Poetry by:COF-sexy beasts
My Deadly Fealings

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RedDwarffer
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 09, 2006 8:47 am


My Deadly Feelings


I cant figure it out,
why do I feel this way?
These feelings are deadly,
why are they here every next day?

You ask me whats wrong,
and I let it all out.
I dont care anymore
I'm am left with out doubt.

Doubt the stops me,
locks my truths up inside.
The doubts that did stop me,
from makeing you cry.

Making you know,
the truths I did see.
Making you know,
how death sets you free.

Now I guess I know,
these feelings ren't ment to be shared.
Now I guess I know,
you truly understude and cared

For I shared these feelings,
the deadly feelings that Killed.
I shared them with you,
and your mind they soon filled.

I never would have told,
but I guess its all to late.
The feelings grasped onto your soul,
and sealed your fate.

So now I lock them deep inside,
for there deadly fate I did see.
Yet it leaves this one question,
why wont MY deadly fealings kill ME?



This just came to me as I was thinking how powerful feelings are and how they controlle serten things...
PostPosted: Sat Sep 09, 2006 11:17 am


*nods* I understand this completely.......Tis how I became how I am.

TanyaDawn


RedDwarffer
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sun Sep 10, 2006 12:25 am


I'm trying to remember the how abouts of this poem and I know it want long ago but its kinda hard to remember for I kinda remember the feelings but dont see how the words came out.. but it does tell how I felt and that is good....
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Poetry by:COF-sexy beasts

 
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