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Euphoria_Love

PostPosted: Sat Sep 09, 2006 5:52 pm


This is one of my poems that I wrote and entered into a contest....Hope you like it.....Leave me so comments and ideas to writing more

Every day I wake up
with a strange feeling in my head
like what's going to happen to me today
will I die, will someone in my life pass away
Some sad feelings that are in my head
pass through day by day
Sometimes I cry to think of my
parents dying and sometimes I laugh
when something awesome happens but
then I cry to think that
someday my best friends will
soon leave me hanging
Just writing this poem makes me cry!
PostPosted: Sun Sep 10, 2006 12:51 pm


Very well written, but I think you need more 'Mph!' To it if you know what I mean. When I read it, I wasn't so sure what to be interested about. I really do love it though! 8/10

H u g D r u g
Crew


Euphoria_Love

PostPosted: Tue Sep 12, 2006 7:06 pm


Thanks for your imput Sherry! i will try and put more "Mph" to it...lol...I'll show you when I finish
PostPosted: Sat Sep 16, 2006 7:32 am


I admire free-verse writers, beecause I myself can't write it. I believe you have a knack for it! nice job!

[~.Miss.Jax.~]


starshine_cayalyn

PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 9:00 am


I think that was pretty good, i'd like to read some more if you write some.
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