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...My Reflections On DEATH...

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avrilavignia

PostPosted: Tue Sep 12, 2006 3:30 am


-Death-


Death,
What is death?
Is it just a period of time when your soul and spirit leaves your body, wandering in search of another body to occupy?
Or does your soul, spirit, and body just fall into eternal darkness, never to be used again?
Or does it venture further, a step higher, into heaven or hell, where it remains, immortal?
No one knows.
For the ones who have the answers are no longer with us to explain the proper facts.
……or are they?
Are we just too blind to see them?
Have the scientific facts of life blinded us so badly that we refuse to notice even the slightest out-of-the-ordinary happenings?
Are there spirits of our loved ones surrounding us in warm embrace to protect us from unknown dangers at this very moment?
Once again, no one knows.
There is no way of finding out for sure what is fact and what is not when it is death that is being questioned.
The only way to understand it fully would be to experience it for ourselves, leaving our family, friends, and body behind in the process and unable to communicate with the rest of the world we once used to know, journeying into an entirely different dimension as we unravel one of the greatest mysteries of all time.
Who knows?
Death could be a fun-filled wonderland,
Or it could be a dooms-day hellhole.
In my opinion, it’s about what you believe that matters,
And not what has been scientifically proven.
As for me, I believe that death is an opening to many great, unknown possibilities.
I guess some mysteries are just meant to remain a mystery...forever...


This is something I wrote while thinking about...well...death,obviously.All comments and critisism is highly appreciated.Please comment and review.

P.S.-I've also written some other poems.The others will probably be posted up in my journal.Soon.Or not.Just wanted to let you know that you can either comment here or in my journal.Please and thankies!XD
PostPosted: Sun Sep 17, 2006 10:38 am


i don't really write a whole lot of refection poetry but i think it is amazingly good. it mokes you really think which is what good reflection poetry is suppose to do. since, uh, no one commmented on mine do u think u could take a look at it and teell meh whatcha think

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