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 Posted: Tue May 24, 2005 10:39 pm
REALITY
Hep me go away. Leave forever.
A place other thasn this, away from this.
This....reality.
Image of Dreams
Close your eyes, close them and lets
be off to the image you and I see. This
mere image fills you with odd joy as you
wake. But also as you wake the image
breaks. You try to remember and some
is there. You remember how how it felt
reak, how you thought there were no
boundries because nothing was as it seems.
But remember this every night go and dream
return to the image where nothing is ever
as it seems.
Fall back
Fall back into thine past. Remember the glimse
of light. Thou first shine of light that hast been seen.
Allow this to enter the image you do see. To allow
these moments to repeat and replayed. Thats when
thou shalt remember it all.
So what do you think?
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Posted: Thu May 26, 2005 4:35 pm
Realy nice, but as always, depressing...
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Posted: Sat May 28, 2005 9:07 am
They were really good- really emotional, very sad, but good! I thought that the second seemed a bit awkward when I read it, but I don't quite know why. I think there were a couple of words that could have been left out, but nothing serious. Keep up the good work!
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