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YoukoPeam
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 14, 2006 3:38 pm


For damien...Please wake up...don't leave me alone...



I stare into the shadow of the room
there you are
covered in machines and tubes
your breathing is so labored
Your scent long gone from your body.
I smell the sickening smell of the hospital
you don't respond to the squeezing of my hand on yours
the kisses on your cold clammy cheeks
or the sound of my voice
as i tell you about my day

the sweet sighs fill the air
the constant sniffling
don't leave me here
open your eyes on more time
smile for me
saying everything is ok
you will always be here for me
with those stupid smiles and that laugh

Just wake up and envelope me in your arms
call me stupid whatever you want
just open those eyes
say anything you want
Just wake up..
PostPosted: Fri Sep 15, 2006 6:21 pm


unforunetly...he never woke up..he passed away 9/15/06

YoukoPeam
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RedDwarffer
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 4:27 am


YoukoPeam
unforunetly...he never woke up..he passed away 9/15/06
*huggles thay sammieees* I am so sorry deary.. this poem however is great... it hits you and stabs its finger in your throught.. you know? oh, lol, I think the words I was looking for where it leaves you breathless 3nodding heart
PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 2:24 pm


*hugs Sam tightly*

TanyaDawn


RedDwarffer
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 25, 2006 7:03 am


I am also kinda sorry about that comment... I mean it was supost to show that I was really sad for you but it sounds so happy.... alot of what I feel is different then how it coms out right now.. sorry dear... but however *hugs tight* Well all I can think is if you believe in a high power then in some for that probly means you believe he is awake some where.... 3nodding so luck you for you may see him some day again.. NOT ANY TIME SOON... heart but it may came and you can have a long catch up chat... heart 3nodding loveied j00 sammie 3nodding heart

P.S. I'm not sure if this makes things better or makes you sad.. but it wa ment to be ya there is always the days after heart
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Youko Peam

 
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