okay, I like it personally. I've never tried to write with actual characters in mind, but this is for a friend. pleez tell me what you think.!



I don’t love you anymore,
I’m sure of it this time.
I don’t need you to carry me,
Or dry my tears at night.
How I hate the way I hate you.
My love for you has left.
Why do you think I feel for you
When you give me no respect?
Love may come, love may go,
But my hate for you will stay.
You hurt my soul and wrecked my life
And for that, you shall pay.
One day a girl will break your heart,
Just as you did mine,
And she will then forever be
A thorn upon your vine.
She’ll take your heart and stab it through
With no mercy in her eyes.
And you’ll look up in dying shock
For this is love’s surprise!
So slowly you shall fade away
And drift quickly from mind.
No one will recall your name
No love again you’ll find.
And forever more your cursed soul
Will leave me to be me,
You’ll destroy the life you hold
Because there’s nothing left to be.
I don’t love you anymore.
And I never will again,
So be quick in love; take it back
And give it to no one then.
For if your soul is taken,
And never given back,
Then your soul will be like mine,
Empty, chilling, dark, and black.