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 Posted: Mon Sep 18, 2006 6:41 pm
...I've been writing this story for a (really, really, really) long time. Lately, I've post it on fanfiction and... someone is out there, reading it! OMG! Someone enjoys it!
So now I need some help. I can't figure out for the life of me how to start the next chapter. I know what I want to happen next, but the opening is dead to me. Do me a favor.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3128464/1/
Help me pllleeeeeaaasseeee.
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Posted: Mon Dec 25, 2006 12:21 pm
Hey, nice fic, by the way. I like the way Unsui and Agon interact, although I usually expect Agon to bash UNsui, being 'I'm higher and mightier than you so bow down' thinking he had. ANd to think he had something with Hiruma. Kah2, even thinking them holding hands make me freak out. But I admit it, your way of writing was a big potential, and I could see a lil bit of leeway of your prespective. Sorry, I don't see what I could do. In writing fanfiction, your way over me.
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Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 10:56 pm
how do you want me to help you?
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