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 Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2006 3:28 pm
Hello all-
Red and I conversed and figured we would start putting member/crew comments on the first post of the Lunar Cry story. Basically like a review of the story so far, what everyone thinks about it. So far only 5 people have voted and those 5 seem to like the story. We want to hear from you guy's. We wanna know exactly what you think. Please send all comments to either Red Crosell XIII or myself.
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Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2006 4:13 pm
Yeah, give us your thoughts
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The Watchtower Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Sep 23, 2006 3:22 am
Oh good , I'm glad you put this up. Well I've been following it , and I love it. The two main characters are very well played and the story is cool. So far , I dont really trust this Guile , and what the heck are the tonberrys doing to the soldiers!! eek
I'm afraid I have no particular criticism at the moment , except dont start a chapter by repeating too much of the last one.
Stay focussed , and remember to keep all the story threads alive ie. dont create some activity and forget to follow it up later. That means reading back over it all regularly. You can both edit too , if you want to refine certain parts of it , or fill in any little gaps.
I think it's great - applause applause.
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Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 10:00 pm
Alright, Red and I have discussed it and we have come to this conclusion. Please post your comments Here in this topic. All comments will be posted here and the particularally good ones *not exactly GOOD comments but ones that make an impact on either myself or Red* will be posted on the first post of the Lunar Cry story.
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Posted: Fri Sep 29, 2006 4:32 pm
Surely people want to comment on our story...?
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Posted: Sun Oct 01, 2006 12:15 pm
I'm actually kind of curious as to who voted that they didn't like the story, and why they said that. Both Red and I would surely like to know the persons reasons, perhaps their reasons would help us improve the story? Don't worry whoever said they didn't like it, we won't yell at you, a little constructive critisism goes a long ways.
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