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skystears

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 5:43 am


sweatdrop haha i think i did a good job however i know that in a month or even a week from now im just gonna hate it for one reason or another, so what do you guys think? What do i need to work on etc. Its a character in a story me and a friend are writing together. Part of its blury from when i cropped it and darkened it on the pc cause my scanner lightens it up so much so i also tried to soften it a bit and i guess it didnt work out... sweatdrop OK NOW GIVE ME THE TRUTH! what do u think! tips very much welcome!User Image
PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 1:42 pm


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^^ Really great. You probably shouldn't make his ching so pointy, and also try to give him a little more personality. sweatdrop I know that's really hard, but it's something to work on. I love his eyes though!

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 8:06 pm


I love the coloring but the jaw line is very sharp. Try different shapes.
You should try and draw so that its not tilted as well. heart


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PostPosted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 11:18 pm


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The overall shape of the face is a little too pointy for my liking, like he has no flesh on his cheeks. The coloring is pretty nice, but the face just bugs me.

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PostPosted: Wed May 30, 2007 5:49 am


lol thanks everyone for your opinions , lol Its been a very long time since I posted On Gaia , Heres something I made more recently , like last night ..Heres The character from My, Not so great web comic I only work on sometimes . User Image
I Originally Drew him in pencil and color pencil , out lined it with perminte (sp?)marker and scanned it then in gimp touched up the lighting and contrast and smeared the color with a water mark thingy since the pencil lines drive me crazy. ( I don't have the prisma colors )

Lots of flaws still But I think it might be an improvement from earlier this year

...and i just realized i forgot his cat ears LOL
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