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 Posted: Sun May 29, 2005 10:20 am
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Posted: Sun May 29, 2005 1:49 pm
That's an interesting look-out on loneliness. It's pretty good.
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Posted: Fri Jun 03, 2005 8:56 am
It has a good feel to it, but the rhythm feels a little weird, which takes away from the reading experience. Nothing serious which I can really put my finger on, maybe it's just grammar mistakes... Overall though, it's good.
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