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Here a Sad Gothic poem that my friend Suzaku on msn send me, i love it so much heart

Once again I take my razor,
And commit my bloody sin,
Completing crimson lines,
Against my flawless skin.

Tears seep from my eyes,
And fall down into my soul,
But I continue causing pain,
Until I eventually feel whole

I lay on the floor bleeding,
Cradling my crimson arm,
Even though I've done this before,
I'm stunned at my act of harm.

Pain rocks through my body,
As I wash the blood away,
I feel no better than I did before,
I'm still all cold and grey.

I look deep into the mirror,
And stare right into my eyes,
I can see beyond myself,
Past my make-up disguise,

I can see the hurt and the pain,
And the frightening fears,
I can see my blood stained arm,
My own crimson tears.


I can see the pale reflection,
And the blackened eyes,
They all think I'm fine right now,
But they can't see past the lies.

And so I lay me down to sleep,
And wish the pain away,
I close my eyes and fall asleep,
While dreaming of a better day...

But that day never arrives,
I'm always alone and filled with hate,
This is my destiny right here,
My life, my soul, my fate.

the day i could write a poem is the day the world ends

Um... here I guess, this is a poem I wrote for a friend. It's not all that great... and yes I know it sucks sweatdrop

Disappointing

Nothing but disappointment
Your rage and sorrow growing
Stronger with in days
While your happiness is mislead
To be confined by the Grose
Where your bewilderment begins
Nothing but your disappointment is there
Because you pursue your wonders
And are misled to the wrong things
Stop and listen to your emotions
Stop and think of yourself
Stop all the disappointing ways

Nope not in this topic whee but i could make a topic to post lyrics 3nodding

Sakuo your poem nice ^^ if you make some more post them on the topic please, that would be great cool

Thank you, I have a few more, I'll put one more up.

FEAR


In the Dark,
In the dark that is my mind,
Thats where you are,
Thats where you're left behind.
And I don't want you to see,
The light you kept from me.
This is my life, my light now
I want you gone, I don't care how.
I don't care where you flee,
Or if you visit beneath the see.
You will leave me here,
You're not a part of me,
I wont shed a tear,
As I watch you run from me.

In my heart,
In my hearth that says I'm alive,
That's wheer you're a part,
Thats where you grow and thrive.
As I feel you I want to die,
Die and take you with me,
But I can't, not even cry,
Or you'll break free from me.
You'll never leave me here,
I need to shed that tear,
As I hear you breathe deep in me

In my mind,
In my mind thats nearly dead,
Thats where I can always find,
The thing not lost but kept instead.
And as I sit here dying,
I feel you fall through the depths
Now I can finally start crying,
As together are our deaths.
Now we will leave here,
You dying as a part of me,
I finally shed a tear,
As I feel you die inside of me.

`Rikku

arrow Nice poem Lord Helseth whee

arrow Rikku, is it a goth poem ? Cuz i think those kind or poems are great if you have more of them that be great if you can post some more 3nodding

arrow Sakuo, Thank you so much for the other poems, i think they are nice like the first one you send, keep up the good work cool

In RL I AM a Goth... so like all of my poetry is too... or at least has a small hint to it. I had to write a childrens book for school one time... it ended up being about a little girl crying that the sun went away... so thats it!