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dascki

PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2005 11:15 pm


Sorry I havn't been posting lately, I have been caught up with alot. Anyway, I wanted to post up something that a REALLY close friend asked me to post up. Hope you guys like it.
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TOXI ANGEL
Trying to breathe in oxygen
All you taste is ragging pollution
Sweet angel your wings seem to be bound
Drowning in evil waste,
No one can help you now
Demented and abstract,
She lives alone
The world not ready for her yet,
This anger continues to grow
So tell me my Toxic angel did you choose this sorrow life?
I hope not you seem so sad,
Forgotten what happiness truly looks like
Maybe some day,
When the cold rains fall
Your green glow will fade
And you can walk away from this crawl
Until that lovely time comes
You’re forever locked in a cage of difference
I assure you it can’t be that bad
Perhaps I lied; still I can’t take away this horrible substance…
PostPosted: Mon May 30, 2005 10:52 am


Wow, that makes pollution seem really sad. I like the poem. It's well written.

Grita


Pilin

PostPosted: Mon May 30, 2005 7:34 pm


Nice not to dark not to over the edge. I like it
PostPosted: Wed Jun 01, 2005 9:29 am


It was good, but it needs seperation (unless the thoughts are suppose to be jumbled which was how I read it). It was difficult to read aloud, but that may be how the author intended it. I thought it was very good smile

Cereah
Crew

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Work written between 2003 - 2006

 
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