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[~.Amaya.~]
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 11:37 am


Waterfall by ~Amaya-Chan~

One day, near a waterfall, in Japan two people are just sitting down. The boy pulls out an exotic flower from the moist, soft, and sensitive ground. The flower represents his love for her. The flower is soft, like the feeling of her skin, blue for her favorite color, and dying, like her heart inside of her. She has no clue why the boy has brought her here to a waterfall in Japan. All she knows is that her heart is beating faster and faster as each passing minute goes by. He quickly grabs her hand, and pulls her in making her come closer to him. Her back is now leaning on his chest. She closes her eyes, while he wispers in her sensitive ear, " I love you". She can hear nothing else except the wind, the water rushing its way down the mountain, and his lips speaking the words that he says, while she feels his warm breath. She thinks for a second if what he says is truly in his heart. Everyday, she asks herself that question, not knowing what to believe. She asks why does he love me, I am not beautiful, tall, or smart. Instead I am ugly, short, and stupid. I have nothing a guy would ever want. Why did he choose me? She suddenly is picked up and is carried to a rock facing the waterfall. While he puts her down and takes his seat next to her she looks at the waterfall, pretending to not look at him, while really she is looking through the corner of her eye. The boy finally sits down, and takes her in his arms. And says, "you look so beautiful, just like the water thats flowing down that fall" She quickly gets up, and says, "but the waterfall is ugly, and doesn't have a steady and constant rate." He says, "but its…ummmm, fine you win" And she goes back into his arms, and starts to stare at the waterfall. She loves them, and nature itself, mesmerizes her. Since he knows this, this is why he has brought her here, to a waterfall. He
gets up, and sits behind her, making her able to become cuddled by him, after he sits down. He puts his arms around her, and her head automatically lies on his chest. He looks down at her, kissing the top of her head. She feels the moist feeling of his kiss, and the weight of his head, on hers. He picks up his head, and looks at her. She knows that he is looking at her, and quickly closes her eyes, quickly blushing. He blushes too, and glances at the waterfall, holding her tighter. He says, "I won't ever fall so hard for anyone else, I love you so much" She is pretending to be sleeping, but hears everything that he is saying, and quickly blushes, and then stops. He knows that she is listening to every word that he is saying, and so, with that he continues to look at her, and speak in those breathtaking words that wrap her with a blanket of emotions. It starts to rain, and he reaches for a blanket that he has brought and wraps it around both of them. Since she loves the rain she can't help it, but run into it, and dance in the rain. She feels the cold sensation of the water droplets that
touch her palm. He starts to laugh, and joins her. They both are soaking wet, but they don't care as long as they have each other. They both suddenly stop, and they start to stare into each other's eyes. He grabs her hair, and brings her closer to her. She looks down while he looks at her, and soon kisses her head. And she hugs him, and never lets go, and they are both in the rain, near a waterfall in Japan. I don't know, what makes her so happy, secure, and crazy when she is with this guy. She forgets about all her fears, mistakes, problems, and her head is blank, and is concentrating only on him. Nothing else is on her mind, only him, and that's all. She starts to run away, but he quickly grabs her hand, and she comes to a sudden stop. He walks towards her, and looks at her face while she looks down at the soft, wet flowers, in, which they are both stepping on. He takes her in his arms, and squeezes her telling her that he will never leave her, and that he will always be with her. Now that her back is leaning against his chest, he kisses the side of her neck. And she turns her head, blushing, and enjoying the moist feeling that is now posted onto her
neck. He says, "Please don't let go, and ever leave me, you promise?" The girl, just blushes, and says, "ok I wont ever leave you, unless you do something that I don't like, and I have a reason to get mad at you, and leave you." He puts his hand over her lips. She feels the warmth, and soft feeling of his hand, and quickly stops talking. They both stare in eachothers eyes; they both listen to the waves, and the wind travel down their own path. He moves his hand away from her mouth and, kisses her on the lips. She pulls away, and goes back and sits on the damp rock. He follows her, but a little before that, he just stands there and looks at her, as she walks away from him, wonderingif she will ever walk out of his life. He doesn't hope for that, but maybe it could happen, one day, or not happen at all. As they both sit down, she looks in the waterfall, and looks at the different types of creatures that are living in the bottom of the waterfall, where each particle of water is set free, and scattered to find their own path through life. She finds a frog, its green like the flowers that are growing near the rock they were sitting on. It's slippery, and slimy, and he tries to hold it, but can't. He takes two more tries and fails. She, on the other hand, takes the frog, and doesn't hold in two hands like she is killing it, and is successful in holding it. She teaches him how to hold it, and you soon see them both playing with the wild creatures near the waterfall. It soon turns from light to dark, in a matter of hours. They spent their whole day there. From the girl being blindfolded, and being carried to the waterfall, to her sleeping in his arms, while both of them are sitting on the rock with a blanket over them. He wishes that this day would never end. But he soon realizes that its time to go home. He goes to wake her up, but then sees her beautiful face shining in the moonlight. He lets her sleep for five more minutes. While he does that, he stares at her, and never looks away. He suddenly sees himself thinking about all the things that they did today. He can't stop thinking, seven minutes go by, its time to wake her up. He moves his hand up and down her cheek; she feels the soft, and warm hand of her beloved. She opens her eyes, and sees him looking straight into her eyes. She smiles, and gets up. They both pack up, and start walking home. This all happened one-day, near a waterfall, in Japan.

watcha guys think? sweatdrop sorry for the wierd indents...opps sweatdrop
PostPosted: Wed Oct 04, 2006 6:45 am


its soooooooooooooo nice^^ I RLY LIKE IT!! ur good at this 3nodding

Grimgor
Crew


[~.Amaya.~]
Captain

PostPosted: Wed Oct 04, 2006 7:03 am


Grimgor
its soooooooooooooo nice^^ I RLY LIKE IT!! ur good at this 3nodding
thanks ^_^ this was my first story, Heavenly Rain was my second one i wrote 3nodding
PostPosted: Wed Oct 04, 2006 7:10 am


cool^^

Grimgor
Crew


[~.Amaya.~]
Captain

PostPosted: Wed Oct 04, 2006 6:19 pm


mrgreen
PostPosted: Thu Oct 05, 2006 6:26 am


u realy likes to make stories huh smile ?

Grimgor
Crew


[~.Amaya.~]
Captain

PostPosted: Thu Oct 05, 2006 6:35 am


hehe yea ^_^....but my mom read this one, and she didn't likeit all =( sje hates that i write.
PostPosted: Thu Oct 05, 2006 10:32 am


rly? thats so sad sad

Grimgor
Crew


[~.Amaya.~]
Captain

PostPosted: Thu Oct 05, 2006 1:31 pm


heart (you have been poked by my heart o.O)

i have to lie about doing h.w. just to type up one of my stories >< thats wat im doing now gonk
PostPosted: Fri Oct 06, 2006 5:40 am


y dont u tell her that its someting thats realy important to u?

Grimgor
Crew


[~.Amaya.~]
Captain

PostPosted: Fri Oct 06, 2006 1:40 pm


she wont care =(
PostPosted: Fri Oct 06, 2006 1:51 pm


thats not very nice.... stare

Grimgor
Crew


[~.Amaya.~]
Captain

PostPosted: Fri Oct 06, 2006 2:39 pm


my mom isn't very nice
PostPosted: Sat Oct 07, 2006 4:17 am


thats sad.... crying

Grimgor
Crew


[~.Amaya.~]
Captain

PostPosted: Sat Oct 07, 2006 1:01 pm


i know =(
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