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Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 9:11 pm
Here's my first one, I call it
Story of Skullkid
One time, when I was all alone, I encountered two friends, And their bodies shone, Brightly against the darkness of that hollow fallen trunk I'll admit it, my life had sunk.
Once I had friends, I thought it'd never end. But sadly, they had left me, for the Swamp, the Mountains, The Canyon, and the Sea.
I was angry, I'll admit. All I intended was a bit of chaos, and the rare prank. My friends then, became frank.
'Why do you cause havoc, why do you cause this pain?' When no reply I gave, this is what They said: 'Do this thing again, And you will wind up DEAD!'
This had broken my heart, For I'd found out, long ago Only playing pranks on others, would cause my friends to show.
But I had met new friends, And they were kind to me. Playing out in the field, were we, the Three.
One day I had come across, A merchant, traveling. To a land I'd seen once before, The land of the Kokiri.
I was curious, I'll admit 'What were his wares?' So I sent my friends to tell him That I would soon be there.
I guess they must have shocked him, For he was on the ground. I checked what wares he had, And this is what I'd found.
A colorful mask, It was a pretty thing, As I gazed upon it, In my mind it seemed to sing:
'Put me on, Put me on, I'll give you what you wish. Fame, power, glory? Maybe some very rare fish?'
I looked on it and said, 'Friends are all I have!' This was a mistake, For the mask then replied, 'Then more friends you will make!'
Sorry, it was my first attempt at a completely, just thought up poem. It's supposed to show Skullkid's perspective of the situation, and a vague idea on why he'd put the mask on.
I'm planning on going into a VGM (Video Game Maker) career, and am trying to make prophetic 'poems' for a story that one of the games I plan to make:
The Prophecy
To the Reader:
Stand on land, where there is none. During a day, without a Sun. When the Water, bursts in Flame. You shall know then, why you came.
Chosen One
To The One:
Thou hast, finally come. To the spot, where it begun. Years back, many knights, Have met their doom, for the people's plights.
Those who died, had shed their blood, All in vain, for it was done. The war, that had claimed many lives, Had failed, the Demon, to excise.
For he is free, and time has come, For his freedom, to be undone. The task is to you, Chosen one, For that last Knight, you are his Son.
Sounds too much like the Seal War, eh?
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Posted: Thu Oct 05, 2006 3:11 pm
I would be interested in reading something that you wrote that was a little more free, a little less rhyming. I think you have good ideas, but I feel like rhyming is stifling your creativity. It seems like you have a nice story to tell, but you are focusing too much on rhyming as opposed to just letting the words flow and come to you in the way that they want to come if that makes sense. Let them flow....
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Posted: Sat Oct 07, 2006 8:04 am
Here's another one. Still ahs a rhyme to it xd . The universe is a puzzle, And every person a piece. Only with harmony, Can we hope to see The picture that lies beneath.
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Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 2:17 am
This song has two basies, one is Final Fantasy, and the other is Revelations, hence its darkness. RAGNAROCK
The Seas Rage, The Earth Decays. The Wind Speeds To Fan the Flames.
The People are in Disarray, The Earth will soon die I say. They do not see, from the East: Is coming, the Mark of the Beast.
People Mourn, The Others Scorn. The Rage Grows, The War is Born.
The People are in Disarray, The Earth will soon die I say. They do not see, from the East: Is coming, the Mark of the Beast.
None will Block, The Lethal Knock. It Has Come: The RAGNAROCK!
The People are in Disarray, The Earth will soon die I say. They do not see, from the East: Is coming, THE MARK OF THE BEAST!
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