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Black Diamond Fox

PostPosted: Thu Oct 05, 2006 3:27 pm


Lifeless

A cold dead body
A dark evil soul

No movement
No blood flow

Just a motionless person
Just a new found corpse

Why won't she wake up
Why doesn't she move

It's because she is dead now
It's because she is lifeless
PostPosted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 2:10 pm


Interesting. Love it.

DaleLuck1313


seasweetie

PostPosted: Fri Dec 15, 2006 7:34 am


interesting..
PostPosted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 7:38 am


A litle short, but I kinda like it xD

Singing Apple


Arielace

PostPosted: Sat Apr 28, 2007 2:36 am


Black Diamond Fox
Lifeless

A cold dead body
A dark evil soul

No movement
No blood flow

Just a motionless person
Just a new found corpse

Why won't she wake up
Why doesn't she move

It's because she is dead now
It's because she is lifeless



OMG!
PostPosted: Thu May 03, 2007 2:08 pm


a little short. Seems to be a bit of mistery to it.. maybe add a few more mistery thoughts.. ??
but it is ndeed good User Image
rock on User Image

RedDwarffer
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diedaraslilgoddess

PostPosted: Sun May 06, 2007 8:53 pm


very interesting....its definately mystery
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