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Posted: Thu Oct 05, 2006 10:08 pm
~ "What is your name?" I say But she says nothing as her lips begin to play up & down my neck Blood-lust fingernails scratch my back she nibbles to my collarbone Leaving a trail of nips With her teeth of pointy tips Her amber orbs burn holes in my head Flowing river of black covers her bare back I notice milky skin hiding under her black dress Almost too milky... ~ I slowly become lost In her seducing embrace Only to come back to reality Pushing her back "What is your name?" I ask again Her long finger hushes me Only to replace it with her lips Slowly grinding me with her hips I fight, I lose I let out a moan grabbing her delicate frame Pulling her closer letting her dress drape over me ~ "What...is your...name?" between gasp I say She opens her motuh, letting her tongue astray I hear only the answer of her heavy breathing Using my neck again for teething Before I can say anything Her fangs puncture into my neck I can feel the blood from my veins Being sucked into her ~ This was pleasure a sick, evil pleasure She kissed me It thrilled me... My heartbeat & breathing raced faster & faster till I was screaming It thrilled me... Like...no other human has ever done before But she wasn't mortal I cursed myself For wicked pleasure Not knowing what was happening to me I feel trails flow down my neck It thrilled me... ~ "Please...I-" She jumps off Making me slip out of my chair & into reality I see the crimson stream down her chin Did that come from... ~ "What is your name? Certainly you cannot forever play this game?" Slowly my vision's a haze My world goes blurry I can only make out Her smile no longer pearly white But sickengly crimson streaked The power shuts off leaving a trail of light From the doorway ahead Her shadow consuming my submissive form ~ The door closes Closing the light Closing my hope As I let go of the world I swore I heard a whisper say "Lilith..."
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Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2007 9:21 pm
That was a really good poem.
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Posted: Sun Oct 28, 2007 12:05 pm
Wow! Someone actually read my poem! *hugs her* Thank you!
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Posted: Wed Nov 14, 2007 6:52 pm
great writing style...awesome subject...wondering if you wrote that froma male or female perspective?
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Posted: Mon Dec 31, 2007 10:23 am
Hm...i'll let your imagination run wild with that one. wink
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Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 4:31 pm
You wrote that? Ha ha wow ~ I want to read more of your work!
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