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Mrs.BonJovi

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PostPosted: Thu Oct 05, 2006 10:08 pm


~
"What is your name?" I say
But she says nothing
as her lips begin to play
up & down my neck
Blood-lust fingernails scratch my back
she nibbles to my collarbone
Leaving a trail of nips
With her teeth of pointy tips
Her amber orbs burn holes in my head
Flowing river of black covers her bare back
I notice milky skin hiding under her black dress
Almost too milky...
~
I slowly become lost
In her seducing embrace
Only to come back to reality
Pushing her back
"What is your name?" I ask again
Her long finger hushes me
Only to replace it with her lips
Slowly grinding me with her hips
I fight, I lose
I let out a moan
grabbing her delicate frame
Pulling her closer
letting her dress
drape over me
~
"What...is your...name?" between gasp I say
She opens her motuh, letting her tongue astray
I hear only the answer of her heavy breathing
Using my neck again for teething
Before I can say anything
Her fangs puncture into my neck
I can feel the blood from my veins
Being sucked into her
~
This was pleasure
a sick, evil pleasure
She kissed me
It thrilled me...
My heartbeat & breathing raced faster & faster
till I was screaming
It thrilled me...
Like...no other human has ever done before
But she wasn't mortal
I cursed myself
For wicked pleasure
Not knowing what was happening to me
I feel trails flow down my neck
It thrilled me...
~
"Please...I-"
She jumps off
Making me slip out of my chair
& into reality
I see the crimson stream down her chin
Did that come from...
~
"What is your name?
Certainly you cannot forever play this game?"
Slowly my vision's a haze
My world goes blurry
I can only make out
Her smile
no longer pearly white
But sickengly crimson streaked
The power shuts off leaving a trail of light
From the doorway ahead
Her shadow consuming my submissive form
~
The door closes
Closing the light
Closing my hope
As I let go of the world
I swore I heard a whisper say
"Lilith..."
PostPosted: Fri Jul 27, 2007 9:21 pm


That was a really good poem.

Kristen_Pride


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PostPosted: Sun Oct 28, 2007 12:05 pm


Wow! Someone actually read my poem! *hugs her* Thank you!
PostPosted: Wed Nov 14, 2007 6:52 pm


great writing style...awesome subject...wondering if you wrote that froma male or female perspective?

secrectagent_-007


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PostPosted: Mon Dec 31, 2007 10:23 am


Hm...i'll let your imagination run wild with that one. wink
PostPosted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 4:31 pm


You wrote that? Ha ha wow ~ I want to read more of your work!

Lilith-Moonblood

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