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CelesteSilverfang
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Fri Oct 06, 2006 1:07 pm


A story I wrote today about something that happened at school.

Title: Monster
Author: Silverfang
Rating: PG

Monster


Dear Diary...

But that's not really the right way to start this, is it?

I wanted to tell you that I created a monster today. I wonder why now, but I did, no matter how inadvertently. Isn't it sad, that, while we wonder why we are the way we are, and who made us this way, we're busy making people just like us?

Take today, for example.

I felt bad that he cried. My friends told me not to, and they talk about him like he's nothing; like he's as unwanted as we were in this world. But I felt bad, because I'm a nothing too. Is that weird? That a monster like me could have a heart?

It's funny how we use the term "monster" nowadays, isn't it? Monsters used to be demons and ogres, but now it's a name for the misunderstood little freaks like me who don't fit in unless we force ourselves into the puzzle of the world.

So...I felt bad. I'm tempted to apologize, even though I didn't do anything, but he's not mad at me.

But that's just it, isn't it? I didn't do anything. I'm no pacifist, but I don't like seeing other people in pain, and I didn't do anything. It'll be funny, because one day, when I have my own kids and they come home crying because someone at school hurt them, I may remember this. I may know what they're about to become. And...I may know just how very, very sad it is.

They say that time heals all wounds. Us monsters know that that isn't true. And again, it's funny; The advice we give out the most that seems to mean a lot is a lie. It's all a damned lie. Nothing heals. Nothing is ever the same after we create our monsters. Is that fair? I mean, inadvertently, we've changed him forever. Is that sick? I think so, but I don't think my friends are sick. I don't know what to think.

So...Dear Diary....

I created a monster today.

And they say:

Sticks and stones may break my bones
But words will never harm me
But they'll chew you up and spit you out
We'll cry until we can't see

And broken world we do now fall
And demons now will save us all
And here we stand in darkest night
Ready to finish that one first fight.

For every monster, there is someone who made them that way.
PostPosted: Fri Oct 06, 2006 2:14 pm


*Claps, with a slow, Grim Rythem and Dark Expression. Gets up and silently leaves.*

Midori_Moon_Roach


egypt_sand
Captain

PostPosted: Fri Oct 06, 2006 2:30 pm


very deep, it made me think of alot of things and touched my soul so ggod for you, great story ^^
PostPosted: Fri Oct 06, 2006 3:20 pm


egypt_sand
very deep, it made me think of alot of things and touched my soul so ggod for you, great story ^^


biggrin

The sad thing is that it's true. sad

@ Midori - biggrin Yay!

CelesteSilverfang
Vice Captain


egypt_sand
Captain

PostPosted: Sat Oct 07, 2006 12:04 pm


CelesteSilverfang
egypt_sand
very deep, it made me think of alot of things and touched my soul so ggod for you, great story ^^


biggrin

The sad thing is that it's true. sad

@ Midori - biggrin Yay!
the fact that its true make more people able to relate to it 3nodding

*hugs* you seem like you needed it
PostPosted: Sat Oct 07, 2006 7:23 pm


egypt_sand
CelesteSilverfang
egypt_sand
very deep, it made me think of alot of things and touched my soul so ggod for you, great story ^^


biggrin

The sad thing is that it's true. sad

@ Midori - biggrin Yay!
the fact that its true make more people able to relate to it 3nodding

*hugs* you seem like you needed it


True, but unfortunetly, for some of us, we can relate because we were that Boy more times than we care to recall emo stare . Still, the things in that Poem/Story needed to be said, and I apploud it's & her Honesty. 3nodding

Midori_Moon_Roach


CelesteSilverfang
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 9:54 am


egypt_sand
CelesteSilverfang
egypt_sand
very deep, it made me think of alot of things and touched my soul so ggod for you, great story ^^


biggrin

The sad thing is that it's true. sad

@ Midori - biggrin Yay!
the fact that its true make more people able to relate to it 3nodding

*hugs* you seem like you needed it


:3 XD I forgot to check this.

And yeah, I like when I write things like this, just can't let the friends I'm talking about see it. emo
PostPosted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 9:57 am


Midori_Moon_Roach
egypt_sand
CelesteSilverfang
egypt_sand
very deep, it made me think of alot of things and touched my soul so ggod for you, great story ^^


biggrin

The sad thing is that it's true. sad

@ Midori - biggrin Yay!
the fact that its true make more people able to relate to it 3nodding

*hugs* you seem like you needed it


True, but unfortunetly, for some of us, we can relate because we were that Boy more times than we care to recall emo stare . Still, the things in that Poem/Story needed to be said, and I apploud it's & her Honesty. 3nodding


Gah, I've been in that position before (quite obviously). emo neutral But yeah, generally my stories are true, in some way.

Though it's odd; I never mentioned why he was crying. confused

CelesteSilverfang
Vice Captain


egypt_sand
Captain

PostPosted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 11:12 am


CelesteSilverfang
egypt_sand
CelesteSilverfang
egypt_sand
very deep, it made me think of alot of things and touched my soul so ggod for you, great story ^^


biggrin

The sad thing is that it's true. sad

@ Midori - biggrin Yay!
the fact that its true make more people able to relate to it 3nodding

*hugs* you seem like you needed it


:3 XD I forgot to check this.

And yeah, I like when I write things like this, just can't let the friends I'm talking about see it. emo
yeah, i know the feeling XP
PostPosted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 7:07 pm


CelesteSilverfang
Midori_Moon_Roach
egypt_sand
CelesteSilverfang
egypt_sand
very deep, it made me think of alot of things and touched my soul so ggod for you, great story ^^


biggrin

The sad thing is that it's true. sad

@ Midori - biggrin Yay!
the fact that its true make more people able to relate to it 3nodding

*hugs* you seem like you needed it


True, but unfortunetly, for some of us, we can relate because we were that Boy more times than we care to recall emo stare . Still, the things in that Poem/Story needed to be said, and I apploud it's & her Honesty. 3nodding


Gah, I've been in that position before (quite obviously). emo neutral But yeah, generally my stories are true, in some way.

Though it's odd; I never mentioned why he was crying. confused


Well, at least you seem to have learned from the mistake. More than I can say for alot of people.

That's okay, because that was the one big way I differed from that Boy; I never Cried. I just grew increasingly bitter, cynical, and jaded. stare

Midori_Moon_Roach


CelesteSilverfang
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 7:52 pm


Midori_Moon_Roach
CelesteSilverfang
Midori_Moon_Roach
egypt_sand
CelesteSilverfang
egypt_sand
very deep, it made me think of alot of things and touched my soul so ggod for you, great story ^^


biggrin

The sad thing is that it's true. sad

@ Midori - biggrin Yay!
the fact that its true make more people able to relate to it 3nodding

*hugs* you seem like you needed it


True, but unfortunetly, for some of us, we can relate because we were that Boy more times than we care to recall emo stare . Still, the things in that Poem/Story needed to be said, and I apploud it's & her Honesty. 3nodding


Gah, I've been in that position before (quite obviously). emo neutral But yeah, generally my stories are true, in some way.

Though it's odd; I never mentioned why he was crying. confused


Well, at least you seem to have learned from the mistake. More than I can say for alot of people.

That's okay, because that was the one big way I differed from that Boy; I never Cried. I just grew increasingly bitter, cynical, and jaded. stare


Yeah. neutral Still kind of feel bad, even though he doesn't blame me(spoke with him about it).

exclaim And there we have another way we're alike. Woot! XD No, but really. It's just generally hard to tell I'm bitter (because I'm two-toned like that), unless you read some of the stuff I write. Add over-compensating (in weirdness) to what you mentioned, and you've about got me.
PostPosted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 12:14 pm


CelesteSilverfang
Midori_Moon_Roach
CelesteSilverfang
Midori_Moon_Roach
egypt_sand
the fact that its true make more people able to relate to it 3nodding

*hugs* you seem like you needed it


True, but unfortunetly, for some of us, we can relate because we were that Boy more times than we care to recall emo stare . Still, the things in that Poem/Story needed to be said, and I apploud it's & her Honesty. 3nodding


Gah, I've been in that position before (quite obviously). emo neutral But yeah, generally my stories are true, in some way.

Though it's odd; I never mentioned why he was crying. confused


Well, at least you seem to have learned from the mistake. More than I can say for alot of people.

That's okay, because that was the one big way I differed from that Boy; I never Cried. I just grew increasingly bitter, cynical, and jaded. stare


Yeah. neutral Still kind of feel bad, even though he doesn't blame me(spoke with him about it).

exclaim And there we have another way we're alike. Woot! XD No, but really. It's just generally hard to tell I'm bitter (because I'm two-toned like that), unless you read some of the stuff I write. Add over-compensating (in weirdness) to what you mentioned, and you've about got me.


In my case, it's fairly obvious that I detest Humanity. stare With the exception of Egypt and a Scant few others, I'd like nothing better than to Wipe Out Man Kind, and repopulate the Planet with Humanoid Felines. 3nodding blaugh

Midori_Moon_Roach


egypt_sand
Captain

PostPosted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 12:44 pm


Midori_Moon_Roach
CelesteSilverfang
Midori_Moon_Roach
CelesteSilverfang
Midori_Moon_Roach
egypt_sand
the fact that its true make more people able to relate to it 3nodding

*hugs* you seem like you needed it


True, but unfortunetly, for some of us, we can relate because we were that Boy more times than we care to recall emo stare . Still, the things in that Poem/Story needed to be said, and I apploud it's & her Honesty. 3nodding


Gah, I've been in that position before (quite obviously). emo neutral But yeah, generally my stories are true, in some way.

Though it's odd; I never mentioned why he was crying. confused


Well, at least you seem to have learned from the mistake. More than I can say for alot of people.

That's okay, because that was the one big way I differed from that Boy; I never Cried. I just grew increasingly bitter, cynical, and jaded. stare


Yeah. neutral Still kind of feel bad, even though he doesn't blame me(spoke with him about it).

exclaim And there we have another way we're alike. Woot! XD No, but really. It's just generally hard to tell I'm bitter (because I'm two-toned like that), unless you read some of the stuff I write. Add over-compensating (in weirdness) to what you mentioned, and you've about got me.


In my case, it's fairly obvious that I detest Humanity. stare With the exception of Egypt and a Scant few others, I'd like nothing better than to Wipe Out Man Kind, and repopulate the Planet with Humanoid Felines. 3nodding blaugh
i feel loved XDDD >.> felines huh? ^. _.^
PostPosted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 3:13 pm


Midori_Moon_Roach
CelesteSilverfang
Midori_Moon_Roach
CelesteSilverfang
Midori_Moon_Roach
egypt_sand
the fact that its true make more people able to relate to it 3nodding

*hugs* you seem like you needed it


True, but unfortunetly, for some of us, we can relate because we were that Boy more times than we care to recall emo stare . Still, the things in that Poem/Story needed to be said, and I apploud it's & her Honesty. 3nodding


Gah, I've been in that position before (quite obviously). emo neutral But yeah, generally my stories are true, in some way.

Though it's odd; I never mentioned why he was crying. confused


Well, at least you seem to have learned from the mistake. More than I can say for alot of people.

That's okay, because that was the one big way I differed from that Boy; I never Cried. I just grew increasingly bitter, cynical, and jaded. stare


Yeah. neutral Still kind of feel bad, even though he doesn't blame me(spoke with him about it).

exclaim And there we have another way we're alike. Woot! XD No, but really. It's just generally hard to tell I'm bitter (because I'm two-toned like that), unless you read some of the stuff I write. Add over-compensating (in weirdness) to what you mentioned, and you've about got me.


In my case, it's fairly obvious that I detest Humanity. stare With the exception of Egypt and a Scant few others, I'd like nothing better than to Wipe Out Man Kind, and repopulate the Planet with Humanoid Felines. 3nodding blaugh


Don't kill meh! gonk

rofl I'm preoccupied with thinking about a world of kitty people. <33

CelesteSilverfang
Vice Captain


Midori_Moon_Roach

PostPosted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 3:33 pm


egypt_sand
Midori_Moon_Roach
CelesteSilverfang
Midori_Moon_Roach
CelesteSilverfang


Gah, I've been in that position before (quite obviously). emo neutral But yeah, generally my stories are true, in some way.

Though it's odd; I never mentioned why he was crying. confused


Well, at least you seem to have learned from the mistake. More than I can say for alot of people.

That's okay, because that was the one big way I differed from that Boy; I never Cried. I just grew increasingly bitter, cynical, and jaded. stare


Yeah. neutral Still kind of feel bad, even though he doesn't blame me(spoke with him about it).

exclaim And there we have another way we're alike. Woot! XD No, but really. It's just generally hard to tell I'm bitter (because I'm two-toned like that), unless you read some of the stuff I write. Add over-compensating (in weirdness) to what you mentioned, and you've about got me.


In my case, it's fairly obvious that I detest Humanity. stare With the exception of Egypt and a Scant few others, I'd like nothing better than to Wipe Out Man Kind, and repopulate the Planet with Humanoid Felines. 3nodding blaugh
i feel loved XDDD >.> felines huh? ^. _.^


And so you should.... ninja

Yep! Felines! Bi-Pedal Kittehs > Humans whee

Don't worry Celeste, you're a Anthro at Heart, so you get to Live.... whee

A world full of Neko's = My Dream whee heart
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