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Visual_Kiva

PostPosted: Fri Oct 13, 2006 9:34 pm


Okay, I'm going to post this. Tell me what you think thus far.
It will probably be a little hard to read because it does not want me to indent. >.> sorry. I will try to fix it as best I can.

Edit: You can post between my chapters. Give me some feedback.
PostPosted: Fri Oct 13, 2006 9:35 pm


Prologue



Terra was a dream, though nightmare. It was a world created by two souls yearning for something more in their disappointing afterlife. Here, they learned that dreams do come true if you work for it. They created a world where the creatures they loved in their past existence could come together once again, but a new creation got out of hand.
Sorcerers were humanoids with the ability to control massive amounts of energy effortlessly. They followed their gods without question, but the only problem was, the Dragon God Lifuliel created half, and the Phoenix Goddess Aulien created the other half. Gensho’u split.
Among the sorcerers of Aulien Theos, Lifuliel Adikos was considered evil, a devil who would cast Terra into darkness with his army of hideous monsters who hid behind faceless masks. This was because he cursed them all to suffer death eternally, only to be resurrected repeatedly.
Aulien, on both sides, was known to be a goddess of light and love. She alone, they thought, could slay the one who brought on the curse and restore Gensho’u to peace and convert Adikos over to the good end of things. The only problem was, Aulien loved Lifuliel, and would never hurt him, no matter how bad things got.
War waged to prove the other army wrong, to prove that their god was true, the other was false, and through the chaos, the gods died. The wars only got worse. Theos battled to cleanse Gensho’u of evil and wipe Adikos off Terra, and Adikos fought to avenge their god slain by none other than the Sorcerers of Theos. A secret promise was made that Aulien and Lifuliel would return, resurrected, if the fighting had not stopped within one thousand human years.
The time has passed, and the fighting continues, the God’s souls have returned, but do the spirits that control their bodies know who they must become? Many people never wanted the original gods back; they are perfectly fine with gods who do not show themselves, and do not get in the way of their ‘greater justice’. One wrong move, and Gensho’u will fall.

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Visual_Kiva

PostPosted: Fri Oct 13, 2006 9:38 pm


Chapter 1: Alpha


“The death toll has risen dramatically in one week, Tenshi! Adikos is gaining an advantage!” yelled the general of the rank six soldiers. The young Vice Commander shook his head and then placed it in his hands and replied in a muffled voice,
“And what is the resurrection rate, General?” The answer came back hesitantly and softly; for every two people that die, only one comes back. Tenshi heaved a heavy sigh and stood up. He looked around the conference room and shook his head, “I’m sorry everyone. I do not know what to say, please, leave this to my father; he should know what to do. Leaving me to matters of death and war was a mistake on his part. Please, allow me to retire for the evening.”
Tenshi stepped out of the scorching hot room and into the equally hot hall. Tentatively, he unzipped the top of his ceremonial robe to allow some sort of circulation, though he knew that the attempt was practically futile. The Vice Commander began his journey though the winding passageways of the Castle in which he had grown up. His pounding footsteps seemed louder than normal, though, everything now days were ten times worse to him. As he came to a intersection of the hallway, He pressed himself to the wall and cranked his neck around the corner and peered down the hall, watchful of anyone who would tell his father that he had been ditching the meetings again. Once he determined that he was in the green, he picked up his pace and soon arrived at the door to his room, the one place he could actually relax and get cool.
There was never a moment when he regretted learning all those freezing spells.

The elf sat on his bed and ran his slender fingers though the long silver hair that fell neatly past his shoulder blades. With his other hand, he flicked the clumps of golden hair at either side of his face so they were behind his ears and off of his damp face, though no matter how much he tried, there was always several broken strands that found their way together and refused to move at all.
He was usually in good spirits and his violet eyes held a sort of stoic tranquility, but lately the stoicism and tranquility was doused as the heat rose. It was getting too hot out to wear his formal sorcerer robes, but if he wasn’t fully covered, he would be considered ‘indecent’ by his fellow sorcerers. This drove him almost to the brink of madness as he tried to stay respectable.
As he was of high rank in the army, in Gensho’u if you are in a commanding position, it is like being royalty, and it was usually difficult to get out of all of the important meetings, but when he was not talking, he would constantly retire to his room and undress slightly to cool down. It never lasted long for him, though. There was always someone knocking down his door requesting an audience only to tell him the new death toll. He hated his position full heartedly.
The young leader detested the idea of death; it sickened him. He had seen war his whole life and vowed as a child that he would never kill anyone, but he felt that he had broken the vow in the fact that he had helped send innocent men and women to their deaths. His hands were completely free from coming in contact with the life giving liquid of a beings body, but when he began to think of the unfortunate soldiers under him, his hands were always stained red in his eyes; it frightened him wholly.

The young sorcerer sighed and let his body slump against the magically chilled sheets of his bed idly as he fiddled with the golden phoenix pendant that lay against his exposed chest. That pendant, Tenshi believed, is what had kept him safe his whole life, and if he ever got caught in a situation without it, the outcome would be unfavorable or even devastating. A Phoenix might have been the sign of their Goddess Aulien, but Tenshi never thought of the pendant as some religious symbol, he just found it comforting to wear. Most people wore Phoenix jewelry because it was rumored to allow you to gain favor in the eyes of the Goddess, but it was a bunch of hoopla to Tenshi.
His father was obsessed with the Phoenix. Whenever he saw something that they did not already own, he would automatically buy it and give it to his son. Tenshi never realized how often this happened until he took a good long look at his room and the places surrounding it. He instinctively glanced about his room, his eyes catching an occasional glimpse of something moving around on his desk or on the floor. For some reason, the spell he had accidentally cast when he was young and stupid still hadn’t worn off fully. This usually annoyed him and he would try to zap any moving thing, but now he just didn’t care enough.
Tenshi yawned and closed his eyes, foolishly expecting that he could catch some sleep. That notion was laughable. He hadn’t had a full nights rest his whole entire adult life. With how many times he was woken up during the night, he wondered if anyone else in the Citadel slept at all. Still, he tried. However, right as he was just about to fall asleep, there was an abrupt knock at the door,
“Tenshi,” a gruff voice called though the door. Tenshi recognized the voice immediately as the voice of the leader of Theos, his dad, Xerxes. The sleep-deprived boy moaned. He sat up, slipped on a plain shirt and tried to look at least a little presentable.
Tenshi invited his father in and pulled up a chair, knowing that his dad would want to either talk or scold him for leaving the conference. To Tenshi’s utter surprise, it was the former.
“Are you feeling okay, Tenshi? You seem sick as of late.” Xerxes asked as he took the seat that his son offered him. Tenshi sat down on his bed again and hesitated, wondering if he should answer that question.
“Well, yes, in a way. Not psychically …” Tenshi sighed. He had been mentally exhausted for what seemed like forever. Since his mother died, everything had been dumped on him, and with all the knowledge he had gained, his mind became suspicious of Theos’ motives. He knew that he was being lied to or left out of something important…More important that the war. Why did Xerxes not have scouts out looking for the goddess? With how obsessed he was, you would think that Xerxes would focus fully on that soul task.
“Why is that, Tenshi?” Xerxes asked calmly as he leaned back in the soft chair.
“Well, why do you not tell me anything? I mean, you don’t explain why things are the way they are. You don’t explain yourself when I ask why you do the things you do… or don’t do.” The Vice Commander stared intently into his dad’s eyes and waited for an answer. Xerxes was reluctant to tell his son for whatever reason, but he knew well that Tenshi would never let it go if he refused to tell, and that would make him more suspicious of hiding something important from him.
“Alright, Tenshi, what is it that you want me to tell you, exactly?”
“I don’t need to be told anything, Father. I just want you to admit that you’re hiding things from me. I’m not a child anymore; I have the right to be informed!” Xerxes looked at his lap and nodded apologetically, but Tenshi didn’t take the apology, “What are you afraid of? I mean, you forbade me to go out and fight. If I die, I’ll just come back, right?!”
The commander was afraid of his son dying, as all parents are. However, that was not the reason why he never informed Tenshi as a child or let him fight like the other sorcerers; it was the risk of Tenshi finding out something that he was trying to hard to hide. If the boy died, then he would quickly find out on the other side as he awaited his time to return.
Tenshi awaited his answer, but it was obvious that he wasn’t going to get one, so he just continued with a simple question to see exactly how much Xerxes would tell him without hesitation.
“When a Theos sorcerer dies, their soul and body go to paradise where they await their time to be resurrected, correct?” Xerxes nodded, “And while they wait, they are required to do simple tasks that prove their loyalty to their goddess in order to determine the length of time for the wait…?” Xerxes nodded again, “How does one become a god, then?”
Xerxes fidgeted in his seat slightly and hesitated. Bingo, thought Tenshi as he smirked inwardly. Xerxes was afraid that a curious child like Tenshi would become god and kill off the reincarnation of Aulien. What a trusting father.
He wanted to ask about what happened to Lifuliel’s followers, but he wasn’t sure if Xerxes would rip his head off at the mention of Adikos. Xerxes was a man full of pride, and was always saying how he wanted peace between Theos and Adikos, just what Aulien’s book has told them to want, but Tenshi realized that his father’s thoughts contradicted what his mouth said; He wanted Adikos to be wiped out, as did everyone else in Theos.
Tenshi didn’t mind ending the conversation right there. He didn’t need anyone to tell him about Adikos. He already knew that they, too, had their bodies after death, but had to endure a torture of body and soul before being sent back. To him, there was really nothing more to know. Xerxes stood up and was about to leave when a sudden thought struck him.
“Oh, Tenshi, We need you back in the conference room. Our watchers have brought us some news from the battlefield.”
Tenshi rolled his eyes and groaned in disbelief. He felt like pounding the watcher’s heads into the wall and force it into their thick skull that he didn’t want to hear it. Yet, Tenshi stood up and followed his father out the door quietly.

When they walked into the conference room, Tenshi noticed that all the people that he had talked to before were still in there. He wondered if they even had any lives beyond the door, though… he seriously doubted it. There was also several other people in there that he recognized as the watchers.
“Ah, Xerxes, Tenshi, please sit!” One of the Generals pulled a chair out for one of them to sit down in. Tenshi backed off and let his father take the chair, leaving him to stand with the watchers.
“It has been a while since we have gained any insight to the conditions within the Adikos territory,” one of the watchers standing next to Tenshi said, “but today we finally caught wind of tension and worry within their ranks.”
“No doubt everyone remembers the incident 72 etos ago.” Another of the watchers continued, “Well, we have some follow up information on that situation.”
“He has escaped containment.” Everyone in the room went dead silent as everyone let the words sink in.
The incident; it was a tragedy that struck the Adikos camp. A determined young man had begun to kill people of higher rank in order to occupy their spot. He was dead set on murdering the Commander and take Adikos for himself. It was a hard time for Adikos; however, it was quite an advantage to Theos.
“Moreover, he has been spotted very close to out current location. And we have also spotted another intruder dressed fully in black, but we do not know if they have any connection.” At this point, it was so quiet everyone might have even stopped breathing.
Xerxes was the first to speak again, “Well, fortify our defenses, warn the public, and keep an eye on the boundaries. I want an army prepared to strike on my order.” Tenshi whipped his head around and looked at his father, agape. Xerxes’ words completely appalled him.
“W-what,” He yelled, as he moved behind his father, “How can you say that?! We cannot do that! We will never be at peace with Adikos if we keep attacking them!”
Xerxes turned in his seat and gave Tenshi a stern look, “You don’t understand the tactics of war, Tenshi. None of us likes fighting, but you have to realize that Adikos are evil! If we just leave them be, they will build strength and wipe us out! We can’t let that happen!”
Tenshi scowled and slammed his fist into the wall, silencing his father, “You haven’t even tried to talk to them!” He took a deep breath and turned around, ready to leave the room. Several people called after him, but he disregarded their comments and exited the room much as he had before. He sighed deeply and stared down the hall.

It seemed like just yesterday when his best friend Ether Chael and he would turn the whole hallway into ice, only to watch the unfortunate people passing through slip and fall. Those kinds of things were childish now… but still, he wanted so badly to do them again; anything to get his mind off of the situation. He wished that he could go back to the days when the war was none of their concern; he wished that he could just do his own thing and not worry about death and fighting. Now, he was the vice-Commander of an army, and wasn’t even aloud to fight, and his best friend was a General and was always out on the battlefield.
The sound of soft pads slapping against the tiled floor drew Tenshi’s attention back to his surroundings. He looked down the hall to his left where found a winter wolf – his twin spirit – running down the hall to meet him.
“Tenshi, there you are!” The wolf growled. Tenshi could not help but smile at this; he would have never thought that a familiar could loose its master, but somehow, Asoka managed to do that quite a lot. Tenshi never bothered to ask Asoka what he did when he was running around; he figured that it might be better not to know his familiar’s odd antics…
However, Tenshi’s better judgment was out the window, “Where were you?”
Asoka hesitated, and grinned oddly, “Uh, out chasing mice…?”
Tenshi rolled his eyes and shook his head, suddenly not wanting to admit that he actually knew the creature, “Asoka, you’re a canine, not a feline. You don’t chase mice.” Asoka huffed. Tenshi shook his head again and began on his way, not knowing fully where he was going. He figured that he had nowhere to be, so he just let his feet lead the way.
He pushed open the front doors of the castle, stepped out onto the large white steps and looked out over the town. It was old, very old. In fact, the Theos Citadel was made in the time of Aulien, and she even lived in it for a long time, as well. The stones were covered in vines wherever you went, but the houses were always in a good state; the wives that were not out at war were always cleaning, cooking, or selling goods around town. Theos was unique in the way that no other place in Gensho’u had so much plant life around it or in it. It was defiantly a sign of the plant loving Aulien.

Tenshi should have figured that he would end up at the pond just outside of the walls of the city; he spent half of his life sitting in the large tree next to the water. It really did fascinate him more than it should. He would just sit and stare at the water for hours upon hours as he thought about nothing in particular. He sometimes felt as if there was something hidden inside the water, something intangible, like a lost memory.
Tenshi kicked off his shoes, grabbed onto the lowest branch, and boosted himself into the tree with his bare feet. The bark scratched at the soles of his feet and his elbows, as all rough surfaces do, as he pulled himself fully onto the thick limb. He sighed and looked over the pond just as he did every day. There was nothing new about it, there never was.
The pond was a decent size. You could clearly see the bank on the other side and everything on it, and you would not have to yell to talk to someone across the water, either. It was crystal clear, thanks to Tenshi, that is; it had never returned to the normal color after his experiments with magic not so long back. Nobody minded, though, and Tenshi was sure that the fish were happy about it too.
Asoka curled himself up at the base of the trunk lazily. It was just that kind of day; warm, slightly breezy. Tenshi always wondered why it was so hot inside the Citadel, but it was always a nice, cool day outside. He figured that it was just one of life’s little mysteries.
“Tenshi,” called a familiar voice called from behind. Tenshi glanced over his shoulder to the source of the noise; Ether.
Ether was a good 12 etos older than Tenshi, but people were always thinking that Tenshi was the elder of them. They had been friends ever since Tenshi could remember, and probably long before that, too. For years they had wreaked havoc on the town; all towns need to have their troublemakers. Ether had always brought out the worst of him in their younger days; teaching him how to annoy people and pull all of the best pranks, but there was always Xerxes and his right hand man, the Cleric, there to ruin their fun. Tenshi always liked to believe that Ether’s blue hair was due to a mistake that they made while trying to hide before they were caught messing with their magic again; he probably was not too far from the truth, either.
Tenshi dangled his feet off the side of the branch and greeted his friend. It had been a while since he had last seen Ether. He had left to go take care of some business, though he never told anyone what that business might have been.
“You’re back! So, did you have a nice trip?” Tenshi asked as Ether drew near. Ether shook his head.
“I can’t say that it was pleasant, exactly.” He replied coldly. Tenshi frowned and slipped from the tree smoothly, nearly landing on the sleeping Asoka.
“So, where did you go, anyway?” Tenshi began again as he nudged his familiar awake. Ether hesitated.
“Um, I was actually out interrogating someone from the Adikos cells, to tell you the truth.”
Tenshi raised an eyebrow. Somehow he couldn’t believe that was what his friend was doing, though, the time span that he was gone for did back him up; two weeks is enough to get there, do your business, and be back, so, that was defiantly on Ether’s side. “And these devils actually let you in?” Tenshi asked.
Ether laughed nervously, “Well… only two people really knew that I was there…” Tenshi stared at his friend for several tantalizing seconds, and then turned.
“I suppose that it’s best not to know, right?” Tenshi asked. Ether nodded, though he half expected Tenshi to press the matter, even if he said that it was best not to know. Tenshi was like that some times; he was always hungry for some sort of knowledge, even if it was useless information.
“Yeah… well… I’m going to go inside and get some food; I’m starving.” Ether waved and began walking back into town, leaving Tenshi and Asoka alone once again. Tenshi watched his friend until he was out of sight and the walked over to the edge of the lake. He bent onto his knee and placed his hand into the cold water to pick up a flat stone. He stood and cocked his hand back and then flicked the stone into the water, skipping it over the surface. He watched as the previously undisturbed water sprang into a chaotic storm of tiny waves.
As he watched, his eye happened to catch the reflection of black in the turbulent ripples that were left behind, but when he turned, there was nobody there. He felt uncomfortable suddenly, as did Asoka. The wolf had his ears flattened against his head and his legs spread in a defensive position as he growled softly.
“You feel it too…” Tenshi said quietly to his familiar who growled in affirmation, “We need to get out of here…” Asoka nodded and began to inch away toward the town, but Tenshi held his ground.
I will inform Xerxes that we have the intruder in our premises. Asoka said directly into Tenshi’s mind. Tenshi gave a quick nod and crouched low to the ground as Asoka darted off. Tenshi scooted toward the pond and reached his arm in, and closed his fingers around a rather sharp rock, just in case he had to resort to anything even resembling a fight. He did not want to resort to bloodshed if he could just knock out whoever it was.
A cold, wet hand suddenly closed over the silver haired man’s mouth and nose, blocking off his hair passage and successfully muffling any yell that he would no doubt attempt in this situation. His captor hissed into Tenshi’s ear, saying that they would let him go if he promised not to draw any attention to them, run away, or attack. Tenshi nodded quickly, feeling he had no choice under the circumstances as his lungs burned from lack of oxygen. As promised, the captor let go, and Tenshi did as he said he would do as well. Tenshi turned slowly to face the intruder, the rock still clutched tightly in his hand.
The figure was shorter than Tenshi and clad from head to foot in black and a mask of pure white hid their features, except for their ‘fresh blood’ red eyes. There was no doubt in Tenshi’s mind that this person was Adikos, even if their natural aura did not say so. “Who are you?” Tenshi demanded, hardly above a whisper. The figure shook their head
“It does not matter right now. If you need a name… call me shadow or something.” The figure stepped closer to Tenshi, “You can drop the rock; I don’t intend to hurt anyone.” Tenshi’s grip on the rough rock did not loosen; Xerxes taught him never to trust Adikos, even if there was no indication of danger at all.
“What do you want, ‘Shadow’?” Tenshi asked, louder than his previous question.
“A long time ago I dropped something special to me just over the border of Adikos. A cleric picked it up…” Shadow explained, the last part holding a venomous sting, “I want it back, and you are going to get it for me. It’s probably hidden somewhere in your temple.” Shadow seemingly disappeared from in front of Tenshi and reappeared behind. There was a tug at his necklace, “It looks very much like this, but a dragon with a red tint…” Tenshi gasped at Shadow pressed against Tenshi’s back, running their hands down Tenshi’s chest and over his sides, “There is something else, also… but I think I’ll have to get it later.”
Tenshi yanked away and faced Shadow once again, disgusted, “No! I would never do a favor for someone like you!” Shadow backed up a bit and put their hands up.
“Hey, hey, it’s not my fault if your father ends up dead one day!” Shadow laughed slightly. Tenshi hissed. Shadow bowed low, then disappeared once again, but this time did not show them self again, but their voice still rang out, “Oh yeah, and I heard a pack of hungry hill giants are looking for a good meal. I suggest you concentrate on that before you go off attacking Adikos.”
Tenshi looked around, but found nobody, to his disappointment. He ran his hands over his chest where the dark clad figure had touched him before; his skin burned. Tenshi cursed lightly and turned again toward the Citadel, “Hill giants…” Tenshi bit his lip, and then began to run back to the Citadel.

Tenshi entered the main hall, nearly breathless. Ether turned quickly, concerned about his friend’s quick entrance. Xerxes stood from his chair to greet his son, but Tenshi did not give him the chance.
“Hill Giants are coming!” He said breathlessly, “We cannot march against Adikos now; if we do, it’ll be then end of Theos Citadel!” Xerxes stared at his son questioningly.
“And who told you this?” He asked skeptically, “Your familiar informed me of an intruder; they told you, didn’t they? Do you really want to believe a murderer from Adikos? Have you any proof to back up the claim, Tenshi?” Xerxes’s questions flew at Tenshi quickly and accusingly, striking down any sense of urgency that Tenshi expected to hear. Then again, the warning did come from a stranger.
“I-I don’t know, sir…” Tenshi replied quietly, “I guess that this person may have been the murderer from Adikos. It does seem likely, but I can’t just ignore their warning!” Tenshi stepped forward so that he stood next to his blue haired friend, “What if they were telling the truth and a group of hill giants attack our base? It would be demolished and we would be venerable to Adikos! Please, let me go to fight!”
“No, Tenshi.” Xerxes retorted sternly, turning around, “You don’t even know how to fight, if I let you go, you’ll die!”
Tenshi huffed, “Xerxes, what do you expect me to do when you’re gone? Am I just supposed to sit around and accept death without facing it head on? You cannot keep me from battle forever! Let me go now… so I can get used to the fact.”
“Xerxes, he does have a point.” Ether butted in, but Xerxes ignored him and continued with the argument.
“When I die, there will be a whole army to protect you, just like there is now!”
“And what happens when they die, too?” yelled Tenshi, stepping toward his father quickly. Xerxes whipped around and stared his son straight in the eye. “You,” Tenshi continued, “You won’t even let me try.”
“He is old enough to think for himself and make his own decisions; He has been for nearly twenty-four etos! He really needs the experience… I mean, with this intruder running around, you never know when Tenshi might find himself in a tight spot! Just let us go check out this disturbance. I will personally keep a strict eye on your son, mi’lord. Please, let us go.” Ether cut in again, more than a little annoyed by being ignored after his first intrusion, “…Even if it is only a precaution.”
“Ether, you are more than capable of handling this situation by yourself. I do not want my son put in that kind of danger, especially when it may just be a trap set up by those Adikos dogs…” Xerxes retorted angrily. Ether lowered his head, deciding to not butt into the conversation again Tenshi crossed his arms over his chest and looked over his father in disgust, “Tenshi, I want you to stay in your room until this intruder ordeal is resolved. Understood?” Xerxes added quickly.
Tenshi shook his head, turned to Ether, and whispered something to him before he stormed out of the room without another word. Ether looked up at the commander meekly, “I’ll go check on this with a small group of soldiers, if I have your permission.”
PostPosted: Sat Oct 14, 2006 1:48 pm


(This chapter is a kind of work in progress. I intend to improve it later.)

Chapter 2: πρώτο αίμα (pro’to aima)



The shadow tightened the straps on its ashiko a shuko as it watched a group of one-hundred and two warriors leave the confines of the Theos citadel. Let’s go. The dark clad figure jumped onto a large tree, using the metal spikes on its hands and feet to aid with grip on the rough surface of the tree. Just as the shade’s foot touched an outstretched limb, they took off, launching them self into the next tree, following the group of soldiers, but keeping a safe distance. It was better to follow a group of battle ready soldiers than hanging around in a high security Citadel and get caught and exposed. Plus, the shadow found battle to be quite intoxicating.
To the intruder’s dismay, the group stopped not too long after departing; they obviously had no clue where to go. The shade had to laugh; they had forgotten to tell Tenshi where the beasts were coming from. I guess I should show them the way, otherwise, they‘d never find the fight.
The shadow ripped off its mask and set it down on the tree limb to wipe the salty liquid away from its eyes, then quickly removed a glove, and pricked a finger, then ran it over the white mask.

Tenshi growled and lowered his head, nearly getting a mouthful of his horse’s gray hair. He had idly let that Adikos personage leave before even asking directions. Ether, on the other hand, was having a grand time laughing at his friend’s shortcomings.
Smooth, Tenshi, very smooth… Tenshi said inwardly. You are such a screw-up…you are going to end up dying a pre-mature death. I can’t believe I snuck out of my room.
Just as Tenshi raised his head to look around the clearing, a well-aimed projectile struck him square in the side of the head and the twinge of pain brought tears into his eyes. Tenshi whipped around, looking in the direction in which the small object came from, but saw nobody, only a familiar accessory of a certain shadow. Again, Ether could be heard in the background laughing.
The vice-Commander hopped from his horse to pick up the mask that lay upside down several feet away. Tenshi approached cautiously, looking back occasionally to Ether who looked on in amused interest. Tenshi bent low, plucking the mask from the ground and turning it over in his hands. On the surface of the mask was a trail of blood, forming an arrow that pointed to the east, and then under it were the words, “Now march.” Tenshi gave the mask a disapproving look; blood should not be used as ink.
He quickly dropped the mask to the ground at his feet and turned back to his horse. Ether was quick to speak up, asking what that was all about.
“The mask wants us to go east.”
“Looks like our intruder really wants us to get rid of those pesky trolls, eh?” Ether smiled and stared down at the mask, “Kinda makes you wonder what Adikos is up to…” Tenshi stared down at the mask as well, then to the surrounding landscape.
“Yeah, and whoever it is… they are probably going to watch us the whole time, so we’ll need to keep an eye out for anything suspicious, and especially the ‘murderer-intruder’… who knows if they are together or not.”
Ether nodded in agreement, pulling his horses reins to the left and headed off to the east. Tenshi looked past Ether to their new destination beyond the forest in the giant rocky hills that made a fitting home for the barbaric Hill Giants of Gensho’u. The silver haired boy felt the nervous tension finally begin to force itself onto him with each step his horse took into the dense forest.
Since he was young, Tenshi had always heard tales of these barbarians. His mother loved to tell any kind of story, even if it was gruesome. She always used to tell Tenshi never to go near them or their territory because they loved to smash people under large boulders. It was rumored that under all the boulders around Giant country have dead sorcerer bodies or remnants under them. Every time Tenshi thought about it, it would send a violent shudder down his spine. He could only imagine how frightening these creatures must be.
Ether looked back at his friend and laughed before calling out, “Hey, catch up, daydreamer!” Tenshi looked up ahead to find himself a good 50 feet away from everyone else. He gasped and kicked his heels into the horse’s sides, spurring it forward faster to catch up to the rest of the group.

Tenshi’s grip increased on the hilt of his sword tenfold as he jumped from his horse onto the rocky grass just at the base of the hills. The rough growling of giants could be heard clearly in the distance as a small group of warrior approached one of the many caves dug into the hillside. At one time in the past, these hills had been rid of any violent creature, so the seeing this site was proof that the shadow had not lied to him. Ether did not seem surprised, but nobody really bothered to look surprised when his or her stomachs were flipping with nervous tension.
Ether whispered to several of the subordinate lieutenants to take a few of their soldiers to the other cave entrances and await his command. At this, the small army split almost automatically into mini ambush groups and surrounded the hills. The blue haired General nodded to Tenshi and walked forward calmly, even though he was more than a little nervous about dealing with humanoids such as Giants once again; he had never had a good success rate when it came to such things.
“We will do this fast… Don’t even give them time to realize what is happening.” Ether said quietly, mostly to himself than anyone else. “What we want to do is ambush them by luring them out, then getting as many people on top of them as we can, that way, we can have several people stabbing away trying to sink their blade right into the brain.”
Tenshi could do naught but cringe at the image it brought to his head. The way Ether talked made them sound like ruthless animals, but it had to be done nonetheless. Ether grabbed Tenshi’s arm and began to drag him up the hill a way until they were right over the mouth of the Hill giant’s cave, then began to talk again. “This is your first time fighting… and it’s not a very nice first opponent, so I don’t want you jumping into the fray until you get how to do things. I know that you can handle a sword; I have seen you in the training hall with the soldiers, I know you are good at it, but please don’t do anything until you know how the outcome will be, okay?”
Tenshi nodded and allowed himself to be pushed to the back of the small group of battle-ready sorcerers. Some were already casting protection spells on them or their friends or fortifying their weapons with elements or property enhancers. Tenshi looked at his own blade and grinned; there was no need to enhance his weapon, the dark elves residing outside of Gensho’u had made it, and then Xerxes somehow got it into his grasp. There was no reason for Tenshi to worry about arms.

The stained blade sunk deep into the hard scale-like skin of the giant’s huge leg as Ether quickly spun out of the path of an oncoming projectile. The large boulder thudded to the ground a few feet away, drowning out the cries of protest from the ten-foot humanoid. Ether plucked his bloodied sword from the beast’s leg and quickly went in for another strike. The giant, though, had already begun his counter strike. Ether froze, eyeing his situation with alarm. The giant grinned stupidly and sent its weapon hurdling downward. Ether cursed and dove out of the way, barely escaping its path before the bludgeon sent pieces of earth into the air.
Ether stumbled to his feet, only to find the spiked weapon skimming the ground toward him. His body seemed as if it was acting on its own as he jumped up, with no time to spare, yet the timing could not have been better. Ether cried out as he was forced against the spiked wooden club. He found a sturdy footing against the wood, and then slowly lifted his hand off the bloodied spike that had found a place in his hand. The warrior winced and held in a wave of nausea, then scrambled to the Giant’s hand, away from the danger of the spikes.
Ether had a hard time staying on top of the giant’s hand as it shook violently to get him off. However, Giant’s were always stupid creatures, and in its spasm, it forgot the club it held, and promptly opened his hand, letting go of the spiked bludgeon. The creature cried out in pain as the heavy weapon crashed to the ground, embedding is tough spikes right into his bare foot. Ether’s chance came when the dumb colossus bent over to examine the wound, completely forgetting about the blue haired boy making his way up the giant’s chain mail. Ether jumped, catching a handful of the filthy tuft of hair sprouting from the creature’s ugly head. With his other hand, he pulled his sword from his sheath and aimed for the soft spot under its skull, then sunk his blade deep into the skin.
The Hill Giant suddenly snapped back to reality as the pain hit. It swatted at the back of his neck in the attempt to knock the nuisance away. Ether stabbed again, feeling the energy of the Giant decrease with each blow.
“Down, down, you ugly thing!” Ether growled, stabbing again at the mutilated neck. With one final stab, the giant gave into the pain and fell to its knees with a howl. The warrior climbed to the top of the hill giants head and gave out a sudden shrill whistle, catching the attention of the giant’s friends on top of the hill, tossing boulders at the tiny sorcerers running around below. Nearly ever ugly head turned in Ether’s direction in anger. Simultaneously, each let a rock fly in his direction, forgetting about what their target stood upon. Ether smiled to himself in satisfaction.
He had many large rocks to dodge, but he was pleased as several of them met his mark upon the suffering giant’s head.
“And, that’s two…” Ether stated proudly as he stepped over spots of fray brain matter. He slumped against one of the boulders, facing away from the bloodied battlefield. He let out a long sigh and clutched his throbbing hand. ‘I’m lucky that this is all I got’, He thought, ‘The way they rushed out at us like that just before we were ready… they had to have known we were coming.’ He growled and hit his good fist against the rock, ‘And it’s just my luck… I lost Tenshi, damn it! ‘
He peeked around the rock to the body-strewn hillside. His friend had only experienced battle in protective gear in the training hall, as far as he knew. If that was the case, then there was a good chance that he was dead under some stinking giant corpse.
Yells of victory sounded in the distance, indicating the death of yet another giant. Ether turned back and rested his head up against the stone, whispering quietly to himself, “With that secret of yours, Tenshi… you better have some hidden fighting skill.” He winced, brought his skewered hand, and looked it over. The blood flowed freely over his palm and down his forearm until it acquainted itself with the fabric of his tunic, or dripped off.
“Sir, the operation is complete.” A soldier said suddenly from the other side of the rock, “Please pull back now.”
Ether straightened himself and replied quietly, fearful of any eavesdroppers, “So soon? How…?”
“Amidst the confusion of an ambush, it is easy to mingle.” The soldier replied quickly. Ether moved from his spot against the rock and looked about the field. Good… now where is Tenshi?

Tenshi clasped his hands behind his back and stretched, sighing. His blade twitched as the muscles in the Giant’s neck gave a final shutter before it went completely still. Tenshi gave a satisfied smile and clutched the hilt of his sword, plucking it from the punctured artery of his third kill. He took a deep breath and wiped the sweat from his brow as he tried to relieve the burning in his lungs. He took a quick glance around nervously checking for other warriors.
Nobody knew that he could even handle a sword, except Ether, who had supposedly taught him everything he knew. His father forbade him to wield a weapon of warfare. They all said he was ‘too good for that’, and that one of such high rank should not have to ever touch a sword. If Xerxes found out, Tenshi thought, I would be dead.
The sounds of battle on the other side of the hills faded considerably, and in a way, this worried Tenshi. He wasn’t sure who was winning. He had snuck away once they were ambushed so that he could keep out of the battle zone, and search for Shadow at the same time. He was sure he spotted that intruder around.
A pile of rocks slid from their place atop the rocky hill, nearly hitting Tenshi as he jumped from the corpse of the giant. The rocks came to a stop at Tenshi’s feet after their freefall. Tenshi stared at them for a second before redirecting his attention to the hill next to him, squinting against the light.
“Ah, Lord Tenshi, There you are! We were afraid that they had killed you!” A soldier called out as his dark outline showed up on the hill, blocking the sun, “What are you doing all the way back here, anyway? The battle is up front!”
Tenshi gave a meek smile and nodded, “It’s true, It is just… This giant tried to run, and we both know that if I let him go, he would just be a trouble to us later.” He pointed out smartly. The soldier nodded and proceeded to explain their plan to pull the army back a in such a way as to lure the remaining enemies off their advantageous position near the hills onto the flat ground just before the forest on the other side.
Tenshi nodded in understanding and began to make his way up the rocky hillside.

“Mission is nearly complete, my giant friend.” The shadow laughed from the tree just above the 10-foot Giant leader.
“Un’dast clan suffer much from this.” The giant chief boomed dumbly in reply. Shadow nodded thoughtfully in a way that would almost seem remorseful.
“You have another dozen still inside the hills, though. Thirty bodies should be more than enough for the thirteen of you, right?”
“Yes, but our troll friends eat, too.”
The hade turned sharply to the Giant chief, “You live with the Trolls? How many are there with you?”
“Number not matter, mysterious one, we want all little people.” Un’dast laughed, clapping a hand against the trunk of the large tree, making Shadow grip tightly to the bark with his handspikes.
“That was not in the agreement!” Shadow yelled, the voice-changing spell cracking slightly.
“Un’dast know that, Shadow, But you say we could take as many as we can eat. Now we can eat them all!” The giant pointed out. Shadow was caught.
“Fine…” Shadow stated flatly, “Take all of them, then… that is, everyone except my men, the blue haired one, and him,” was the reply as shadow’s gloved finger landed on Tenshi’s far off figure. Un’dast looked over and frowned at the distinct look of ache in the shadow’s red eyes. Un’dast gave a nasty scowl and hit the trunk of the tree again, leaving Shadow trying to cling for life to the trunk as the tree shook violently. Anyone could recognize a look like that.
“You a lady!” Un’dast roared suddenly, “Un’dast take order from lady? You trick Un’dast!” The giant stepped toward the shuttering tree, upset with the turn of events.
Shadow recoiled with a twinge of surprise, “Wait, what are you talking about? I’m not a lady!”
Un’dast was not amused. “I see way you look at Theos princeling. You make fool of Un’dast!”
“Why would my gender matter at all, Un’dast? It changes nothing!” Shadow growled, enraged by the Giant’s sudden change of mentality. The dirt brown creature smiled an equally brown toothy smile and reached out for Shadow.
“Un’dast only listens to strong man, not weak lady. Lady for looking at, not for listening to or commanding army.” Un’dast’s hand reached closer to the figure in the tree who hissed audibly.
“You know not the superior power of a woman!” Shadow replied rudely. With one flick of the wrist, the giant’s grubby hand fell in a bloody mess to the ground many feet below. The wounded leader bellowed a pained cry and covered his stub of a wrist with his other hand. The attacker jumped from the tree and landed gracefully upon the open palm of Un’dast’s severed appendage.
“Deal is off, men! Destroy ever one of them! Paint the battlefield black with their stinking blood!” The shadow called to the slowly dispersing army, “Allow Ether and the Vice-commander to leave and begin extermination!”

From his distance, Tenshi could even hear Shadow’s amplified voice call out. He looked up, surprised, “Shadow!”
Tenshi watched in horror as a think hand lashed out, and constricted around the cloaked figure’s thin frame and tossed them like a rag doll into the tree behind.
“Now is not the time to worry about that!” Ether’s voice called out as his horse galloped at full speed toward Tenshi, “Get on, we have to retreat now! An unknown number of trolls have gathered at the entrances to every cave. If we don’t get out of here now, we never will!” Ether grabbed onto Tenshi’s shoulder as he stopped his horse.
Tenshi still stood, staring at the grotesque site on the ledge above them, “What about Shadow?!”
Ether sighed and grabbed Tenshi’s wrist, “Sometimes you have to make sacrifices!” he replied harshly as he pulled his friend onto the horse behind him. Tenshi tried to struggle away, but Ether held him firmly to the horse.
“Why retreat when nearly all the Gants are dead?” Yelled Tenshi, angered.
“Did you not hear me, Tenshi? I said we have trolls!”
Tenshi’s reply caught in his throat, He had not heard that. The horse ran at top speed to the top of the hill where the whole battlefield could be seen. Hundreds of trolls swarmed around the dead bodies like flies. In the center was a small task force of five, surrounded completely.
“Those men you see there have volunteered themselves to stay behind to give us our chance to escape. The remaining of our army has already made full haste back to the Citadel.” Ether explained, bowing his head in respect for the doomed men. Tenshi sat, mouth agape at the unimaginable numbers of trolls who had, in seconds, completely covered the small field. With no other words, Ether urged his horse forward.
Tenshi turned himself on the horse just in time to see the hills bust into a sea of red flames.

Tenshi stared down at the small dwindling fire that lay just at his feet, the image of earlier still etched into his mind. Ether stood a few feet away, speaking with a group of bards that made their makeshift homes within this part of the Theos Forest, quite a way away from the Citadel.
“Really, thank you. We could not have made it before night fell.” Ether bowed to the group of men and women who replied kindly.
Tenshi picked up another long and tossed it idly into the fire, smothering it even more, but it jumped to life again as Ether made his way back to his friend’s side. Ether looked hesitant to sit down; because he knew that the prince was mad with him.
“Hey, are you okay?” He asked as he finally decided to take a seat next to the fire across from Tenshi. The quiet boy said did not respond for a few seconds, and then he nodded.
“I’m fine.” He lied. Ether rolled his eyes slightly at the obvious lie.
“There is a lake nearby.” Ether said quietly, deciding to change the subject, “If you want to wash off that blood and stuff. I honestly didn’t expect you to fight. I know how much you hate death.”
“I didn’t train with you all those times just to run away like a moron when trouble crosses my path.” Tenshi shot back, irritably. Ether winced slightly, but continued.
“But you did run off, alone, too.” Ether raised an eyebrow, “How many did you take down?”
Tenshi kept a straight face and closed his eyes, “Three.”
Ether’s jaw dropped, “T-three?! I’m getting old! The student has surpassed the master!” The blue haired warrior struck the dirt playfully.
“What’s this?” Tenshi asked, lightening up, “Only two, General Chael? You’re slipping.”
Ether shook his head sadly, “If I only had that ‘creature mind control’ thing like you do… Plus, one cannot be at his or her best when worrying about a newbie on the field of battle.”
Tenshi shook his head and scoffed at the word. He stood, turned, and began to walk away, “A swim sounds nice now,” He said, answering his friend’s unasked question. Ether smiled devilishly.
“It’s dark.” Ether pointed out bluntly, “Watch out or you won’t see those curious mermaids coming around.”
“Keep the fires going for me!” Tenshi called back.

Tenshi stared over the surface of the lake before he pulled his bloodstained tunic top over his head; followed by the rest of his clothing, save for something to cover his midsection, and then stepped timidly into the icy water. He continued slowly into the shallows as his skin slowly numbed to the freezing temperatures.
Tenshi wrapped his arms across his freezing chest and closed his eyes, trying to rid himself of the image of the burning hills, but to his dismay, when he opened his eyes, he was not alone. He found himself staring straight into another face. Startled, Tenshi stumbled back, catching his foot on a large rock, lost balance, and found him engulfed in the dark, icy water. He arose quickly, cursing quietly at the coldness.
“Greetings, Elf!” The woman said, smiling. Tenshi grimaced slightly.
I didn’t think Ether was serious… I have to thank whatever force it was that made me keep some clothing on. Tenshi thought while forcing a fake smile, though a believable one, “Good evening, young lady.” He replied quickly.
“I couldn’t help but to notice that you seem troubled.” The girl replied happily, examining Tenshi, who shifted his arms nervously across his chest.
Let us think about this for a second, girl…Tenshi growled inwardly, “Sorry, but I don’t much feel like telling all my problems to a creature who comes up to me randomly in a lake when I am wearing practically nothing.”
“My name is Saara… if that makes you feel any better.” She replied hopefully, “Plus, it’s better to tell someone you don’t know your problems than it is telling someone you do know.”
Tenshi blinked. That wasn’t exactly his problem, “It’s really nothing, Saara.”
“You sure? I was that huge fire… you were there, right?”
“Look,” Tenshi snapped, “There are people back there that need help and didn’t get it when I could have given it to them.” Tenshi sighed, “Happy?”
Saara frowned, “No…” She said bluntly as she rand her tail fin over the surface of the water, “That’s depressing.”
“Yeah, I know.” Tenshi sunk lower into the water, “It’s because of them that I’m alive. I wish I could repay them.”
Saara smiled widely, “You can go back in the morning and bury their bodies.”
Tenshi groaned, “But the messenger of Death takes them away… they won’t be there anymore.” He pointed out as he ran his fingers through his wet hair and sunk even further into the water until only his head showed.
Saara shook her head, “Incorrect, actually. Death got a bit overwhelmed and has only been taking those who a die non-combat death or who the Fates tell him to take. The lode was getting a bit heavy on him, ya know… with so many dying on the battlefront.”
Tenshi looked at her skeptically, “And how do you know this bit of information?”
The mermaid flicked her tail, splashing Tenshi’s face with cold water and laughed, “I’m a bard, silly, how else would I know this?”
Tenshi growled to himself, I could have sworn you were a creature from hell…he thought, “Honestly, that didn’t help.”
Saara huffed and turned her back to Tenshi, “You question my sources?”
Tenshi relaxed now, “Look, Saara, It’s late and I want to get back to camp. I’d like to get this blood off of me as soon as I can.”
The mermaid turned slightly, making Tenshi go on the alert again, and then she saluted, flicked her tail, and swam off without another word. Tenshi shook his head and stared after her, “Mermaids…” he mumbled.

“Strip and they shall come.” Tenshi mumbled as he held his newly drenched clothing over the fire to dry.
“I told ya to watch out,” Ether laughed, “You were wise to keep something on. If one sees you, they will tell all of their friends… believe me. You were lucky to get out of there with only wet clothing.”
“Yeah,” Tenshi laughed, “Tell me about it.” He placed his pants on the tree branch and rang out his shirt.
“So, how many were there… five, six?”
“There were eight or ten, actually.” The wet elf sighed wryly. Ether gave a sorry sigh and poked at the flame with a stick.
“We’ll go back to home early tomorrow right when the sun comes up, if that’s okay with you, Tenshi.” Ether tapped the end of his stick on the ground, sending ash into the air.
“Actually, I’d like to go back to the Seven Hills. The dead have the right to a proper farewell.” Tenshi butted in as he dumped a bit of lake water from the bottom of his boot. He peered inside, then sat it down and picked up the other, repeating what he had just done.
Ether looked up to his friend and smiled modestly, “You’re wondering, too, then. I was almost positive you’d be thinking about possible survivors… of course, I can tell that you just want to find Shadow and give them your thanks, right?”
Tenshi nodded.
“You do know that you could be punished for helping an intruder, right?”
“I’m willing to risk that.”

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