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Posted: Sat Oct 21, 2006 8:04 am
I'd really like to know what you guys think of it and if there's anything that I can improve on. Please critique nicely and not flame.
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Posted: Sun Oct 22, 2006 11:25 pm
Not bad. I don't like the arrow though. I'd say 7/10
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Posted: Mon Oct 30, 2006 4:43 am
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