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 Posted: Sat Oct 21, 2006 9:12 am
When you have this feeling,
When You Have This Feeling
You have to let them know,
Cause if you don’t,
It’s likely to show.
It’s a wonderful feeling,
That you get inside,
It is a feeling,
You just can’t hide.
It seems like your floating,
And you can’t touch the ground,
It feels like you’re spinning,
Around and around.
It’s a feeling,
That seems so true,
A feeling that is meant,
For him and me too.
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Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 1:54 pm
This is a very good poem. It's nice to know some people still keep the rhyme after two lines like me. 10 / 10
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Posted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 10:47 am
thank you, if u wanna add me as a friend, go for it, it's nice to know someone apreciates my poems.. unlike my family
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Posted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 6:33 pm
It is nice to see rhymers. About half of my poems rhyme, the other half is freestyle. I like to jump in between.
In any case, I love the rhythm of this poem, and I like how short the lines are. It gives a feeling that if you don't let someone know, then you might lose the chance because time is so short. Maybe I'm over-analyzing it (which I tend to do), but I really love this poem! It's sooo adorable and cute!
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Posted: Wed Nov 22, 2006 7:00 am
Reikuken It is nice to see rhymers. About half of my poems rhyme, the other half is freestyle. I like to jump in between.
In any case, I love the rhythm of this poem, and I like how short the lines are. It gives a feeling that if you don't let someone know, then you might lose the chance because time is so short. Maybe I'm over-analyzing it (which I tend to do), but I really love this poem! It's sooo adorable and cute!
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Posted: Mon Dec 11, 2006 5:40 pm
i love it, if not for just the rhythem, but because it tuches the heart heart . i have a lot of respect for that. true love is a gift, dont hide it, it will only be lost after time. you cant hide love.
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Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 3:21 pm
Kandy_Inu i love it, if not for just the rhythem, but because it tuches the heart heart . i have a lot of respect for that. true love is a gift, dont hide it, it will only be lost after time. you cant hide love.
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