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E l r i c

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Posted: Mon Oct 23, 2006 3:53 pm

Hallo, all. This contest is a different sort of contest. In this contest, you will construct a poem and you will present it here. I highly recommend this contest. It's the first contest you can win stuff in. I will rate all poems at the contest's end, then I will give out the blue ribbon. Besides me being the only judge, I will pick one person to also decide on their favorite.

Notes on this Contest:

--> Try to keep the poems literate.
--> Watch grammer and spelling and punctuation.
--> Try and keep it themed to one particular subject

Subjects to choose from:

[.//red] Love; Passion; Cherish; Nice; Care; Kindness; Angel; Feminine.
[.//black] Death; Fear; Anger; Mean; Evil; Devil; Scared.
[.//silver] Alchemy; Metal; Choose a character from the series and write about him/her.
Things to note:

|i| It's a nice thing to rhyme, but make it sound nice, unless using one of the black subjects.
|i| You do not need to rhyme. It's not a necessity.
|i| Most importantly, have fun and be creative!

There you have it. There's no current end date as of now.

Posted: Sat Oct 28, 2006 5:02 pm

If I Lost It All...

If I lost all hope
Would you help me find it?

If I lost all confidence
Would you push me into gaining it back?

If I lost all life
Would you grant me a new one?

If I lost my heart
Would you give me your's?

I'd give you the world
Only to see you smile.

I'd give you a brand new life
So you'd be happy again.

I'd give you confidence
So you could keep going forward in life.

I'd give my heart
So you knew I loved you.

I can't live without you
For you mean too much to me.

I wouldn't be able to live
If you were to leave me.

I care so much
That I'd die for you.

Because it's what brothers do.
They fight for each other.

They watch each other's back.
And make sure they don't trip or lose balance.

They make sure they don't fall,
and land on their face.

It's because we're brothers
That our bond is so stong.

We both know the consequences
Of losing each other.

And we're willing to pay that price.
Because it's what brother's do.

This is my poem submission. I've also got an update: A new mod administrator is to be coming soon. This person I'll use in order to send updates, links and news of the sort. Also, the prize for this contest is a big one: 5k (5,000) Gaia Gold. So I'd recommend submitting to the contest. And also, I will be choosing the same format of voting instead.

Enjoy.

E l r i c

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smalltowndreamer

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Posted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 10:20 am

If I could cry these tears that are locked up in my throat
Would he hold me and tell me it's okay?
Could we be friends like we were when I was little?
Or would he throw me away?

Remeber,his watch said
How could anyone forget?
The day they burned their house to the ground
I swear the world wept

Could we be the way we were,once long ago?
I really hope we can but he seems distant
Everyday I try but now I'm left to cry
Will I be also left to die alone?

He's more then my friend and I'm more to him then just a girl
But will he be able to forget and move on?
I don't think any of us will...

This is about Ed and Winry's feelings for him.It's not too good but I hope you like it,anyway..

Posted: Tue Dec 19, 2006 2:36 pm

idreamofgaara

If I could cry these tears that are locked up in my throat
Would he hold me and tell me it's okay?
Could we be friends like we were when I was little?
Or would he throw me away?

Remeber,his watch said
How could anyone forget?
The day they burned their house to the ground
I swear the world wept

Could we be the way we were,once long ago?
I really hope we can but he seems distant
Everyday I try but now I'm left to cry
Will I be also left to die alone?

He's more then my friend and I'm more to him then just a girl
But will he be able to forget and move on?
I don't think any of us will...

This is about Ed and Winry's feelings for him.It's not too good but I hope you like it,anyway..

Nicely done. ^^

E l r i c

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popani_rocks
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Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 10:14 pm

idreamofgaara

If I could cry these tears that are locked up in my throat
Would he hold me and tell me it's okay?
Could we be friends like we were when I was little?
Or would he throw me away?

Remeber,his watch said
How could anyone forget?
The day they burned their house to the ground
I swear the world wept

Could we be the way we were,once long ago?
I really hope we can but he seems distant
Everyday I try but now I'm left to cry
Will I be also left to die alone?

He's more then my friend and I'm more to him then just a girl
But will he be able to forget and move on?
I don't think any of us will...

This is about Ed and Winry's feelings for him.It's not too good but I hope you like it,anyway..

holy sh**! that's good!!!!!!!!!

Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 10:21 pm

The Unthinkable

I did the unthinkable today
I took some chemicals
And drew a circle with some unknown symbols
Put my hand on the edge
And hoped for the best...

What came out of my efforts?

Gone is my little brother
Gone is my leg
Gone is my innocence

And in front of me?

A pulsing creature that's supposed to be my mother...

I did the unthinkable today...

Do you think that everyone around me
Will ever forgive me for trying?

*this poem is about how Ed feels about human transformation...hope ya all like it!!!!!! ~^^~

popani_rocks
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DJ Dream

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Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 4:15 pm

Memories Marked
My past is sad, my mind corrupted.
My life was killed, murdered without care.
My heart was ripped and torn to pieces.
My world was crushed, and all I could do was stare.

My mother, her words caring and soft,
Was stolen and never came back.
She wasn’t there to heal my wounds.
She wasn’t there to give me what I lack.

My brother, his eyes kind and gentle,
Is a reminder of a sin I made.
His life swept out from under him.
It was stolen for my own gain.

My friends, how nice and sweet,
Are all forgotten and left in the dark.
They want to help, but I push them away.
They sit on my mind, memories marked.

My past is sad, my future bleak.
My life was killed, blood all around.
My heart was ripped, destroyed.
My world was crushed, and I didn’t make a sound.

This is a poem about how Ed's life is. It's how he feels and how he thinks he's messed his life up himself.
It's not very good, but I was bored and a little sad.

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