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Roxas Can Fly!
Captain

PostPosted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 1:07 pm


Gaia Username: Bombad
Character name: Trap (and Aku)
Age: 9
Sex: Male
Location: Hollow Bastion
Affiliation: Heartless
Physical Description: Trap is Human, wears a white shirt and blue pants, heartless markings are on his head and shoulders of his sleeves (which, can be hidden for short amounts of time, making him seem like a normal child).

Aku is a ball shaped heartless with one eye that hovers near Trap.

Weapon? Trap’s only has 3 abilities, summoning heartless, summoning a barrier (doesn’t last long though), and teleporting of short distances (one every 10 minutes). All his offensive abilities come from Aku, who lends magic to Trap via telepathic orders, although Trap tends to talk out loud at times. Trap and Aku can use magic together, but Trap prefers to think the best way to use Aku rather than be involved directly.
Shield, Staff or Sword? Trap prefers the shield, as he puts up defensive measures to think up a strategy before attacking. Aku rather prefers the Staff, as Aku provides magic to Trap.
Who are you?
Trap began life on an unknown world (or as Shepry Cure would know it as “The Barren Wasteland World” as it was found later). This kid’s name was Coblen, and he was considered a genius at the age of 5. At the age of 6 he learned to hate everyone in his world, every day everyone is nice and congratulate him and praise how great of a genius he was, but even with their kind words, he could tell they were envious of him. He hated the adults as they lecture him like they knew more than he does somehow.

Meanwhile a heartless that was the size of a tennis ball came hovering in, it was lost as it accidentally teleported in this world rather than the destination it was called to. It felt an attraction to a small boy who treated it like a friend, but it wasn’t long before he felt the power within this small round heartless.

At the age of 8, heartless marking showed up on his body and cloths as the heartless swarmed the world. Coblen then renamed himself as Trap, and threw away his memories of the world that once was home, all he cared now was to gain power to keep himself as a child forever, so he would not become what he hates. He names his small heartless companion Aku, a year after his world’s destruction, Trap and Aku together head towards Hollow Bastion feeling the presence of other heartless that could further Trap’s goals.


Sample: “The way I see it we need more hearts,” Trap said to his floating tennis ball companion, “the more hearts acquired the stronger you become, or at least I hope that is how it works. Once you become powerful enough Aku, you can give me immortality so I never have to grow up to become an adult.” The heartless seemed to have moved about energetically at the idea of gaining power and more hearts, “You saved me from that world Aku, as I saved you by destroying it. Good riddance to them.” Aku seemed to agree, bouncing up and down, then it glanced to the right. “Ya, I see them, what are those nobodies doing out here I wonder?” Trap only had learned about them recently, but he knew that the sightings of a Nobody usually means it is followed by an Organization XIII member, and they are always trouble, well, more trouble for Trap, “come on Aku, lets go see what they are up to.”

Upon following Dusks, Trap found 2 black clothed figures who seemed to be arguing about something, “just as I thought Aku, Organizerz,” said Trap. One of the blacked dressed figures looked up and saw Trap and sent Dusks after him.

“Lets find a more suitable position Aku,” Trap said to his heartless, as he moved away from the Dusks.

“Your not getting away this time boy,” one of the cloaked figures announced, and launched fire spells at Trap, the other watched waiting for his turn, and a bit bored.

“Force shield” yelled out Trap, who really didn’t need to yell out the name, but the 9 year old in him thought it sounded cool, “dang, he hits hard, I wont be able to keep the shield up long,” while his opponent was getting another fire spell ready, Trap glanced where a rock was and made a short teleport over to it, while the fire spell whizzed by where he was.

“Now to do something about these Dusks, lets see…” giving telepathic orders to Aku, the tennis ball heartless moved toward a group of Dusks and casts watera on them, then preceded to cast thundara causing increased damage due to the water. After its victory, it began to glow, casting fire-bomb spells near groups of Dusks. Afterwards, Aku returned to Trap who came out to face the Organization opponent.

“Ok, Aku lend me some magic, I’ll cast a gravity spell to keep him in place while you pulverize with blizzard, let’s go!” said Trap, beginning his attack
PostPosted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 1:54 pm


Well, I do like him better. ^^ Although I have a few questions before I vote either way.

1. Is he from the future?

2. Why would the Orginization be after him?

3. How powerful is this child?

4. What group would you want him to be in, or would he be solo, or help Polkana?

And I think that's it for now.

Daye Chan
Crew


Bombad

PostPosted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 2:47 pm


1) He is from the present, his home world is found in the future as an unpopulated world, thus barren wasteland.

2) That was just a sample and I couldn't think of much than have him fight some random Organizers xp I assume they would have some conflict up to this point at some point since the kid has had a year to gather hearts for his heartless, and the Organization probably heart gathering at the same time for Kingdom Hearts.

3) He himself isn't all that powerful, his heartless is the source of power however. He will probably grow in power as fast as Sora will, and being a genius the same plan probably wont work twice. While the sample had him casting lv2 magic, he probably can only cast lv1 currently, having only 1 year to be with his heartless. His summoning power is based as much as Sora's group as well, the heartless get stronger as he himself gets stronger. Mortimer is probably stronger than the kid right now.

4) He'll probably help Morty and Polkana, the keyblade would be problematic in his path for immortality. I was actually planning him to be with Kairi's group for their duration in Bastion, acting like a normal child so he could surprise them later.
PostPosted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 3:17 pm


Well all and all, I do like this character. My vote is: Yes.

Sugichi
Vice Captain


Shade of Polkana

PostPosted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 3:21 pm


Hooray! A well thought out heartless. Huzzah and Hooplah all around! I have been hoping someone would make a good heartless. Gale was such a disappointment.

I votes Yes!

I wonder what we can do with you... as the whole world has gone team crazy maybe I could make some sort of World traveling team to go with you. Morty will pull the strings from the castle of course. But once Ares calms down and maybe Nergal, they could tag along with you. Of course you still have to meet Mortimer. Let the scheming begin!

*Evil laughter fading into the distance*
PostPosted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 4:27 pm


A character after my own heart. Yes. heart

.... And the pun was not intended. D:

Desdemona Winchcombe
Vice Captain


Bombad

PostPosted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 7:48 pm


I'd vote for myself, but I feel that would be cheating lol
PostPosted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 8:10 pm


Well a lot of us voted for our own cahracters. It's alright.

Daye Chan
Crew


Bombad

PostPosted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 8:19 pm


I'm one of those honorable idiots who would vote for the opponet if they were indeed better than I am.

< xp
PostPosted: Wed Nov 08, 2006 12:17 am


I had some questions, but Daye pretty much took care of them, and I'm too tired to remember anyway... I do, however, remember and know (since I read through the profile a couple times now) that overall I would vote Yes.

soo~...

Yes

Zen FallPaw
Crew


Jezix
Crew

PostPosted: Wed Nov 08, 2006 12:49 pm


Eh, well I do like this one better than the last one, even though I do have some minor concerns. But they aren't that big a deal, so I suppose I can vote a yes on this one. 3nodding
PostPosted: Fri Nov 10, 2006 7:02 pm


This is a great character. I really like the depth. And there is an element of weakness to him, in that his power is derived from something that isn't himself. It means that he isn't all powerful, basically. I'm voting YES! But I do wonder... there's heartless markings on his head, but does his hair cover it, or is he bald, or what?

Also... we can vote for ourselves? Like, it counts!? Why wasn't I told this!

Ameko no Mori


Bombad

PostPosted: Fri Nov 10, 2006 7:55 pm


The marking would be on his forhead, he can basicly temporaraly invisible the markings which is more of a one trick thing if the charactors found him out.

Plus it has a chance of wearing off in the middle of something, which would probably cause those "Run to the restroom" moments so he can redo the invisible marks.

And ya, hair and eyes evade my Descriptions of charactors sometimes burning_eyes , basicly neat brown hair and brown eyes would cover that little hole.
PostPosted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 8:00 am


That answers my question. ^^ And it doesn't change my vote lol

Ameko no Mori


Bombad

PostPosted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 7:32 pm


Comon! Just 2 more votes! We need another heartless to keep team 2 busy smile
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